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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 › » ] | Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 08:36 PST
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By the way - readers of Sueric should check out her original work A Rakehell's Honor I'm addicted to it!
| Title: ch 51
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 08:32 PST
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When will Inuyasha realize that he can tell Kagome ANYTHING?? *sigh* so much worry, so much tension, makes the fluff fluffier. Oh and the baby a miko too, poor Sango - she has been slapped with the reminder that Marisaiko isn't a baby from her body. Miroku will help her see there is no way that Kagome would 'take back' what was given. I do, however, feel the tension rising from Sango. Nice to see that Sess will be getting some, I'll bet he's waited a long freakin' time.
| Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 08:18 PST
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ff.net is acting funny lately. :-/ Your comment about Hisadaicho's human time raises a nice hope for Kagura's freedom--she can't obey Hisadaicho if Hisadaicho is temporarily Emi again. :) Nicely done, as usual.
| Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 07:31 PST
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ooooh.. what was inu planning, pushing her on the blankets like that? XD ooh i love it! we know what he wants. ^_~ poor guy. when will he get it?
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 00:56 PST
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Oh he SOOO was NOT going to stop! LOL, I think dog-boy is fed up with the game and wants to finish it. Everytime I've read this chapter my hentai mind keeps inserting strip poker.... weird, ne? Oh, oooh, next time, they could play for kisses ^_^ yesh, yesh, I LIKE that! Hehehe!Since Old Seer is still breathing, she must still have a role to play... either that or Hisa is being portrayed as 'not that horrid as to destroy a helpless old woman'.... nah, too late for that. Lol, hell didn't she give some old geezer a hand job and then suck out his soul? Shameless hussy! Ehehe, sorry, couldn't resist--I adore Hisa =) Well, InuYasha and Kagome are kind of at a standstill aren't they? There's no point in chasing Hisa 'cause Yasha'll just make a fool of himself again and I'm not seeing InuYasha having a change of heart and pouring out his dreams for Kagome's perusal... at least, not anytime soon. So I wonder what kind of trouble they'll get in next time...
| Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: January 07, 2005 20:39 PST
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lol, i knew that you wouldn't put a lemon up this soon! but you sure did surprise me with the old seer knowing hisadaicho as a little girl. So now im guessing hisadaicho's 'lover' is the tainted aura surrounding the jewel. is he like possessing her or something? because its seems like he talks to her through her mind. Also, you kindof got me confused on this but... if Kagome has that shot that makes her unable to get pregnant and it is a new moon or a full moon night and they decide to get it on... would Kagome still be able to get pregnant?
| Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 20:22 PST
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YESH!!! I was right!!! Hehehehe! And I thought it was gonna be this chapter too! So close, InuYasha. SO CLOSE!! Curse you, new moon! So, Emi, huh? Sounds like another pitiful soul they have to rescue. Speaking of pitiful souls, the girl who was transformed into Kagura, will she be returning in any future chapters? I mean, you gave her a name and everything, so to me it sounds like she could be a big part of this story. And this mysterious "man" is getting on my nerves. The more you talk about him, the more I become annoyed with not knowing who he really is!! IT HAS TO BE NARAKU! Eh, every evil-doer is Naraku to me. "Ku ku ku..." :D
| Title: oh wow
Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 20:05 PST
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I haven't reviewed up until now. I honestly just spend the day waiting for your update and find myself waiting once it does appear so that I leave myself angry I haven't read it yet. I just love this story. It brings up questions I have often asked myself that would test my character. I think it is incredible that you can write chapter after chapter that leaves people spell bound by your writing when I find it hard to get a chapter out after a month and a half. Ok, enough with the laud... Is this horrible person that took Emi away from the old seer connected with the Sikon no Tama? Is this person connected with Naraku? Or possibly Onigumo? Is Kikyo's soul truly at rest or is she going to reappear when we least expect it to lend a hand? ok, just a few questions I had! Keep up the good work! Sara
| Title: pickles
Reviewed By: gahhhhnesss007 On: January 07, 2005 20:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so much angst and fluff together, i'm lovin it =) poor inuyasha, how will he ever figure out a way to kick Hisa's ass when she can always pull the scared Kagome thing against him? At least Kagome can kiss and make it all better =) hmmm, i think Kagome should use those cards in a game of strip poker =P hehehehehe then our favorite puppy may completely get it that she wants to be with him. Another stellar chapter as always, see ya at the next one. =)
| Reviewed By: Sari15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 18:53 PST
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To Sue, Another hentai beta review just for you! (wow...I shoulda been a poet!) I am in NEED of a cool drink of water after that....that.....ah hell WHY was it a New moon??? This hentai beta was drooling in her seat....human child be damned....he shoulda done it!!! LOLOLOL You know I totally kid you. You have the knack of putting the lemon in at the perfect time. They have had the sex talk...a couple times now...so I imagine our lemon should be coming sooner than later. But the fact that hisa couldn't kill Old Seer...that came as a surprise! So...Emi used to be Old Seer's apprentice? And now she's Hisa...the moth pervert?? Excuse me....BUTTERFLY hanyou.... LOLOLOLOL Everything seems to be falling into place...as usual! WONDERFUL job!!! Wonder what you have in store for us NEXT chapter....I mean....what could POSSIBLY beat the POKER KISS???
| Title: Eeches
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 16:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww you kno, this makes me not want to come back and read until its all done! im so anxious to read the next chapter. this is incredibly good, i love it. and i agree with some of the reviewers, i dont think sesshoumaru would give a fat damn if kouga killed hisadicho. he didnt really see her as her, he saw her as kag, so i mean, technically it shouldnt count. kinda like bad adertising...^^ lol keep writing!
| Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 11:20 PST
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wow... that was QUITE the teaser. lol maybe youre just playing with those of us waiting for some fluff (yes i admit im addicted to all sorts of fluff) :P anyways, i like the twist with Emi/Hisdaicho knowing the Old Seer. I got a question though, does "Emi" still exist somewhere deep down in Hisdaicho? I'm kinda seeing it as almost a multiple personality type of deal.. and in my head at least its quite funny. ~Kat
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 10:42 PST
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Okay, so the tainting of the jewel has nothing to do with Hisadaicho. Alright, that narrows it down...and you said it didn't have anything to do with Kagome's feelings, right? Hmm... now what could it be, what could it be? Damn, you know I can sometimes get a jump on where your stories are going but...there are plenty of times you leave me stumped. I love you for that, by the way. Too tired to contemplate it. Argh. Tease.
| Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 09:22 PST
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Why do I get the feeling that Inuyasha and/or Sesshoumaru already know this 'Koishi' person.... And I wonder if we'll be seeing Totosai in this fic........ Kagome's almost 20? Wow...... you'd figure she'd have changed in the five years.... oh well....
| Title: 3:30am...I am so gonna pay for this tomorrow-er today.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 03:34 PST
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Well, looks like Oro is no longer a concern...to anyone. Not a nice way to go, either. ---Kouga has deemed Hisa's death is worth the penalty of "killing your Mate" if it comes to that. (personnally, if he does manage to kill her, I think that the only beef that Sess will have about it is that 'He' did not get the priviledge of squashing Madame Butterfly himself!) Now Kagome is going to worry more about Kouga...Oi! -----Hisadaicho's death may also be the only way to actually free Kagura, since it is her blood that binds them. ---InuYasha's ego gets slammed by hateful words of prejudice again. I hope he can eventually heal, learn a little self-worth and leave the past where it belongs. And he still can't hurt Hisa as long as she looks and smells like Kagome. (completely understandable and quite a handicapp) Can't wait for the next chapter!
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