| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Title: Oh No!! That's so unfair!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 17:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You work so hard indulging our addiction for your stories and your computer dies...and You STILL manage to post...On your birthday to boot! WE LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! *cries* You are so generous to all us silly people. "Happy Birthday to You, Dear Sue!" Consider yourself Hugged! ----Yay, Sango and Kagome cleared the air between them and laid to rest all the doubts. ---- I hope that Kagura can find a way to either break Hisadaicho's hold on her or at least warn Sesshoumaru...somehow. I wonder if the geas against revealing her real thoughts apply to everyone or just to Sess? If you can't stop something head-on, you have to come at it sideways. Hmm... ----InuYasha and Kagome are still heavily embarrassed about the night before, but it looks like they may be getting past it. Oh...the angst...the ANGST!! Hehe, can't get enough!
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 17:12 PST
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Oh! How utterly terrible! I am so sorry that it crashed on you! And you lost everything? Oh dear, that cant be good. I feel so terrible that you have to rewrite it all. I wouldn't be able to remember what I had written. -I have a terrible memory- but I bet it will all work out. Oh! And I'm SO sorry that it had to happen to you! On your birthday no less! I hope that it wasn't ALL bad...Best of luck! And Happy Birthday!
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 16:31 PST
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GAHH! NO! I would have sat down and balled my eyes out for HOURS if I lost everything I wrote. Actually, now that I think about it, once I did loose about thirty short stories I wrote. *crawls into a corner and rocks* Anywho, I loved this chapter! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha! You may have to invent a new version of red! Perhaps 'Bloody Naraku Red'. Nah, that's not as funny as 'Monk in pain red'. Well, I'm outta here for now! Hope things work out! Computers are EVIL! Sayonara! -Sarah
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 16:17 PST
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that's awful.i'm sorry to hear that.. i would wish you happy birthday but that would be wrong. so i hope that your birthday turns out better. how's that
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Title: Awww....
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 16:01 PST
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*hugs* Sorry about your computer. Happy Birthday! Yanno...I'm still angry with Sango for going psycho on Kagome. But that's just me.
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Title: PERFECT SCORE!
Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 12:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well now that My mm. org is up and running again, I can bug you twice as much. lol. Gomen for what that baka did with the typo daiben, anyway I do have to give you crap for not updating yet, granted you do a lot with updating every day but it is my job as a reader to make you laugh at my stupid impatient ass and then flame me. lol. by the way, do you already have the fic written? because you get it out so fast.
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 11:29 PST
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Well, that would have to be emberassing. Walking in while he was uhhh.... yeah...... anyways..... nice chapter, hope you get some more out soon...
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Title: I have one thing to say about this Mates chapter....
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 09:46 PST
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TEASE!
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Title: ::fanning slightly heated face::
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 09:29 PST
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my My MY... we finally got to see a full toxin dream. lol, I doubt any of us were quite expecting that though. I think in this case I feel worse for Yasha. I mean, come on, he's an unwillingly being forced to "::squeaks:: be touching it" lol and hell, after all that he doesn't even get any relief! Then add in the embaressment factor and... Well, Kagome had it easy ::snickers:: besides, she was intrigued... I don't think she would have moved if Buyo hadn't made some noise in the hall. Maybe this will make her... more willing to be adventurous later, ne? hehe
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Reviewed By: heniya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 21:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You are a really awesome writer--not too many fanfic authors can pull off a story with so many chapters and still keep them interesting (or canon, for that matter). I've been simultaneously reading "Chronicles" along with this one. Great work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nursie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, you never cease to amaze me. Again I am so happy I found this fic, I can't thank you enough. This chapter was a very welcome reprieve from a very stressful day. I mean hell, no one likes the dentist right? *lol* You characters are sincere and written very well. As a fic writer myself, I totally understand how you feel about reviewers that tend to nit pick everything even to the point of pointing out mistakes that aren't there. They have a lot of nerve flaming your fic. They are not even in the same category as your artistic brilliance. Hugs Nursie
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Title: **blush** o_O.
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 18:08 PST
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I think I know what Hisadaicho needs.. Kagome's soul, being such a large and powerful thing - but it needs to be - ah - 'ripe'? or something... so, she's going to give them a push to - um 'ripen it'. Cause she wants/needs Kagome's soul to bring back her koishi. That's why she killed Kikyo, to restore Kagome's soul to her, so the whole thing would evolve at once. Am I close at all??
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 18:07 PST
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I so thought it was going to be the actual lemon. But no. That's alright. So anyways what will Kagome do now. I mean see Inuyasha like that, the poor girl. And then Inuyasha, how is he going to be able to look Kagome in the eye again. Hope for more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: kolohe (mm can bite me) On: January 12, 2005 17:07 PST
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if there are two things that seriously annoy me, they are people who don't understand that 1) they need to check their "facts" and 2) this is a world of FANFICTION. i keep up with the manga at ear-tweak(dot)com, and i own up until episode 130-something (i can't remember the exact ep) of the anime (all in Japanese btw... i'm a nihongo no gakusei). a quote comes to mind... "it is better to remain silent and be thought a fool, than to speak out and remove all doubt" anyways, great chapter sueric. c'mon, inuyasha & kagome... you COULD act out those dreams and destroy the effects of the toxin... *nudge, nudge*
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Reviewed By: ttc. On: January 12, 2005 16:44 PST
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updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupd ateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate...ur awesome =) can u update more than once each day by ne chance? hehe
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