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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 › » ] | Reviewed By: kira_sama On: December 10, 2004 03:28 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow a very good fic, really enjoyed it. Yet it I feel sorry for Kagome giving up the child. i kno it's not hers and yah she did it with her freewill to make Miruko and Sango happy but still (and i hve to admit i kinda felt angry..(dunno why>_< please forgive me >_
| Reviewed By: The Rose Society On: December 09, 2004 23:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just thinking about Kagome's situation and sadness (which is completely understandable and even expected), and a thought occurred to me: the baby will have died, like 460 years before Kagome was born. I mean, technically, with having happy endings, Kagome and InuYasha should be together, but this doesn't necessarily apply to the other characters, and depending on what time they 'settle' in...unless you have her continuously able to use the well, but then, the Shikon no Tama...anyhoo, this is why time warps were always so confusing. Even though Kagome might be able to accept that the baby isn't hers, etc., the idea that someone from your body would die before you, technically @_@ Heartbreaking. Psychology grad student, so I ponder these things way too often. Again, wonderful chapter and fic. Have fun on your vacation!!!
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: December 09, 2004 21:29 PST
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I was wondering about the poisonous powder. Since the first person that Kouga was affected by was Hisadaicho,(did I spell that right?), will the real Kagome have the same effect on Kouga and end up shaking a vial of blood every night for him too? Inu and Kouga, hmmmmmm, that's a lot of babysitting; makes for good angst! Ne? I love the supportive Inu, shows his inner caring self that he ussually keeps hidden. Please have a wonderful vacation, relax and come back with lots of wonderful and exciting ideas. Thank You, Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: December 09, 2004 20:49 PST
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MWAHAHAHA! *dodges objects being thrown at her head* SAVE ME! LOL Too bad no one knows my email address OR my real MM.org name! Yes that's right! I have a different name that I can actually sign into. Although, I never am signed in because MM stinks and never signs me in. Tends to be a common problem around here, right? I knew Kagome was going to start feeling depressed and a bit afraid of the baby. Just not as afraid as InuYasha. Haha! I couldn't stop laughing at his reaction. I can see him hiding behind Kagome...LOL! I'm scared of Kouga and what he's planning. I can see it now...fighting, blood, scratching, hissing...oh no, wait. That's a cat fight. LOL!
| Title: best yet Sue!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (can't login) On: December 09, 2004 16:12 PST
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This is quite honestly, not only your best chapter, but I think the best bit of writing I've ever read from you. And that's saying a lot, cause you're beyond phenomenal. ^_~ There's really nothing else I can think to comment on. I'll just ask when we get to see what Hisa is thinking about all these recent developments?
| Reviewed By: Maril On: December 09, 2004 14:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best chapter yet. It was happy, beautiful, and sad all at the same time. IT's good that Kagome had the negative feelings. It's only human nature to feel like that, and it would have been a far worse sign if she hadn't felt like that. It would have made her seem heartless. I mean, this baby was a part of her for 9 months, and to just, give it away, no matter what for, would hurt. Especially for someone with Kagome's loving, caring personality. It should be interesting to see what happens when Kouga gets there though. I mean, she's in an emotionally fragile state, and he's coming to kill the one person keeping her sane, and take her away from her friends and the baby. For once maybe she'll get mad and yell at him?
| Reviewed By: Maril On: December 09, 2004 14:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best chapter yet. It was happy, beautiful, and sad all at the same time. IT's good that Kagome had the negative feelings. It's only human nature to feel like that, and it would have been a far worse sign if she hadn't felt like that. It would have made her seem heartless. I mean, this baby was a part of her for 9 months, and to just, give it away, no matter what for, would hurt. Especially for someone with Kagome's loving, caring personality. It should be interesting to see what happens when Kouga gets there though. I mean, she's in an emotionally fragile state, and he's coming to kill the one person keeping her sane, and take her away from her friends and the baby. For once maybe she'll get mad and yell at him?
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: December 09, 2004 13:52 PST
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awww, Inuyasha's being so nice and all. more kissing! hehehe. please? Maybe it would make Kagome feel better if they got to work on making babies of their own. *grin* So Kouga will be after Inuyasha soon? I'm betting that he will interupt something er other with Kagome and Inuyasha? I'll call Vegas and check the odds, hehehe. Poor guy-- he's in for a heart break. So I'm also betting that Inuyasha wont let him have the vile shaking thing, or will he let Kouga poke Kagome's hand-- nor will he also the other cure *cough* so looks like the only option is to kill the butterfuly lady? hmm, Keep up the great work!!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Take care ---AituAi
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (countdown to no more Metamorphosis updates...*sniffle*) On: December 09, 2004 13:40 PST
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I'm so glad that Kagome is having a bit of anguish over the baby thing. We all know she's a good person, but she's certainly not a saint. Kudos to you for not making her into one. As for Koga...wow, I almost pity the poor bastard. But really, he should know better. And he says he loves her LOL.
