| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Title: 40 chapters... I swear it
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (well, I *WAS* logged in) On: January 11, 2005 22:41 PST
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oooooh, Sango. Poor girl. And poor Kagome. Wonder how well InuYasha will do comforting her. A lovely chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 19:53 PST
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wow.. but we all had to know something like this was going to happen.. until tomorrow..thanks
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 11, 2005 19:06 PST
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Aw, poor Sango. Angsty chapter. BTW, one of my favorite parts of each chapter is the final thoughts. The best one of all IMO was in Chronicles - "This Sexxomerau needs a hug." That one still gives me a chuckle.
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 17:51 PST
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SOO sorry i haven't reviewed in a while. I was in the emergency room last night because I couldn't breathe but then figured out that I have Pnemonia. Anyway, enough about me, I can't believe that Sango would over-react like that. Poor Kagome must have taken that really hard. I hope that she will listen to Inuyasha. And she was just gettin gover this whole thing too...how sad...
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 17:46 PST
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I knew something was going to happen. Hope Inuyasha can convince Kagome to go back and talk to Sango. Hope you update soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: Prsnr24601-FFICsimon On: January 11, 2005 17:04 PST
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Your story has progressed nicely. The subtlties are what make it interesting. Many stories are not that hard too figure out, unless the plot didn't coincide with the story in anyway. Yours is quite simple, what makes it an interesting challenge however is that the clues are so blantantly obvious that people tend to miss them. I like it though, makes it fun. Gives the mind a good workout. I also don't see why people are complaining about the "lack" of lemon content. Simply because it is not the one they want to see is no reason to tamper the creative process. As a fellow artist I commend you on your ability to create life on paper as well as true as it is in reality. In addition, do you have an idea as to how long you want to make this story? Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ttc. On: January 11, 2005 16:29 PST
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urghh...now i feel like sango is such a fukin bittch!!!!!
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Reviewed By: surreal life_inuyashalover On: January 11, 2005 14:31 PST
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if you have seen 'the fianl resolution' then you must know how naraku dies right? or how kikyou finally dies??? ... so if you dont know how kikyou and naraku die, and also what happens to the sacred jewel once all the shards have been recovered... then thats means you obviously havent seen them all. i dont know if i mentioned this but the video is yet to be released... so it has no subtitles and is only in japanese. i dont know if i could change your mind about wanting to see it, but i still hold the offer. see it is kindof buggin me cuz i see things in your story that isnt really true. its only like minor things but it still bugs me to no end cuz you prolly have no clue what happens next! i love you r story and im lovin the new chappy! buhbyes
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 13:39 PST
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I can't believe Sango *did* that! Well, actually, I'm lying. I'm not surprised when I remember Kohaku. Hmm...why do i get the feeling that Hisadaicho won't have to worry about breaking the vial? Hehe.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 12:02 PST
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Chuckles. Don't get to dance mad; they say it's bad for the brain cells!! 0.o; I can't believe I was that close to sussing something out! I was in shock; I even re-read the last few chapters just to let it sink in-I still bow down to you! Your plot bunnies have my unused brain clogs working over time (I oiled them recently when I started to catch up with Meta!). Oh, I somehow knew the Kagome/Marisaiko misunderstanding would all blow out of proportion, at first, as I started to read the scene unfolding in front of Sango's eyes, I was unsure if it was actually real (her daydreams tuning into her greatest fears sort of thing) then I realised as poor unsuspecting Kagome turned and announced to Mari that her "Mama" was coming (adorable!), that it really was happening and poor Kagome never heard her. Oh, and I felt the sting of tears when Sango got angry and Kagome put two and two together… Eep, Hisadaicho has played on their minds real good this time.
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 11:10 PST
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Oh damn. Not good. Poor Kagome. Just when you think she's fine, it just turns around and stabs her in the back again. I didn't think Sango would actually consider thinking that Kagome would ever take Marisaiko. And what's with Kagome coming onto InuYasha? Somebody got a little horny in the tree of sexiness! LOL! Don't know where that came from so don't ask. Hey! The voices in my mind like what I got to say so it's all good! LOL
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Kadaede(not signed in) On: January 11, 2005 09:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally MM let me review! Ok first for the last oh...10 chapters...let me just say...OMG! Can we just squish the butterfly? Maybe that can be a new tesaiga attack...IRON REAVER BUG SQUISHER! Although I do hope that blasted vial gets long gone. And we also need to kick Koga in the butt and knock some sense into the big oaf! I mean come on how many times does a girl have to say no before the message gets translated into Youkaius Stubbornus ! Anyway I can't wait for your next update! I love all of your stories. Have you given any thought to a Kagome/Sesshomaru fic? Just a thought. Ja ne!
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Title: To: surreal life_inuyashalover
Reviewed By: Darkless again, 'manic InuYasha trivia gatherer' On: January 11, 2005 09:54 PST
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I have to address this, it's driving me nuts! ---Ok, the ending to the first series of the Tv anime was the double episode 166-167 called "The Bond of Two, Using the Shard" -aired on Sept 13, 2004 in Japan- and it's the only series the anime has. (I own it all, and the first 3 movies, thanks to the fansubbers on the net; they Rock!!) They had to quit because they had caught up with the manga. The manga is not over yet. They still have not destroyed Naraku. (grrrr) They still have not completed the Shikon no Tama. There have only been hints that there might be a second series or Ova's (only video available) in the works but not until around 2006-7, most likely not until the Manga has been completed. The most up-to-date information (if you can't read kanji) is at ear-tweak (dot) com. I don't know how much clearer I can be without dropping all kinds of spoilers. This "The Final Resolution" you have must be a fanfic, or a possible hoax. There are a lot of people out there, with video encoding software, who love to mess with people's heads. How do you think they make Amv's? (anime music videos, of which I also rabidly collect) --- I'm sorry, but whatever that video is or wherever you got it, it cannot be official. I have connections with connections and would have heard of it by now if it were real. *stepping off soap-box*
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Title: I don't get it. I'm signed in until I open the page with your fic...it's a conspiracy, I tell you!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in (Damn Gremlins) On: January 11, 2005 09:24 PST
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OOh, now Kagome understands what InuYasha meant about "forever" thanks to our well-informed Taijiya, turning her thoughts more serious than they were about the "alternate" cure now that she knows. Aaand the baddies are comin' to break the vial; "All that I can see, is just a yellow lemon tree..." (This is bad...you've completely corrupted me...I'm actually anticipating the citris...shame on you! LOL) ---Aww, what a low note to end the chapter with, but it had to come out. There was no way what that woman had said to Sango wouldn't cause friction sooner or later. At least now it's out and they will have to clear the air. It's these little difficulties that, when you overcome them, cement relationships tighter and stronger. Great chapter. **grumble** "...darn fruit...I used to be such a good girl..."
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Reviewed By: BloodyKitsune (Lemme sign in you stupid site....) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 09:18 PST
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Errr... yeah... site won't let me sign in for some reason... well it does, just can't review... bleh... Nice chapter, kinda surprised that Sango actually took Mari from Kagome though...... I mean sheesh.... she did stop after Sango got close enough..... plus, was she even heading towards the well? Oh well, should be interesting to see how Sango apologizes....
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