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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:34 PST
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Poor Kagome, still not ready to handle being with the baby. It will be a long time before that kind of pain will ease. And I've always loved the times when InuYasha's true caring nature comes out, no matter how gruff or embarressed he might act. He can be very insightful. I know he has a good head on his shoulders...he just needs a little anger management and some manners pounded into him. But then again, I like him just the way he is. It's the contrasts that make him such a complex character. ----Hmm...I wonder what Hisadaicho is "Hatching" now? LOL! ----Another supurb chapter.
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Reviewed By: inu2kag86 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 18:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fics. Thanks for writing something for me to look forward too. I've read all of your fics and enjoy them immensley. I rated this fic as a 10 for plot and enjoyment. You really draw the reader in I hope that you always keep InuYasha and Kagome together in pairings because you write them so well together but I see how that could get boring. Anyway I really like how this fic has so many plot twists. You really are a very talented writer. I don't know how you do it writing two fics simutaneously and update daily. You deserve a vacation. Thanks for your contribution to the InuYasha fics. Enjoy your vacation. A Fan
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 14:49 PST
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YAY!! I can review now!! No more LeeLu, though. Well yea it still is LeeLu but with numbers. Eh, doesn't matter as long as I get to review! Haha!! I laughed when Kagome was trying to lie to her mother. "Uh, a bear youkai. Yea! That's what it was! A bear youkai..." LMAO!! I'm shocked that InuYasha actually had the balls to face her mother with the truth. And all on his own, too. *sniff* He makes me so proud! LOL. You need to enjoy your vacation. It's Christmas! You should only have to worry about getting last minute presents and cursing yourself for never starting to shop in September when everybody else started!!! Oh wait...that's my drama story. LOL Enjoy Florida's weather! God knows I'm hating New York weather. "Merry Freakin' Christmas. May all your troubles be blown away by 50 mph winds and freezing rain." LMAO!
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 14:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, what are you planning, Sueric-sama? It makes me nervous. Bad enough that you seem to be plotting something that has to do with Kagome and the baby, but this girl really worries me. Just what is Hisadaicho (it's her right?) planning on doing to this girl, and WHY do I have the feeling you're loving every minute of this? Hmmmmmmm….. =Diane=
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Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 14:31 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hisadaicho is plotting something nefarious, isn't she? I also have the feeling that you're reintroducing some sort of baby-related angst for Kagome. It is easier to avoid a problem if you're removed from it. Not quite as easy to deal with, however, when faced with it. Something tells me you're not done, not at all. Awesome, as always! I am enamored of your talents! I suppose that since writing is something you truly love, even a vacation can't seem to keep you away from it, right? As with all things that are passions, even the writing, itself, can be cathartic. Fantastic job so far! God bless you and yours! ~Squalleon
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 13:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D!! I finally got through those chapters and i have to say that was pretty good! Hehehe the bear youkai did it. HA! its like trying to blame it on the dog! It never works! HA!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 07:19 PST
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i really enjoy reading this story. well happy holidays.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 01:45 PST
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Backing up Darkless Vasion and quoting Sue: yes, that's right... I don't think we've ever seen a butterly youkai... only moths. Sue asks why we all think Hisa's lover is a butterfly youkai... I'd say he was some sort of nobility: (chapter 8) "she had succumbed to all manner of beings...castle servants, wandering samurais, whomever her koishii could find to satiate her newly awakened desires"... Who else but the nobility would have access to a large variety of people that Hisa describes using to satisfy her lust? Just a thought.---review time now--- Poor Kagome and poor BakaYasha... having to go through why the clothes are shredded. It's too funny that he's protecting Kagome from her mother...lol, sitting in between them like Mama is going to pounce and devour her young ::snickers:: And What, prey tell, is our pretty Hisa up to now? A maiden? What would she do with a maiden? Why does this worry me a great, GREAT deal??
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Title: FYI
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 00:04 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been speculated more than once about Hisadaicho's Master..."Was he the villain from the first movie...?" Two other villains were mentioned as well; when InuYasha transformed and decimated a bunch of bandits and the time the Inu-tachi were cocooned. Well...Hisadaicho is, as Sueric has specified, a "Butterfly" youkai. Those other three were "Moth" youkai, the one from the first movie was originally from China, (tagging along during an invasion, of whose father was sealed by InuYasha's father), and was no relation to the other two from the series. Just thought that I would clear that up. ----Back to the review---There you go again...trying to knock me off my chair with hilarity. When Kagome's mother found her suspiciously clean yet shredded clothes and InuYasha was cringing just out of sight, wishing that Kagome was a better lier...oh man! LOL - Then InuYasha stepping up and taking full responsibility with his actions shouting "protect Kagome!!"...from...her...Mother. Again and again stepping between, as if her mother was going to go ballistic or somthing. I loved his thoughts while he was still out of sight, when he prepared himself to "dash in, grab Kagome and hightail it" if he had to. ROFLMAO!!! I see I'm gonna need to put a seatbelt on my chair. Or maybe a 5 point harness...helmet might be good too. Now where did I put that bubble wrap...?
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 20:06 PST
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AAAGGG no must have more. I have today off (national holiday for the Emporer's b-day) and I don't want to clean my apartment. Sigh. This is a great story...like all your stories. I love the tension and emotion. sigh Come on guys tell eachother you love the other. :D looking forward to a new chapter soon. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 19:15 PST
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Hmm... what can I say? Nothing new, but I love leaving you reviews! So, I'll just say another great chapter. Poor Kagome! She must be mortified now! *giggles* I wouldn't be surprised if one of these days her mother suggested birth control!
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 14:01 PST
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:)....hehehe! fixed it! dont know what i did but i can see 'em all now! :) now...I MUST READ ALL OF THOSE CHAPTERS!!! lol! btw u have to be bout the best writer i have ever seen...err...read..er..the best writer whose stories i have read. There we go. :D
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 13:51 PST
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EEPS!! i feel so left out! my comp is mad at me and will only show up to chapter 28! :(:( and it says that THAT is the newest chapter! AGH!! i feel so left out i NEED to know what happens!!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 21:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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heheh. no doubt.. one of my most favorite chapters out of all of your work. i loved it!! ,,^-^,, you're so good to me...
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 20:01 PST
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First, thank you 2 times! Aaahhh! **Sigh** To be in Kagome's shoes when she's at the waterfall... **Biting fingers** What a scene! ^_^ You have a knack for describing things **Bigger sigh** Now I can't wait for the lemon... or multiple limes. (What? They're cliffies for the lemon and bilding the anticipation "au max"). Now, back to reality, what are you planning now? **Looking suspicious at the screen** Usually, when you put something good like this, for BakaYasha it's one step foward then 2 or 3 steps back... hmmm... Can't wait! ^-^ - MouF -
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