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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 › » ] | Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 09:46 PST
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I dub this chapter; "Endless Battle with the Dreaded Zipper" LOL I've had zipper problems before...but I've never tried vasolene! Hehe, that's a new one on me. Days stuck in the same shirt...ick. Kagome's comment of, "Let me know when I start stinking..." had me rolling. I have a feeling that InuYasha's interpretation of Kagome's 'stink' would be biased. She'd probably just smell more like herself to him. I've heard that some even crave thier partner 'sweaty' (I wouldn't know, not being able to smell at all *shrugs*). ---- Uh oh, Hisa's creepy henchman has finally appeared at the village. Part of me wants Kaede to send Miroku and Sango out after InuYasha and Kagome to warn and help...but then I consider the baby and whether or not Sango would want to leave her. Thoughts are swirling...Miroku could go alone, but do they even know which direction they took? And Iwazawa...a samurai, undead or not...Miroku's good, but is he that good? ---- I love how your plots have so many possibilities. Great chapter.
| Reviewed By: parvatilotus (cant sign in cuz everytime i do the internet goes kapoop, yes i said kapoop) On: January 14, 2005 09:38 PST
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O_O I'm sorry about your birthday, but maybe because of it the rest of your year will be kick ass :) *crosses fingers* lmao poor computer tech dude, i can only imagine the thoughts running through his head when you started bawling... *inner thoughts* oh no... she's crying.. wtf am i supposed to do? do i pretend i don't see it? do stay quiet? or do i run away screaming? ok man breathe... play it cool play it cool.. ok we can do this.. * ive never met a man/guy/boy/male human that doesnt panic (no matter how well they hide it) at the sight of a crying woman. Just one last thing, I just want to say thanks for still updating even through your vacation and the birthday blues, ive been reall sick lately and your chapters have been the highlight of my day :) You're the best! ~Kat ps. MMorg is being funky again, i tried to review before and it didnt show... so if i end up reviewing twice i apologize.
| Reviewed By: Morly On: January 14, 2005 06:32 PST
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I'm so sorry about your computer dying. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
| Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 05:30 PST
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Happy Birthday Sue! Sorry to hear about your puter crashing like that. I learned my lesson the same way; now I backup every little thing. Though, karma might actually still be on your side, think of it as a small period of rest from the hustle of updating and writing. Back to the review; least Sango and Kagome has somewhat sorted out their concerns and are back on track with one another, and some of the tension between Inuyasha and Kagome has broken. So Kagura has tried to tell Shesshoumaru about her dilemma and Hisadaicho's hold on her; if maybe we she knew Hisadaicho's night of weakness then she could probably manage to say something… but not even we, the audience, know of her time-of-month. Still, the plot is still thickening and now Inuyasha thinks he has another lead…but, they still have yet to encounter Iwazawa and his quest to break the blood-bond/veil. As if things couldn't get any worse. Wonderful update and you're still on top form even without your own PC!
| Title: Happy Birthday
Reviewed By: kalobagh@mediaminer.org On: January 14, 2005 04:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday, Sueric! Happy Birthday to you! How old are you now!How old are you now!How old are you now!How old are you now! I love your fanfics! (sorry i don't review much neva have time I read fanfics when I wake up b4 school @ 3:15 am)
| Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 03:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! You're really doing a GREAT job with this fic. The plot is brilliant and really exciting. I really admire how you're able to update daily (sorry to hear about your computer). I love the way you've developed the story and the plot so far, and you're great in keeping the interest and excitement on top. You manage to balance between angst, romance, hentai, humor and drama in a masterly way, and I really admire that in your writing. You're also great at devoloping the character's personalities as you go. It keeps the story from getting boring and gives the story credibility. It wouldn've been weird if none of the personalities had changed with everything they've been through. Still, even as you let the character's grow, you keep them in character and that's great too. You and your beta-reader(s) are doing a great job with the spelling and the grammar. It's great to read a story where you don't come across misspellings that annoy you simply because they're there. Give my compliments to your betas. You're all doing great job, and once again; HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
| Reviewed By: keifu On: January 14, 2005 00:04 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah..ur Cpu died..noooooo ohh please dats so bad. I wish u gud luck with it.. Wahh, I dunno Y but i kinda felt angry at sango when she said that kagome was trying to take Mari away frm her, I mean kagome gve her up just to make sango and miruko happy.. (arghhhh I dunt make sense>_
| Reviewed By: surreal life_inuyashalover On: January 13, 2005 21:33 PST
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ok... you got my hopes and dreams smashed into the ground, i actually thought i had saw THE ending, but everyone says im a moron so i guess just forget about what i said. but you can keep the my appreciation for all youve done for us, ya know updating and all... sorry bout the computer crash, it must be so irritating to do everything over again. im very amazed by how you manage to do so much... keeping up with kids, doing housework, updating everyday, writing, cleaning, puttin up with the hubby, taking care of yourself (good hygiene is always a good sign ^_'), bills, payments, and keeping your tempter in check whenever a reviewer flames you till there's no end, and most importantly having the patience with everything and everyone that i will NEVER have. lol, i sooo envy you! happy birthday, sueric! hope it was better than you described.
| Reviewed By: kya_kagome On: January 13, 2005 21:21 PST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT SHITTIN FUCKIN GREAT! What are we supposed to do now?! i thought you were different than everyone else! wahhhhhhhh!!!! i loved this fanfic and i was counting on another chappy! the suspense was killing me a mintue ago, BUT NOW ITS SLOWLY EATING AWAY AT MY BODY! >_< gggrrrrrr. happy. fucking. brithday. is. soooooooo. right. *grumble grumle*
| Reviewed By: chappy 56 On: January 13, 2005 21:13 PST
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Noooo!!!!!!! I feel for you my friend. I remember when my my prevous comp died on me it was horrid. Any-who, i just wanted to know that you fics are the best and HAPPY BE-LATED BIRTHDAY. I wish you the best.
| Title: oh no!
Reviewed By: firemaidenlovr (not signed in) On: January 13, 2005 20:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no! your computer crashed! that sooooo sucks! I'm glad you were able to update at all. Don't worry, we don't mind waiting and bearing with you until you got your chapters rewritten again. At least you got the plot all figured out already. well most of it, and certainly more than you have revealed so far. :) I enjoyed this chapter! so did you have to rewrite this one too? or did you get it back from one of your beta's so that you didn't have to rewrite it? just a little curious. Brenda
| Reviewed By: FireTigerSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 19:52 PST
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Aww....*pats Sueric on the back* There there, let it all out. I understand how a crashed computer can ruin your week. Lemme know if there's anything I can do to help...though I warn you, it'll mostly consist of me cheering on the sidelines with Shippo. On a more exciting note, Happy Birthday!
| Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap its been a long time since I reviewed this :P First of all Happy Birthday Sue, I'm sorry that your computer died *hugs* And as always I love how the story is going :oD You rock!
| Reviewed By: Theyeta On: January 13, 2005 19:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy B-day! Sorry it went so bad. Man, I managed to read all of this story in two days. It has to be the best one that I've read so far (and I've read alot. I have no life so all I ever do is read Mangas and Fanfics). It twists and turns so much. I almost cried a couple times too... Keep up and don't worry about updating too often, just as long as you don't leave us hanging forever :p Thanks for the story so far!! ~Love~ Theyeta
| Title: HAPPYB-DAY
Reviewed By: ladyg On: January 13, 2005 18:18 PST
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Great chapter. My computer is acting kinda screwy too. so I know how it is.I will be waiting patiently for the next one. ^_^
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