| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Title: chap57review
Reviewed By: damnit minion On: January 18, 2005 21:21 PST
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ha ha miroku always seems to interrupt lol ... and i think im sensing some angst coming on mwahahahahahahaha
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 21:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww. I thought it was cute how their first time was under a meteor shower. I can honestly say that you blind sided me on that one. I didn't see the lemon coming. Nice job by the way. I can't wait to see more from you very soon. Although Monday is a long time from now...oh well. This fic is definitly worth the wait.
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Title: Jaw dropping
Reviewed By: KrispyKremeaddict On: January 18, 2005 20:55 PST
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Let me start at the part of the chapter that didn't have me sitting in my chair drooling.... Kagura. Poor...dear...sweet...Kagura. She finally has some semblence of peace and freedom in her life...and reality swipes everything out from under her. She has always been someone I have loved as a character...and it just breaks my heart to see her brought back to...where she has no REAL freedom. I can only hope that this ending is better than the manga...when her precious Sess was unable to help her. As for IY and Kags...I honestly don't know HOW you do it. The beautiful chapter of Chronicles was amazing. I have never read a better love scene...in any of the novels I have read. I thought there was NO possible way you could ever top that. I was wrong As an author myself...I was blown away by this chapter. The beauty, passion, and love that flowed between these two characters was palpable. I honestly don't know how you can continue to top your own bar time and time again when it comes to writing their 'first time' Even after all the cold dips in the lakes, the MONTHS of blue balls...Inu got his Kagome in the most wonderful and special way possible. But...it was the last several lines that really made me tear up....He's so dang cute when he's all sentimental. Thinking he's got nothing left to wish for...I imagine the girl in his arms is thinking the same thing. He really is home now....'sighs blissfully' Thank you...thank you...for this wonderful chapter. You're the best!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: January 18, 2005 20:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaawwwwwwww now that was a great spot for the lemon. I was so scared something would intrupt them I would have been so mad. :D DAMN toxin grrrr grrrr poor inuyasha Sigh will he ever tell her or maybe she can figure someting out? waaaaa "orion
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Title: ch57review
Reviewed By: peon77007 On: January 18, 2005 20:46 PST
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damn that is one stubborn zipper ... i think its the first thing that i've read to be more stubborn than Inu Yasha ... i hate when zippers get stuck... but at least she's not pinching her skin in it bc that is one painful bitch... anyway ... this was a great chapter with the humor of teh zipper, the confession of love (in their own way) between Inu and Kagome, and even some evil/vile (wow evil and vile have teh same letters) minion from Hisa ... all in all a great chapter =)
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Title: chap56review
Reviewed By: fingerbreaker007 On: January 18, 2005 20:30 PST
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yay, Kagome and Sango had the talk! woowoo! =) ... i'm glad we got another glimpse of Kagura here because i really enjoy her character, and i feel so bad for her ... i know Hisa must have some huge evil plot that will probably be destructive to Kagura .... another great chapter as always =)
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Title: chap55review
Reviewed By: oppressor of the obtuse007 On: January 18, 2005 20:12 PST
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lmao ... still laughing at this chpater and InuYasha unfortunate side effect of his dream lol... i loved how you had his youkai side speaking to him ... its so soothing and sweet... that reviewer with the typo bc is such a moron ::smacks them with a rotten fish:: ... i thought you responded to them in a very nice/tactful way ... and i can see why your betas are so loyal to you =)
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Reviewed By: ressa On: January 18, 2005 20:02 PST
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What now? I thought they broke the toxin and here I was getting all happy, just for you to type they didn't. What will poor InuYasha do and will they ever break the toxin spell? ressa
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Title: More then Fluff
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 19:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really know what word I could use that would trully measure the amouth of "Fluff" in this chapter. My brain has floated away on those shooting stares. I know I know, there isn't a man out there that could pousible love that way. But its really nice to imagine. On another note just what is that Inuyasha deamed if he is that adimite about not telling a living soul. All I can say is everytime the dreams are mentioned I think of worse and worse things. Ja
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 19:29 PST
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Yay, they mated. Course you just had to throw in there that it didn't break the toxin hold. I like where you story is going. Can't wait to know what Toutousai will make for her. Update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Echoside [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 19:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply Fantastic would be the only way to describe this story. I'd also like to tell you that this could be a novel if the circumstances right. I would like to thank you for writing such great stories for our reading pleasures. Your great at suspense I can't wait for next update to see whats to come of our mated heros. From A Very Appreciative Reader, Echoside P.S. You should become a author with you talents you be the Stephen King Adult Romance Novels. And if it offended you that I'm so formal in writing this I'm quite sorry.
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Title: chap54review
Reviewed By: smothererofthestupid007 On: January 18, 2005 19:26 PST
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... the way you capture the emotion between Sango and Kagome is so amazing... the tension and everything ... you capture so much emotion in the words you say but also in what you don't say... you do this for all the characters ... bravo! ... now moving on to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! FINALLY they are MATES!!!! aHHHHHH!!! i have been waiting sOOOOOO friggin' LONG for this!!! *happy tears* THANK YOU~!! haha!! omg they ARE MATES!!! okie i am estatic!!! haha.. *bounces off walls* ur faithful reader ~ Miyumi ~ aka Mindy
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Title: chap53review
Reviewed By: imsofarbehind007 On: January 18, 2005 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooo, i'm really far behind in my chapters.... so you will prob have already answered this question once i read ahead ... but i'll ask it anyway .... Hisa wants the vial destroyed ... is that because she wants/needs InuYasha and Kagome to mate? .... she is so evil, and i can't wait to see where she is going with all of this... i just have to say i feel so much for sango, i hope her and kagome have a talk soon
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Title: Special... like...hmm...
Reviewed By: Shoukamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 15:52 PST
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So is this the special circumstances Kagome needs not to feel like it's "forced"? *giggles* Poor wet puppy-boy.^_^
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