| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Title: oops?
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen angel On: January 27, 2005 17:22 PST
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hey! the rest of my review didnt show up. I said, "maybe the doctors in the future know how to cure the toxins!!!!!" O.O
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Title: oh! oh! pick me!!
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen angel On: January 27, 2005 17:20 PST
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oh cool! wow, i really liked the ending to ch 65. XD awesomeness.. but how is she going to find a youkai doctor? XD gah! she needs connections. >,> hm... >
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Title: Guesses...;)
Reviewed By: Heart of Choice On: January 27, 2005 16:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right....explain rating. Yeah, well, skipping that, is the monkey dude a baboon? Cause he does the butt thing that baboons do, or at least I think they do. And since he is white and all, is he the playful form of Naraku? Or the demon form that Onigumo took over when he became half-demon? Also, is that butterfly's lover Naraku? Expecially with that comment from a previous chapter about Naraku's poision...or is that posion type common to all posion youkai and was not just a name given to Naraku's posion powers? Gemini
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 14:30 PST
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AHHH!!!! Cliffhanger. The "We need to discuass some things" or "I need to tell you something" usually does not end well. It just doesn't. Grrr. I'm not gonna be able to study now cuz this is going to be hanging over my head. Grr.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 13:40 PST
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loved it like always.. can't wait for more..
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Title: review makeups.... LOL
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 12:48 PST
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CHAPTER 64: Wonder what's bothering all the youkai... could it be Hisa is gathering her power and getting ready to go hunting for little mikos? CHAPTER 65: Yasha and Miroku's talk made my day... each day I've read it ^_~ And poor Kagome... lol, how embaressing! CHAPTER 66: *sniffles* How sweet! He missed her! LOL. I wonder if the fact that they are mates will leak first or whether the toxin news will leak first...well, your stories are always an adventure Sue! At the very end of the chapter, was Yasha trying to goad Kagome into trying? Kind of psych her up for purifying a village in a rude, Yashaish, round-a-bout way?
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 11:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thought I'd drop in another review. Is it just me or is there a little bit of tension going on between Kags and Inu? And I'm a little intrigued on what our boy Sesh has to say. He is a pain, ne? Anyway, the real reason for this review is simply to state that I, like many others, think that you are an awesome writer and simply cannot tolerate any who disagree. And I pity those who incur the wrath of sue. But woman, I simply cannot get my work done until I read your daily chapters! Do I care? Well, no... not really. Do my teachers care? Why yes, yes they do, though I wouldn't be surprised if one of them has read one of your fics. I dunno, just a hunch.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 11:22 PST
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I can't beleive I'm about to say this (because I hate it when people complain the same way about my perpetually short chapters) but I'm sad that this was such a well, short chappie. No matter, it was still good. I take it Sessy still has quite a bit of sway in the modern times, considering the doctor felt the need to tell him about Kagome's little problem. Can't wait for the fireworks in the next chapter. *smiles*
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 27, 2005 08:05 PST
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Uber cute; InuYasha admitting he missed Kagome. LOL And Kagome's right about doctor/patient confedentiality. Hehe, sounds like Sess just might get a mild reaming over that one...as if InuYasha's iration with his brother isn't bad enough, Sesshoumaru sticking his nose into Kagome's business...I can't see that going over too well. Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 27, 2005 05:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter not as revolutionary as the last but hey got to keep everyone from going into cardiac arrest from joy and excitment...Ok now i sound like i didn't like the chapter WAAAAAA I did i did...I'm just in a really bad mood...baka movie maker keeps freezing on me and ate part of my AMV (inuyasha/crossfade~cold) GREAT CHAPTER more por favor 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 27, 2005 02:23 PST
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That was a GREAT chapter. I love the youkai doctor bit. Yep totaly great chapter. now if only i could get sango to toss a boulder on Inuyasha for his bakaness(new word ;P) TALK TALK TALK LOL waiting for the next chapter. Oh oh are we going to get to hear more about the ledgend? humm humm that would be cool. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER, On: January 27, 2005 00:55 PST
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Sooo.. find a reliable youkai doctor...and soon, hmm? Does this doctor know something else about Kagome, seeing as how he knows her history... hmm, am I smelling something coming up? ... Anywho, damn good story !! :)
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 00:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In rating the story just the sames as your other chapters: always a top notch 10!!!. Your writing tends to give me such an in depth look at the loving relationship between Inu and the other characters. It just delights me thats all. I am glad that you enjoyed my review on fan fiction. I dont really have any questions but your story does make me ponder some possibilities. I guess that reading a chapter in your story is like opening a present every day and I like being happily surprised. so asking questions would kind of spoil it for me right now. But I would like to ask you something about the evil you touched on earlier that tainted the jewel in the story. Will you address that later and also the little monkey. In what part of the anime is he from? okay thats all and keep writing from the heart. Thanks again. A.
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Reviewed By: samna On: January 26, 2005 23:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down* This story makes me crazy, (in a good way). Everything flows together so nicely, there is plenty of well written emotion and the story soooo well done. When I decided to finally open up your work and read it, I was bopping myself over the head for not getting to it sooner. However, now I'll be driving myself nuts wanting for the next installment. ^-^ Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 20:00 PST
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yeah! dont give up!! keep writing! dont bother with the selfish ones. They think you write for them.. I think you should write books! ah, great stories.. excellent.yes.. im not making much sense right now but.. >< i dont like how that person hurt your feelings!! it makes me upset. =/ its not right. i agree with your policy of making it the right place, right time. plus, you write so well and work so hard.. you update constantly! i think we should just sit back and observe and encourage- no complaining or begging, even if it is hard, lol. ( awww, end of chapter alreaaadyyy? ) XD ^__^ we love you!! =/ please dont ever think of giving up! your skill is a .. god/buddha/zuess/etc. sent gift.. ;;
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