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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 › » ] | Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grat job! :P
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 06:41 PST
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loved it as usual.. can't wait to see more.
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 07, 2004 05:53 PST
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A vacation?! Good for you (bad for us). Such a long one too. I, for one, will really, really, really, really, really miss you. Metamorphosis is one of the high points of my day. Hope you all have a great time. Don't answer if I'm prying but where ya going? Are you bringing the kids? Guess so, it being the holidays and all. Looks like they'll miss a lot of school though. Have fun.
| Reviewed By: blazingnymph7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 22:50 PST
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oh my god, all i couldsay is AWWWWW!!!!Yasha was just to cute. Besides its about time he did something right regarding Kagome. Nowif he could finally tell the others his true we would be on the road to recovery.
| Reviewed By: surreal life_inuyashalover On: December 06, 2004 22:02 PST
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wow. one word. WOW. ...well what ya waiting for? keep writing! ^_^
| Reviewed By: shotgun_105-gotta love that country On: December 06, 2004 22:01 PST
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this is gotta be the best chapter ive read yet! i think i could scream right now! they finally kissed and they confessed that they had the same dream! but... i am really really REALLY eager to find out what Hisadaicho is really up 2... but *sigh* i guess i'll guess havta wait till the next chappie. too bad i have the patience level of zero. grrrr. well can't wait to see whats gonna happen next!
| Reviewed By: inu-hanyou06_cherryblossom On: December 06, 2004 21:57 PST
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ohhh!!! yeah!!! they finally kissed! this sooooo made my day! can't wait till next chapter! im still lovin' it! tata.
| Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: December 06, 2004 21:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've finally out-done yourself, sueric! the kissing scene was so... oh i just don't have the words to describe it! it was a beautiful, spectacular picture in my mind though. im glad they finally kissed, but im sure now that they have, the road ahead of them will be alot more rough. the thing i loved most about this chapter was the sudden change of storyline. throughout this entire story there has been alot of sexual tension, sexual acts, perversion, and sexual 'situations'. but in this chapter you showed the emotional side of the characters, the loving, caring, very precisely detailed side. to me this chapter was a great enlightenment. you showed the tenderness and endearment of that kiss, and for once showed very little sensual thoughts or actions. i mean, what's love if there is only the mind's eye to give you dreams? inuyasha explained to her exactly why he didn't want to see those dreams. and it was because they caused him awkwardness by dreaming of a figure who didn't seem real. and that was a very very great lesson that i learned as i read on. he knew that it was wrong to dream of something that was not right to imagine. because in his mind, he saw her as a 'sex toy', in a matter of speaking. this may not mean much to other people, but it matters to me that you put emotion ahead of need in this chapter. so thanx, sueric and keep up with the good work!
| Title: wirte more
Reviewed By: bloomluvchick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
need more. you have such a good story and I check everyday, well for the last few days, to see if you wrote. It's amazing to see how many good writers there are.
| Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:08 PST
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They kissed! YAY! Now they just have to do the other thing and my plan will be complete! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! j/k
| Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 16:10 PST
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*twitches* Lucky Kagome! *sighs* Nice chapter, can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: December 06, 2004 15:40 PST
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mm.org deleted my account (i ranted about it on your yahoogroup, i think) and it took me a long time to get back on track, so i haven't gotten to reading this earlier. thus my late review. haha! i've only gone as far as chap20 (i read chaps 1 to 20 in 4 bloody hours straight, dammit!). just felt like a cheater and that i ha to review. ^_^ what to say... kagome's decision to carry that babe... it was very noble of her, and while i completely approve, it would not have been something i would have considered myself. serves to show one how good the girl is. and since it's miroku and her kid, in essence, would the child have amazing powers or something? hisadaicho... she's a great character... even though she's actually a villain. on kikyo's death...i personally used to despise kikyo with a passion, but your stories made me see a good side of her, and now i'm just plain affected by her death. oh whatever. bloody great story! i never imagined that inu could actually raise his claws against kagome, but you pulled it off with bloody good style, darling! i'll shut up now and get to reading the rest of the story... so you won't have to endure any more of my god bloody ranting. thank you for sharing your incredible imagination with us through your stories, and i hope your flamers go to bloody hell. ^_^ god speed sueric!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (oi! Finally!) On: December 06, 2004 13:53 PST
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*does a little dance* Yaaaayyyy! They at least kissed! Now I'm happy. Ugh, Hisdaicho. I don't know who I went to see her die at the hands of more, Sessy or Inu-Yasha....hmm, maybe both? Yes! Perfect!
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: December 06, 2004 13:17 PST
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"Cold," huh? Yea, I'm sure he was really cold. LOL Yay! So excited! Now she knows how he feels about those dreams. And here I thought they'd be fighting more and avoiding each other's gaze. Hehehe. Is Kagome going to have this baby anytime soon, or is it still like another few chapters away? 'Cause I'm dying to know how everyone's going to react to this baby.
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 13:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::sigh:: makes me think of my first kiss... lol, it really did. Very sweet, shy, and kind of scared. But enough, everyone else has 'gushed' it to death. So I'll talk about Hisadaicho, eheheh. Now there's a mood killer! We can all safely assume Kouga will dream/fantasize about Kagome, but will Hisa leave it at that? Or will she go get some of her weird kicks by playing the 'seductress Kagome' act live for Kouga? ::shudders:: I'm not sure I wanna see that. I'm not the biggest Kouga fan, but I don't wanna see Hisa get her claws in him either. Ugh, he won't mate her will he??!!?!?!?! ::chokes:: If Hisa gets Kouga with the powder, goes in person to fulfill his wildest fantasies, and Kouga mates her... what happens when InuYasha next runs into Kouga?! o.0 Ohhhh, this could get REAL oooglie....
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