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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 › » ] | Title: Not SATIN
Reviewed By: monsterkittie pretending to be logged in On: December 10, 2004 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Take this rating and multiply it! Because a 10 isn't high enough. Enjoy your vacation, but I wonder....are you sure that SANTA wasn't the one who made you to it? Merry Christmas to you and your kids (including the oldest one of them all...he's the one that shares your bed at night and is your closest friend)...
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not...ah, you know) On: December 10, 2004 13:26 PST
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Oh man, what a time for Koga to bust in one them. Not very observant is he? Can't tell a willing kiss when he sees one? Eh, blinded by obsession. Why though, would Koga smell like Kagome? I know, know Hisadaicho can change her scent and appearence in accordence to her powder victem, but I thought that was all in their head? Why could Inu-Yasha smell "Kagome's" scent on Koga? I'm a bit confused by that.
| Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 13:23 PST
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how cruel!!! leaving us on a cliffie!!! It's going to drive me crazy. oh well. do enjoy your vacay, just got one question... where are hahhaku
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: December 10, 2004 12:38 PST
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Yet again, you have chosen another great place to leave off on. Oh, you do your evil dance, all the way to Georgia! hehehe, just teasing. Great chapter. Loved the kissing, hehehe. I'll just play the last scene in super slow motion so that by the time you get back Kouga will be in mid-air, aiming at Inuyasha. hehehe Great job!!!!!! ---Aitu
| Reviewed By: kolohe (not signed in) On: December 10, 2004 12:21 PST
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haha you are sOo evil to leave it like that before your vacation. hm... hisadaicho's powder must be pretty damn powerful to make kouga believe it was real, not just a dream. *sigh* i LOVE the way you describe inuyasha & kagome's kisses. so... sensual, and yet you manage not to overdo it. anyway, enjoy your vacation... you deserve it! oh, btw... in your a/n at the end... "SATIN" (satan?) made you do it? hehehe.
| Title: vacation!
Reviewed By: toxicpowder007 On: December 10, 2004 12:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh, Hisa's handywork is starting to show. Poor Kouga this just isn't going to end well for him no matter what happens. Especially since Kagome can't Osuwari Inuyasha anymore. I wonder, how will this fight end? I know you can't answer that but I know there will be a battle bc both boys are just looking for a reason to beat the tar out of the other. So, what will Hisa do now if she loses either Kouga or Inuyasha? hmmmmmm? Well, enoy your vacation! EAT MORE POCKY! lol
| Title: vacation time!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate ^_~ On: December 10, 2004 11:32 PST
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lol, I'm leaving for winter break today too! What a wonderful way to go-- that has to be the sweetest kiss EVER. And Kouga HAD to interupt....grrr, make me like his even less. I guess you kinda have to pity the guy, but did he have to show up now? Since he's here, I guess the situation begs the question.... what are they going to do about Kouga? Will they recognize Hisa's work? Have a wonderful vacation!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 10:15 PST
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Awww, WAFFage. Sweet, deep feelings between InuYasha and Kagome while on the trail. How you are able to capture the sheer innocence of their relationship while indulging in sensuality just keeps flooring me. And now Kouga has to step in and ruin the 'mood' too! And Kouga suspiciously smells like Kagome to further confuse things. ----Satin made you do it, huh? Hehehe...evil on sooo many levels. Oh, the delicious Evilness of Cliffhangers! Have fun!!
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 08:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEKKKKK! Cliff hanger, I LOVE IT! :)
| Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko (still unable to log in...grrr) On: December 10, 2004 08:01 PST
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Once again, this was great. I admit, I'm on the edge of my seat because, GAH, no updates for a while, and boy, what a cliffhanger. Lucky you--I love cliffhangers. I'm sure that Inu-Yasha understands by now that Kagome only has eyes for him. And as I've always figured, Kouga must be the densest male on the planet. What the hell does he hear when she says, "Kouga-kun, I want to stay with Inu-Yasha," anyway? I'm positive it has something to do with "big and strong," yes? Also, poor Sesshoumaru, and yes, poor Kagura. I knew many chapters before she died that she was going to because Takahashi-sensei was very good at foreshadowing it many times over. I can't help thinking though that those two would have made a very beautiful and very interesting couple. I miss Kagura. Anyway, another great read, and I'm thinking that Inu-Yasha is going to introduce Tetsusaiga to Kouga's ass. And thanks for the congratulations on my daughter! Funny thing though...the Hero21 fanfic Inu-Yasha Yahoo group thinks my Kagome is a youkai because she has pointy ears. Hee hee. I rather think she looks kind of like a certain Vulcan from Star Trek. I wonder if she'll ever grow out of them? Till next time!
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 07:45 PST
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evil.. that was just evil.. but i guess we can let it slide.. you are one of the only authors that update daily..but to leave it there..cruel. i hope that you have a very good vacation. everyone needs one.. till you come back.
| Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 07:27 PST
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For whatever reason, ff.net died right after I reviewed Purity 2, so, here I am on mm.org. *shrug* Very nice. I always enjoy a little fluff when it comes to Inuyasha and Kagome. :) The cliff with Kouga and Inuyasha rivals the cliff you left in P2-both of them are going to be fighting more seriously than they ever have, and I'm not sure what would break them up this time. May your vacation leave you refreshed, revitalized. . . and ready to write more for us pathetic hangers-on. ;)
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: December 10, 2004 07:25 PST
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Thanks for the great break point. Cliffie without being angsty. Fantastic tender kissy scene! I think I can survive till January on that. ... maybe ....ooh, the withdrawal.... On the bright side, I might actually get a bit more work done when I'm not checking my email every 5 minutes to see if there is a new update. Aw, who am I kidding. I'll just spend the time rereading what's already been written - especially the shamelessly fluffy bits. Heh.
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 05:57 PST
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First - I love the way you write romance scenes ... the words you use just make me *sigh* and *swoon*. Second - I feel sorry for the reviewer who said leave it at a cliffie because now she really is going to get hate-mail. And lastly - Have a FANTASTIC vacation! You deserve it and we will survive - though the quality of life in said survival might not be that great *grin*
| Reviewed By: whiteshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 04:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories! You do a great job of writing! Keep up the good work!
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