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: December 09, 2004 12:49 PST
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Oy, the sadness flowing off of Kagome *sniffle* breaks my heart. It must be time to have Kouga show up. Where did Fluffy go??
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: December 09, 2004 11:21 PST
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Kagome's feelings after her separation from the baby are completely understandable and InuYasha's insightfull support is very touching. I would expect nothing less from them both, (especially with you in the driver's seat) and you have a gift for picking out just the right names for your 'new' characters. ----Kouga is on the rampage (temper and hormones - LOL) and gunning for InuYasha. Uh oh, a blood vial for Kouga too...shaking it every night...having to stay near; I don't see InuYasha liking that at all. Nor do I see him allowing the OTHER cure for Kouga's dream problem (if it ever gets discovered and discussed) either. They're just gonna have to find Madame Butterfly and snuff her. Oh, god...can you imagine how bad Kouga's dreams would be if InuYasha & Kagome opt out for the optional cure and, because of the conditions you have laid down for the 'spell' on how it works, Kagome smells like dog-crap in Kouga's erotic dreams? Talk about sending someone over the edge! ---I bow once more to your wonderfully convoluted plots and your infinite skill at putting the Inu-tachi through the proverbial wringer. *^-^*
| Title: tiarr
Reviewed By: tiam On: December 09, 2004 11:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have a nice vacation but please post soon. I am really enjoying this story and I did enjoy the chapters of the pregnant Kagome and Inuyasha's reaction. I love the discussions between them abt the kissing. really cute and humorous. I also want you to know that I just finsihed ""Chronicles" ( I spent 3 marathon days reading it) I would say that it will be included in my top ten fics that I have completed this year. I am glad you are writing a one-shot for that story. Anyway I enjoy your writing.
| Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko (can't log in dammit all to hell) On: December 09, 2004 09:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm trying not to be overzealous (whoo, ego-stroking!) by rewarding you will all those tens, but DAMN! This is THE best piece of Inu-Yasha fanfiction that I've ever read. I'm not just saying that. I truly mean it. You are up to date with what is going on in the manga (got to love Ear Tweak), no one is out of character (as in, Inu-Yasha is acting shy about his dreams instead of humping Kagome's leg), and you have a truly despicable villian (a la Naraku). This is what I would write if I could find the damn time (I have 3 kids...just had my daughter, Kagome, in January, so I understand the needing time away thing, lol). This is really, really amazing. And this reminds me that I never got to finish Chronicles (another damn good story), so I have more reading to do. I definitely look forward to more of your pleasant writing!
| Title: wonderful, touching and angsty
Reviewed By: kalaong On: December 09, 2004 08:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter yet. A while back I remarked that it wasn't like Miroku and Sango were just going to pull the kid out of Kagome and kick her out, and I was right in a sense. And also completely wrong. In this chapter you showed how much it hurt her to help those she loved start a family-they would never dream of doing such a horrible thing to her-instead, after nine months of feeling this child move right under her heart, she would have to push it out of her body and mentally sever as many ties with it as she could-not even allow herself to touch it. All her instincts as a woman had to have been saying(babyminefeedholdlove), and she had to sit and watch a a trusted elder to immediately take the baby, still wet with her own fluids, and give it to the one she promised would be its mother. She might have said it was Sango and Miroku's baby for the past nine months, but as you said, it just wasn't real to her until she watched Kaede take the girl from her body and put it in Sango's hands. Now she's hurting, and I bet it will last quite a while. She may be happy at making her friends happy, but it still hurts. Biology can't tell the difference between Mom and mother, and she just got a good strong taste of the latter and what it might have meant to be the former. I bet she's wondering what it would have been like for it to have been InuYasha's baby in her womb, and for it to have been put directly in her hands. But we all know you'll give Kagome just that very soon!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 09, 2004 08:37 PST
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Yea Inuyasha! He's is being so swwet about Kagome and the baby. Makes me happy. Hmmm, so Kagome could be her own great-great-great grandmother? Yikes! I'd like to take a moment to submit a pathetic plea. Between your vacation and my travel schedule, I won't get back to this fiction until January. If the last chapter before vacation is going to be an angst-fest-cliffie please put a warning in the beginning like you do for lemons. I really enjoy this story and want to end for the year on a fluffy, happy note. Thank you! Hope you have a great time! As always, thanks for sharing your work with us!!
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