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Reviewed By: eatingmyweightinoreo's15 On: January 31, 2005 19:44 PST
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Yes....he should be so lucky if she didn't start screaming bloody murder... The top has finally been blown off, the poor hanyou is gonna get his just desserts. It is VERY well deserved for trying to keep it a secret! He ain't gonna be getting any for quite a while....I hope once was enough for him...HAHAHHAHAHAHA....well...at least he has those dreams to get him by until Kagome's temper blows over. But it was my impression...that Hisa tampered with the talisman......I don't think Kagome's temper will be calmed ANYTIME soon....I see bones....lots of broken bones....Can she put the Kotodama back on to invoke some punishment??? She's still got it laying around doesn't she? I think he deserves it. LOLOL Wonderful as always!!!!Keep up the work woman!!! (Oh....pretty spam Filter....YAY!!!)
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Reviewed By: shogun_90_inu/kag On: January 31, 2005 18:06 PST
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omg nooo!!! the tailisman is broken isnt it?! thats where the blood came from right? there is no other explanation for the blood other than he just draged it outta his shirt and found HIS and KAGOME'S blood on his hand right after he shaked the vial! hisadaicho broke it didnt she?! when she reached in his hiari and touched the tailisman. -_- greatt.... and now kagome knows and inuyasha HAS to tell her. and being the stupid ignorant baka he is, he'll drag it out as long as he can. and miroku and sango will be suspicious of why those 2 arent talking to one another and then INUYASHA and KAGOME will HAVE to tell them too!!!! .... and this whole scenario ends with another lemon, right? ^.^ lol
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: January 31, 2005 17:46 PST
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The vial has now been broken, right!? Now InuYasha gets be tortured again! Poor InuYasha. I now think that maybe Hisadaicho was a little late in doing it, since they've already done it. Nice writing, Hisadaicho coming and doing it that way. Now Kagome knows for real that the toxin hasn't been nullified. I won't be surprised now if both their faces are red for several chapters when InuYasha finally tells her what was happening in his dreams! LOL!
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Title: WTF!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: Inuoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read some of your of other fics and i'm a real big fan of them but so far i like this one the least, (no offense intended)I dont like the idea of Kagome having a child for Miroku & Sango I think they should have a kid but hey i'm not the writer so ROCK ON!!!!! and keep writin' so i can keep reading. Your BIGGEST Fan, Erik Connor
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:02 PST
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He thinks his lucky. Every guy thinks that untill the start to miss the little sounds we make. I swear. Sometimes my husband hears me think. Out of the blue he will ask 'what?' Which makes me open my mouth and utter the word 'what' right back at him. Inuyasha should have come clean days ago. But no. And maybe if Miroku was told strait out to leave Inuyasha and Kagome alone, he won't tease. Ya, right. Great chapter. Hope there is more soon, later.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 15:38 PST
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wow.. that was great.. it's finally out that they haven't broken the toxin yet. oh.. what will inu do..
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: January 31, 2005 14:58 PST
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hehehe. Sneaky Sue! You really pulled one on me! I didn't even think for a moment that it was butterfly lady being Kagome! te he he. You got me good. Absolutly loved this: "gigant-ass boomerang" hahaha. Can't wait to see how long it takes for Kagome to stop not talking to Inuyasha. Great job! --Aitu
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Title: Laurel
Reviewed By: Hatsumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To tell you the truth...I adore this fic. It's sadly the first that I've read by you, but I'm definitely hunting for the rest of them. The way you write these things are so in character and I can just picture them happening in the series. In the chapter where IY and Kag go to see Sesshomaru for the second time, and after that whole monologue with IY and Sesshy, they walk into another room and Kag and Kagura and sitting quietly having tea...brilliant. I actually squealed out loud in delight when you put the fact that youkai are in modern-day Tokyo. I had yet to see a well-written fic with characters in the modern world, but you pulled it off perfectly. Well done. On another note...I'm going to gush about the naughty scenes. You are completely right, meaningless sex would be completely out of the question for both IY and Kag, it's completely against their nature. And the way you describe it...wow...it's not that I don't enjoy a graphic lemon every now and then (everyone does), but I much prefer the romantic way that you describe it. They're not just mating, their making love. Well done, and a brilliant job so far on the villianry. That bug whore is really getting on my nerves. I just want IY to blurt out the fact that they were going down on each other, it would make things so much...funnier, I guess...just so I can blush along with him. Absolutely brilliant work on it all.
