| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 02:57 PST
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Thank you, I'm glad you like my reviews because I just love your writing! You can make my heart clench or leave me breathless with laughter. I can't tell you enough how much I enjoy each and every chapter (and I will get to your new story as soon as I get home from visiting my sister...at least she has internet! LOL I don't have to be deprived while I'm away.) ----Kagome is having a hard time losing her privacy to a hovering and over-protective InuYasha. Aww...more cuddling. Just can't help it...the poor guy has a lot to make up for because of his hard life. *sigh* ---Ah ha! Time to hunt down the notorious monkey-beating Oro! And are those stars in a certain monkey's eyes when the gruff hanyou promises him that, "Oro won't lay a fucking hand on you, ever again." Another case of secret hero worship...definitely. On to the next chapter...
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Title: You should be punished TOO!!!
Reviewed By: Sari15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The one is for the EVAAAALNESS of the author to inflict a PUNISHMENT on each of her hentai beta's....*cries* So...Kouga's looking to get his head removed for killing his mate?...can't say I blame him though. Something tells me he should be okay. I see too much Sesshoumaru angst coming with the 'rebirth' of Kagura. By the time the perverted 'butterfly (moth)' finally is defeated, Sesshoumaru will be more then happy to let Kouga have at her...unless he wants to do it himself. But the star of this chapter was poor Ichisaru, Inu is doing a good job helping the poor monkey deal with his problem. I am SO impressed. But poor Inu just found out his WORST fear...even with Kagome there helping, he CAN'T fight the moth whore! POOR INU! How's he gonna kill her????
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 18:48 PST
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Go Kouga! That woman made a fool of him. Does Kouga still see her as Kagome? He's 'free' of the toxin now isn't he? But I got the impression that he still sees and smells her as Kagome.. but then again, he knew she was hanyou. I think Sess would forgive the whole killing-of-the-mate thing with her being evil - Sess thought so too. I just love your writing - and you give us so much too! Thanks Sue!!
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Title: bananas
Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:58 PST
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aww i almost feel bad for oro, not quite but almost.... and poor InuYasha... Hisa is just pure evil .... im so waiting for the angst to come =) ... thanks so much for continuing to share these wonderful stories with us... being able to read these after a long day is so relaxing =) to end this review on a happy note ::MONKEY SHAKES::
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:50 PST
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Neat chapter. I am really worried about those two. Hope you plan to help Inuyasha to be able to see what Hisadaicho really looks like soon. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:42 PST
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It just gets messier and messier, doesn't it? LOL. I'm really interested to see how you wrap up all the loose ends of this story. All i know is it's going to be beautiful.
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Title: kagz
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really dont know how how i can thank you. i dont know how you manage to update so often.. i really appreciate both your writing and your efficiency. i greatly admire you. ^_^ thank you for all the work you put into these stories.. especially this one, my favorite of all the stories of yours, and anyone elses if read on mm so far. thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 16:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly don't know how you do it... Chronicles was the first fanfic I've ever read that drew a tear or two ^^; All of the stories that I've read of yours so far are very well written and very enjoyable to read. To top that off, you update frequently (Updating on your vacation in a cyber cafe? THAT'S dedication!). Excellent work!
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 14:35 PST
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Ya know Toga, I have a feeling THAT argument, is already a lost cause.....
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 14:06 PST
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hmmmm, since you've now stated that according to youkai law, murder of a mate means you forfeit your own life, I'm curious as to whether Sesshoumaru would really kill Kouga if he managed to off Hisadaicho. Just cause the death of Hisa means so much good for everyone else. Sesshy may be cold (though I current find that to be arguable ::howls::) but he's very reasonable. Not that I want Kouga to steal InuYahsa's thunder... I just find myself doubting that Sesshoumaru would kill Kouga. Lol, maybe I'm too optimistic. Well, being my normal hentai self, I'm eagerly anticipating more action... of any sort... between anyone... even if it involves tails... ... ....... hehehe, don't hurt me!!
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Reviewed By: silver_angel_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 13:39 PST
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okay, thanx for clearing up my questions! can you clear something else up for me? how old is shippou? i dont think it ever says EXACTLY how old he is... since he's a full youkai wouldn't that make him age slower? so he could be 40 and look 10? and who is Hakkaku? one more thing, when does this story take place? like how long after naraku's death? keep up with the great work!
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 12:33 PST
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Aw, poor InuYasha. He'll never be able to kill her. WAIT!! I get it now! The only way InuYasha will be able to kill Hisadaicho is if he gets rid of the toxin so he can see her as she really is and not as Kagome. But, in order for him to do that, he has to act out his dreams, which means some interesting things are in store for Kagome and InuYasha's future. Hehehehehe.
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Title: I love your works
Reviewed By: kane-sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 11:21 PST
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Sueric, all I have to say is wow! I abosolutely love your latest InuYasha fanfic! I've read Purity, Chronicles, and now Metamorphasis. I'm not done reading it yet, but I have a question. What does Kikyo have to do with InuYasha's erotic dreams (which by the way are perfectly depicted)? Other than that, I think I understand your plot. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 09:32 PST
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aww, poor Yasha! We know he feels like that, and how evil of Hisadaicho to use it against him! She's just so wicked! I must confess, I loved this chapter, though I really was hoping to see some Sesshoumaru/Kagura here. I love how you're portraying them! ::Happy sighs!:: Great job, and can't wait for the update. I saw on the msg board that you've got a double lemon coming up? Ohhh, can't wait . . . really can't wait . . . .!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok, enough fangirling. Back to business, right? Keep up the great work, and know that it is very, very appreciated! Better than the best to you and yours! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: ixchen(sorry if this is more than once) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 07:56 PST
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sorry, sorry, sorry, i didn't mean to review the same thing over and over.. but it was telling me it didn't go through.. so sorry. i loved the chapter.. can't wait for more. okay if this is the second one i'm sorry. it still says it isn't going through..
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