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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 › » ] | Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 12:43 PST
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yes.. that was wonderful.. and i'm finally back on my beautiful computer....*sighs* okay, till later..
| Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (sni, lo siento!) On: December 06, 2004 12:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you once again, for making it worth the wait. Hopefully things get better for you soon, because you seem so upset in your A\N! I think I'm confusing Hisadaicho's servant, not Aki, what's his face... drawing a blank on the name here, (the one she slapped and he didn't change color at first) and the BIG human that "monkey shake" boy used to serve. Why am I making this connection? Am I TOTALLY out of it and confused, or is there something I got that nobody else did. Tell me if I'm being stupid, which I probably am! I just remember you saying there was a connection or you alluded to something between monkey boy and Hisadiacho Thanks!!! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
| Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 12:16 PST
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please excuse me for opening up this review in a digression back to grade school "Kagome and InuYasha sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G" I would continue the song but the baby is already in the picture, so it would be all out of order. =P Such a sweet fluffy goodness chapter, well except for the EVIL part with Hisa, but that's to be expected. I wonder, how much Miroku and Sango will flip out about Kagome sleeping in a tree? I sooo can't see them liking that at all. So, I guess Kouga will be coming back into the fic. I wonder how Hisa is going to trick him? ::sigh:: He's so much brawn and little on the brains. Can't wait to see what happens next! =)
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: December 06, 2004 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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ce again, you have completely floored me with the flow of your words. Holy crap...and i mean it. Honestly, reading the scene where Kagome finally kisses InuYasha (which was such a great plot device to bring them to that tier) I had to reread the first paragraph five times, four of which out loud. The words you incorporate into your writing and the way you let them flow together, it's some of the best writing I have EVER read (mind you i am an English major). You have such creativity and elegance behind your words that's its awe-inspiring. A kiss meant to delineate her, a subtlety meant to show her that she belonged to him, the basest reaction of a primordial desire tinged with the cautious hold of iron control. She reveled in the tenderness wrapped in the secrets that were whispered from her body to his youkai, from her mind to his humanity, from her soul to his combined heart. WOW!!!! This honestly deserves some type of literary award. I hope things are well with your father in law, I know times like those are not easy. 13 kids and you still manage to write. Simply amazing.
| Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: December 06, 2004 10:12 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha... yeeesss, inu-kun... kissing is rather nice, isn't it? *sigh* i wish inuyasha would kiss me like that... your description was sOo sweet!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:24 PST
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Awww...as first kisses go, that was Uber-sweet! And then the little tiff...then InuYasha's confession - 'You're different...you're not you...I don't want it that way.' - Wow! If it gets any WAFFy'er I wouldn't be surprised to see pink fluffy clouds floating around. You have got to be one of the biggest romantics around. *^-^*
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it just keeps getting better and better, i loved it! :P
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 06, 2004 08:22 PST
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So very sweet. My favorite chapter so far. I'm a complete sucker for the mushy stuff. Thank you! Hope things are improving for you!!
| Reviewed By: Lena17 On: December 06, 2004 08:17 PST
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Hmm...InuYasha showing a soft side. Interesting......^_^
| Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 07:28 PST
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awww, the kissing, hehehe. Loved that. I laughed out loud at the butteryfly lady's reaction to our loveable Sexxhoumaru, hehe. He, annoying someone else other than Inuyasha? Never! hehehehe. Perfect, just perfect, can't wait for more! Great job!! Take care!!!! ---Aitu--------PS Other's are having problems not being able to sign in??? I can't seen to get signed out!! And I didn't sign in in the first place!! hahaha
| Title: the KISS!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 06:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
… If I had a first kiss like those … I'd never have let go of my first boyfriend, trust me. I don't know how you manage to capture such wonder in words. It escapes me. Was it worth the wait? Oh, yes. God, yes. I think one of the things you capture about the entire Kagome/InuYasha dynamic is the beauty and the depth of their emotions, and I think that is why I, like everyone else, wait with baited breath for your chapters! Sueric, I don't know how you manage it, seriously. You've created such vivid imagery that cannot be discounted. It is lush and full of emotion. I always- always- come away from your chapters having experienced feelings of one sort or another. It is impossible not to feel it all. The way you capture the smallest details and add such a significance to the simplest touch or look is amazing. They say that the eyes are the mirrors to the soul. If that is the case, then your writing encompasses even more than that. Wow, Sueric. Just Wow… Now if you'd just write a Sexxhoumaru fic … I'd be the world's happiest girl! =Diane=
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 06:18 PST
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I have but one thing to say - awwwwwwww! *sigh*
| Reviewed By: inuinukagskags On: December 06, 2004 04:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so good i'm just dieing here!!!
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (can anyone else NOT sign in? at all?) On: December 05, 2004 22:07 PST
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you just HAD to stop right there didn't you.... ::sigh:: if they kiss, I'm sure it will be worth the cliffie. Sesshoumaru refused Hisadaicho... that will NOT make her a happy butterfly. Will she continue after Sesshy or will she realize that's hopeless and move on to new prey?
| Reviewed By: kagz On: December 05, 2004 20:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gahhh!! ::crazy happiness!!:: this could not have come at a better time..!! thank you.. so much..! i love you!!!!! ,,,o_o,,, .. thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!! ( im so excited.. damn i hate cliffhangers! @_@ but i love you!!! )
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