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Title: kalobagh@mediaminer.org
Reviewed By: KaloBagh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your an awsome author love you fics. Ima miss Metamorphosis on weekends T-T. What does PWP mean?
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 13:24 PST
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*laughs* Well, the cat's out of the bag now! Wow, Hisadaicho's getting good at playing Kagome, I didn't even *suspect* it this time. So...now the vial's broken. Very elegant way to do it, by the way. Simple discreet, probably made most of your readers go "huh...whaaa..? Oh hell!" I really shoulda known, though. Kagome was back waaayy too quick and commonly leaves her backpack in Inu-Yasha's care.
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 12:12 PST
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Oh crap! That was Hisadaicho! So she got InuYasha's blood to make another spell or something against him? Ack! Here we go again. And I love Sue Johanson! Although it's a little weird because it's like listening to your grandmother talk about the best ways to have sex. LOL So that's why I didn't see an update this weekend! I got a lil' worried because I thought someone had made you mad again, and you stopped writing to piss them off. I was gonna kick their butt if that was the problem. Hehehe. But I saw that you were still updating Purity 2 so that couldn't have been the problem. Oh well. I hope Kagome kicks InuYasha's butt now. Or at least use Sango's "gigant-ass" boomerang. XD That cracked me up!
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 08:54 PST
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So Hisadaicho is up to her games again, and I am taking a wild guess here. She pierced the vile somehow, that was what the blood was on Inuyasha's hand after he shook the talisman? I'll have to re-read now just to double check I read that part right if not… 0.o; I've been ill for a while, and therefore missed the latest chapter releases; but upon catching up and having read your review response in chapter 63 to someone on AFF, someone who obviously overlooked the plot and beautiful storyline to get the "hentai", I'm so pleased that you've proved that those kinds of readers/reviewers aren't worth stopping your writing and allowing us Sueric fans the benefits of continuing to read a wonderfully well thought of story! (Though I always doubt AFF and even MM nowadays, there are too many under age readers and therefore they seem to be the most demanding, the way I see it; they should not be even surfing adult literature or even entering an Adult site such as AFF. Just goes to show why FF.Net decided to remove all NC-17 rated fiction, the underage readers just don't care and then nag and belittle the author for adding to much or less adult situations… just can't win either way.)
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Title: Aww, blushing Hanyou & curious Monk...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 31, 2005 08:40 PST
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I love the little romantic teasing between Kagome and InuYasha but when they go head-to-head...ROFLMAO!! Then to find that Hisadaicho showed up and spilled the beans that Inu had been hiding about the toxin, I do believe I said "ears will be blistered!" LOL Nobody screams "baka" like Kagome, I can hear it (too much fansubbs...never!) and he is way out of her league in a shouting match. 'Pout' all you want InuYasha, you ain't gettin' outta confessing this time! --- The incognito butterfly has broken the seal on the vial. InuYasha is going to have a rough night ahead. Will he discover that the blood came from the vial, or will he be totally clueless and find out the hard way? *rubs hands gleefully* -- Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 31, 2005 08:25 PST
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Argh. A whole weekend without Metamorphosis. What? Are you trying to kill me? Warn me next time so I don't keep hovering around the 'puter. Heh. Guess I'm warned now:-) Great chapter. Now everything starts to come to a head. Poor Inu. It's going to be so hard for him to find the courage to explain everything to Kagome. Actually, considering his time period and upbringing, he probably can't. Kagome's a smart girl. She's gonna have to figure out what Inuyasha might not be telling her. Come on Kagome, use your immagination. Now I have to wait to find out what happens. Argh. This is just like an old fashioned radio show. Stay tuned for the next exciting chapter of the adventure. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: January 31, 2005 01:33 PST
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Awesome story as usual so far. Will the vial ever be broken? I'm starting to doubt that it will be. Also, I'd like to apologize for the review I gave about the Bachelor/Bachelorette party chapter of Chronicles. I was wrong to say that kind of stuff. The ultra-conservative, churchgoing side of me took control of me after I read that chapter, and for that I'm very sorry. I did go on and finish the rest of the story however.
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