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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 09:13 PST
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LOL, gah Sue, I got cramps from laughing so hard. Though, it's kind of sad that Yasha has such a low opinion of himself...if he enjoys giving Kagome pleasure, why can't he see that she could enjoy returning the favor, ya know? I love the quote from Old Seer coming back to haunt us--it sums up Kagome's feelings for Yasha so perfectly. Now, in Hisadaicho's little bit... it almost sounded like she was contemplating stopping them from breaking the toxin, but could she really have done that? LOL, How would she have stopped them when InuYasha couldn't stop Kagome? And some more tidbits about Hisa's koishii... intriguing, very intriguing. Can't wait to see how long those two can go without leaving the hut and/or how long the hut can withstand the two of them not leaving... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 08:53 PST
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And so it begins. I had to re-read over Hisadaicho's part just to catch the meaning of it; especially as she spoke/hinted about her koishii.. Interesting, though now I am even more looking forward to the conclusion and result of this little scheme of hers! But right now, I am so loving Kagome's little conspiracy over Inuyasha and his stubbornness to speak to his own mate about his so-called fantasies lol
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: February 02, 2005 19:09 PST
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LOL! LOL! LOL! Desperate times call for desperate measures, and BakaYasha has now officially forced Kagome to take desperate measures! I wonder how many days it's gonna take him to finally spit it out, and by then, will Kagome still have any sanity left in her?
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: February 02, 2005 14:38 PST
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HAHAH!! This is great! I never would have thought Kagome could be so good at devising a plan like this. I can see InuYasha cowering in the corner, afraid of what she'll do to him. LOL. Now he has no choice. If she falls asleep, then all hell will break loose. I can not wait to see how he tells her about his "fantasies" with her. LOL
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai(not signed in) On: February 02, 2005 14:07 PST
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HAHAHAHA! Poor Inuyasha! That is evil! Oh god... I'm laughing my ass off here! Good job on that one, I think I'm gonna be laughing for a while!
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Title: The Hanyou shall give in
Reviewed By: blueangel326 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 13:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! Fanfiction won't let me in so I'm doing this from MediaMiner. So, Kag had to trick her own hanyou lover just to get him to spill the beans. That is just sad, Inuyasha, that even your own mate has to resort to trickery just to get you to get you tell her what you did or didn't do the first time so that you can get the acting out dreams right. 2 Questions: Do you think Rin/Kohaku is canon? How would you relate Sesshoumaru with Rin? I can't think of her as a servant or underling to him because let's face it, Sesshoumaru is too cool to have such a cute and cool little girl as someone to do his biddings like Jaken. Though I do find the "Don't move, Rin" and "You may move, Rin" thing from episode 45 I believe when Kagura comes to Sesshy and tells him of Tokijin and Rin stays absolutely, I mean absolutely, still for 5 minutes with her foot still in the air. Please tell Inuyasha will break in the next chapter because, come on, we don't want her to suffer with the dreams that were as equally as freaky as the ones that Inuyasha had about her. But this is your story so I'll let you write it. It's better when you write it because you want to write it like that, not because someone told or begged you to. But keep up the tres bien work and we shall all be happy in the end. That includes Inu & Kag, Sesshy & Kagura, Sango & Miroku, and all the rest of the good people. People not included: the permanently dead Naraku, Hisadaicho, and her koishii. I just took up 1500 words!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 12:24 PST
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Ah, the return of the sneaky wench. Very cute. I'm a little coffee and insomnia buzzed so by brain ain't workin' right this second. So errr...great chapter. Always bloody well want more and I'm so happy Sessy and Kagura will be back soon. *many smiles, although i think I'm a bit deranged right now...laughs*
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 02, 2005 09:22 PST
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Hahahaha....Inuyasha is acting like he has Ants in his Pants. It's great!! Have I mentioned how funny it is to see him squirm?
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 09:03 PST
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hahahahahaha! locked him in the old hut with the mate - that's funny -
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 02, 2005 08:48 PST
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Ha! Cage the Hanyou! Nice move Kagome. I loved Sango and Miroku bickering over who's going to shove and grab. Might have known that Sango would win that one. LOL -- Kagome finally experiencing an 'unrestrained' toxin-induced dream was eye-opening for her. She may be a product of modern times and better informed about 'relations' than her stubborn mate, but the dark overtones that ruled the dream was still shocking. Especially since she is new to intimacy. Now she will understand what he meant when he said, "...it was you, but NOT you..." InuYasha has never been good with words, maybe she could get him to talk by telling him what she experienced. Either way, they're in for an uncomfortable night...or longer. InuYasha is stubborness personified. -- Great Chapter.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 07:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe, I knew she was up to something. And she is just as stubburn as he is, no wonder she pulled that off. I wonder if he is going to cave and finally fess up. I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 07:21 PST
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Well he had it coming; I somehow have a feeling he might be in for it.. Whether he likes it or not is another thing. lol. (after thought his dreams; Kagome mentioned that the dream she had scared her, that Inuyasha was not himself… that sent a chilling thought through my head, and one word sprang to my mind. Hisadaicho. If Inuyasha is having those kind of dreams, we all know what she's like in a perverse kind of way…)
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 02, 2005 06:03 PST
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Now Inu's had it. Locked in a hut with Kagome until he fesses up. Problem is, I don't think he CAN fess up. Good luck Kagome. Great chapter. I love the whole conspiracy against Inuyasha. Love the title too.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 05:58 PST
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i loved it.. well at least kagome has an idea of what inuyasha has been dreaming..
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 21:24 PST
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There are many bakas in the inu hanyou world today, ne? How long does Yasha intend to keep his poor mate awake? She'll get sick eventually and then he'll freak out even more. Ah well, good thing Kagome's too smart for that. Though somehow I doubt she'll feel any better once she does sleep... I think Yasha has one hell of a hole to get himself out of... and no chance of accomplishing that in the foreseeable future. You're a treasure Sue ^_^
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