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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 › » ] | Title: So Sessho
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 12:53 PST
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Ah, how I love Sess, but just once I'd love to see him use elegance of action before warning and threat, but then again, if he did, the story would be over before all my questions are answered. Unfortunately, I have always failed at logic problems, and solving mysteries. Therefore I must wait until the finale to end my suspense. Sue, I read your author's note in answer to the anal retentive's message. Let me add my thanks to Angelica Incarnate that you haven't stopped writing and posting. Please try to remember that there are people out there who are so eaten up inside with jealousy that the only thing left for them to do is try to hurt and destroy. Just think, you have your own Naraku. Don't let them destroy your (or our) enjoyment of your excellent and HUGH gift. If I had to choose between a new chapter and chocolate, I'd really be in trouble. I'd be stuck in the middle for a very long time. Oh, buy the way, I read your new one shot, and I loved it. Made me get misty and laugh at the same time. I know just how they felt about the baby's being gone. I couldn't stand it either. I think I told you before that I haven't been reviewing much because I've been sick, well, I am getting better, though still way under par, and getting to read your stuff everyday gives me a wonderful little energy boost. Next time you get a review like that, just remember this. There are far more people that love you than the other. I'm one of those rooting for you.
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 24, 2005 12:13 PST
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I loved Hisadaicho's surprise when Sesshoumaru used Tenseiga on Iwazawa. Ha! The butterfly-slut doesn't know everything like she thought she did! Give her hell Sess!! --- Aww, poor slobbering doggie - LMAO!! That was too rich! --- Corny as it sounds, I love the way InuYasha loves Kagome. So sweet and all encompassing. Another final thought from Kagome, "You may be a jerk...but your MY jerk." ---I can't believe the crudity of that reviewer about the lemon. I thought it was supurbly done. The way you keep the emotion as the driving force behind one of the most intimate ways to express one's love to one's significant other continues to floor me every time. Matter of fact, to even call it a "lemon" and compare it to other citrus out there is almost an insult. You need a new term to differentiate your "love scenes" from the random "wham-bam-thank you-maam" banging sessions that other writers throw down, often with no plausible reason. A lemon is sour; I'm beginning to wonder why the term was ever instated. Words carry power, and the more skilled the writer, the greater the impact. Ignore the riff-raff Sue, You are a Wordsmith Extrodinare!
| Title: DOG SLOBBER!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 12:12 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmmmm, Sue your ability to write Totosai scenes is astounding. And the teasing going on between Yasha and Kagome is so cute! Sesshoumaru will get to the bottom of this, lol, though I doubt he'll get away without some pain. I have a question aimed at all those who review. I go and read a lot of the reviews on most of the sites (no, I'm not a crazy stalker, I'm just being a good beta and finding out what works and doesn't come across as clearly in Sue's writing) Do you guys read what Sue writes at the end of chapters in her A/N? You're asking questions that have already been answered. Answered multiple times too... just curious. Now... hmmm, how long will Yasha and Kagome be able to keep their little secret when they've got this great new teasing flirty quality to their relationship? And, besides what Myouga mentioned, are there any other hidden talents to this new talismen?
| Reviewed By: insane anime lover* not logged on* On: January 24, 2005 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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i thought that all demons marked their mates by bitting the neck. great story so far though keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 10:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your last chapter and as always it was awesome :o) dont let those people who bug you about the lemons get to you :oP theres plenty of stories for them to read on here, just keep doing what you're doing cuz you're a great writer. Ciao!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 24, 2005 08:12 PST
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Great chapter (as always). Loved Totosai. I think you captured his character spot on. Poor Kagura. I have faith in Sess' ability to figure this puzzle out and save her. Go Sess! Boy is Inuyasha going to be surprised when he finds out there are lots of ways to enjoy the company of a mate and that she will probably enjoy it at much as he will. As for the thoughtless folks who are not respectful of your work, ignore them. Just remember the internet is an amazingly powerful stupidity magnifier. It's just like television without the television part. Heh. Thanks for writing.
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: January 24, 2005 07:25 PST
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OMG! The whole visit with Totosai sounds like it came right out of a manga or the show. Kagome's embarrassment, InuYasha's impatience, and Totosai's vagueness. LOL - I sniggered the whole time.
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 07:09 PST
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i loved it.. glad that you are at it again.
| Reviewed By: sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 18:02 PST
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really great thats all i can say i am enjoying the romance of it all. i am a hopeless romantic. i know that this may be a stupid question, but can anyone tell me what baka means? ive asked and people think i am kidding and im playing around. i feel kinda dumb asking, but i dont know what it means, thanks
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:10 PST
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As you know, I've had a very hard time coming up with what I should say here in this review. Because of situations beyond the control of anyone, what I believe to be one of the best examples EVER of your writing has caused you far more pain than you deserve. I won't apologize for some idiot that is careless with words, suffice to say, we have moved on. I will say that I am SO glad you will continue writing, because I suspect that one of the most important parts of your soul would have died if you had stopped. The words you share are tied in with who you are and those who do not respect that should not open their mouths. The scene you created here not only was beautiful, passionate, and full of a pure love--there was still an innocence to it that only a master writer can bring to a situation like this. You have a rare talent with words, an intelligence that breathes life into any plot, and a heart big enough to support the talent and intelligence... and the heart is what keeps readers coming back for more. NOW... questions =) What phase of the moon are we in here? I believe it has been mentioned that there will be NO CHILDREN during Metamorphosis, ne? And if the toxin's effects are not broken... InuYasha will still see Hisadaicho as Kagome, correct? So that means they have to act out every aspect of any toxin dream he's ever had? What happens if Hisa manages to get the vial away from him and break it? Will he ever be able to see Hisa as Hisa? | Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: January 21, 2005 18:23 PST
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Beautifully described. You never seize to amaze me with your gift of phrase. I can not think of any thing to improve it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Will we get to hear of your current secret project? Thanks once again for sharing your talent, Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: Theyeta On: January 21, 2005 17:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!! I can't wait! I am so used to getting on and reading a new chapter each night... lol... you've spoiled me!! But thanks for the fluffy high!! (I hate it when in the second chapter people already have all that junk going on... makes it like a hamburger with no meat!) Thanks for all the plot but hurry back!!! KEEP WRITING PLZ!!!
| Reviewed By: =) On: January 21, 2005 14:08 PST
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awesome
| Reviewed By: osuwari00 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 13:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this might be the best fanfic i've ever read. I love this story. I am very impressed by its originality!! I cannot wait for the next update. The writing in it is really beautiful. You're a great writer.
| Title: Holy cow...
Reviewed By: Doctor Emmit Brown (not letting me login for some reason...) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 21:14 PST
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For the last 5 days, I have been reading this fic and Chronicles. I will admit that I originally started Chronicles because it had 'hentai' in the description, but I'm not a complete pervert, so I came to love the story. Holy cow... Do you realise that you kept me up until 2AM every night for the past week reading your stories? Anywho, after finally finishing Chronicles, I saw the preview for this fic, and felt that I had to read it. Once again, I find myself awake after midnight before I finaly caught up. You are an excellent writer. You have captured the characters very well, and have even, in my humble opinion, kept them in character in a time long after canon, and in situations that would never arise in the manga/anime. Not to mention that you have written two of the best fanfics I have ever read. Now if you will excuse me, I am exhasted. Keep up the good work! -Doc
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