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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 › » ] | Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 19:28 PST
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*cannot help but giggle* Oh la la. Kagome must be mortified! Poor girl. I can't say I blame her for being upset that the dream ended. Well, I'm off to see about chapter five of Redemption. I'm glad you're enjoying your vacation! Sayonara -Sarah
| Title: I had to borrow words from Bertha---rotflmao!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:47 PST
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A slightly edited cut from Bertha (chap.68): "Kagome? You want a spoon?" "Huh?" "A spoon, wench, a spoon . . . ." "I wasn't-" "You were-- eating me up!" ::smug grin:: Sorry, could not resist-- it was just TOO perfect! An absolutely beatifully written, emotionally charged chapter with too many shades of red to count! LoL, I'm almost curious to how I would react if my clothes were shredded... hehehe, I don't know what I'd do, but I can see my mother's face if she ever found out ::snickers:: Now, I wonder if Mama gets to see...could be interesting. What's happened to Hisa? If this cure works, she'll not have her wolf to toy with anymore... so... what IS she up to now? Is she still after Sesshoumaru?? Cause she SO needs to leave my Fluffy alone... ... ......
| Title: Uber Wow!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 12:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, Thank you for posting again on vacation. Your dedication us unmatched. ----I cracked up at your Caution sign "Uh, err, umm… Lime?" like your weren't sure...LOL! **wipes tears** ----Your writting is absolutely wonderful; full of emotion and tenderness...I could go on and on. You really make my day. ----Second, as for the Lime itself; well it had to stay a lime, it's still too soon after the birth for any, shall we say, southbound activity for Kagome. But limes are good...semi-safe. When they woke, the best word for Kagome is "Mortified"! Hehehe.---Third (and most important) when Kagome accidentally caught InuYasha bathing, I was totally floored at your description of the scene and of Kagome's thoughts about him. I know that you have 'mad' writting skills, but this scene...I've never come across one even remotely like it in any other fanfic I've read. (And I've read tons; of which yours are the cream of the crop!) There are countless times where we explore InuYasha's thoughts about how wonderful Kagome is, how special she is to him. And also visa versa, with Kagome's thoughts about him. But they never went to such extreme emotional depths or exposed this raw sincerity and to top it all of, tastefully done. One thing I love about your stories, is that no matter what kind of fruit may be in the offing, never do you resort to crudity; not of thought nor speech. I had to tell you how stunned I was at the image generated by this touching scene. It will be hard to top. * | Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, ni-i-i-i-ice chapter! What a dream! Woo hoo! Poor Kagome, though! What a way to wake up! For that matter, bet Inuyasha wishes they stayed asleep just a little bit longer, ne? Ah well, cest la vie! Fantastic job, as always, dealing with their feelings! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us! Your dedication amazes me, and I hope you are enjoying your vacation, such as it is! Hurry back! We miss you! =Diane=
| Title: Madrigal
Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 09:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you prove not only to know your writing, your anime, and your grammar skills, you also prove you know something about music, as well. Impressive. Is there anything you can't do? All right, onto chapter. At first, I must say, I worried that this 'dream state' would turn into something a little more ... off base and perhaps a bit more ... perverted than it should have. I must say, however, this was right on there. Sweet and innocent even with the more sinister backing of the toxin, the Inuyasha-Kagome dynamic shined through! Excellent! Keep it up! Fantastic, and can't wait for your next update, whenever it comes! ~Squalleon
| Reviewed By: haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEKKKK..... This is one of my fav chaps, (Smiles & Hugs myself) great job, keep them comming, #1 Fan! :P
| Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The temptation is getting a little bit to much to handle for the two. Somethings about to break, and when it does it's going to be huge. Any who, hope your enjoying your vacation. You spoiled us with the everyday updates, now that they aren't coming in as much we miss them. But take your time, and I can't wait to see more. :)
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:23 PST
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awesome.. yay..
| Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 05:34 PST
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OOOOHHHHH how sad and poor sango and waaaa and the flalers(flowers)and waaaaaa. and Kagome and and and (yes i'm crying thats why this review doesn't make since) 'Orion
| Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:39 PST
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I'm back and just catching up on Metamorphosis. Last I read, Chronicles was at chapter #97. So I'm not finish with the others stories. Finally past the first 3 months off being pregnant and the bouts of nausea... euhrg. Back to the story. They didn't shake the vile!!! I know that Kagome knows of the other "cure" but does InuYasha knows it too? I don't remember if Kaede or Miroku told him. Interesting... Their first time :-D Will they dream doing it and then wake up in the morning and it's done or will they wake up before that? hmmm And what AFFnet means? AScom and ATnet were explained in Chronicles but don't remember if AFFnet was because I didn't bookmark it. Hope to catch your update soon because after Christmas Eve, I will have to go to a public library to have access to the net. And then, you won't be in vacation anymore and I know I will have a lot to catch up to. But keep it that way and don't change. You're to good to be true and I want to keep on dreaming! ^_^ Might be a bit early but happy Holidays to you and your family! - MouF -
| Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I'm sure you've heard this already, why ARE you writing on your vacation? Beautifully executed though I have to wonder if Kouga will really have the brains to use the cure. Let's hope so. Thank you for not showing us what Ginta and Hakkaku are dreaming of. That would have been a bit scary, I think. ' ... sound of metal meeting bone, a squishing noise, a suction giving way ... ' This has to be one of the most disgusting yet wholly effective descriptions I've read in a long time. Congratulations on that. Again, another wholly enjoyable chapter! Keep up the great work, and thanks for being so dedicated! ~Squalleon
| Reviewed By: FireTigerSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 20:09 PST
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I love your story so far. You've got me hooked. ;) But ack! Inuyasha and Kagome forgot to shake the vial in the latest chapter! Hmm...methinks sleeping together with Inuyasha's dreams may prove for an interesting chapter next time. Love your fic! FireTigerSoul
| Title: lol, sorry, I have no feelings of inspiration
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 14:56 PST
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oooooh, there was no vile shaking.... the hentai betas win again!!! Actually no... you did this one all by yourself, didn't you? bwahaha...::grins::
| Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 14:37 PST
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*dances* Another great chapter, Sueric! But what are you doing? You're supposed to be on vacation, not worrying about us silly fans! You're too good to us! *grins* Thanx for mentioning me as a recommendation! I feel all special and stuff now! *giggles* I hope you're enjoying your vacation! Have fun and relax!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 12:44 PST
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So glad to see a new chapter! *sighs* Koga's head is full of rocks, isn't it? Anyway, more info on Hisadaicho is always welcome. Although...it makes me nervous, what new twist are you going to throw in?
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