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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:51 PST
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sorry i haven't reviewed in like forever.. i'm still trying to get use to the new job.. loved the story.. sorry you didn't enjoy writing it as much as your others.. i still enjoyed it..
| Reviewed By: =) On: February 18, 2005 17:18 PST
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| Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 15:42 PST
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That was a great ending, but I must say I REALLY NEED to know if it is a girl or a boy! But, it was still a great story. I love your work and you should keep writing! And for those people who were telling you how...I dont even want to say it! But I can just say that those people can suck a d***, choke, and die for not seeing how great your work is! ^_^ Im sorry if that offends anyone but...OH WELL! I love your work and I can twait for your next story! No matter what, KEEP WRITING! *You #1 fan!* ~Kit~
| Reviewed By: JackieChan Dragonfly On: February 18, 2005 12:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to apologize. I'm sorry that I didn't review every chapter. I'm not one who is comfortable with writing. In fact, it scares the hell out of me. But I wanted to let you know that I admire you greatly and your choice to have Kagome have Sango's baby, when she could not. It's something I have done myself and it helped me in many ways. Thank you. For every thing that you write and for all the time you spend on not only writing, but on the research that you do as well. It shows. Bless you and your ability to make us see and feel with the writen word. Agian thank you. Yours Sincerely, Ronna
| Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 12:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So youve finaly finished metamorphosis. Congradulations on a good job well done. I just a few things I wanted to say. You are by far the most talented writer I have ever known (for Inuyasha that is.) You not only keep the characters so in tune or should I say that you keep them away from being OOC you also show emotion in the every fiber of your story. You add in just the right amount of um... I drawing a black with words here... so Ill just say them one by one. You put in just enough humorous parts, seriousnes, sadness, happiness, ect ect. You dont over do it like many other readers out there but do it just perfectly like in your other writings. I look foward to your next story and wish you luck on it too. I just have one or more questions for you. 1)Will you ever consider writing one shots for this fict or some sort of addition? 2)You seem to know an awfully lot about the Inuyasha serries which makes me wonder. The Inuyasha movies I take it you have seen them. Do the movies relate to each other or are they just seperate like they are from the serries? 3)If you could name one other author either on Anime Spiral Or Media miner who has stories just as good as yours who would it be. So thats all the questons I have you dont have to reply to the questions if you dont have to. So see you until your next story. Godd fortunes and good luck! :D
| Title: CONGRADULATIONS!
Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 08:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats Sue! It sure was one hellova ride, I thank you for the time you spent writing this and other fics, (heh, I just finished chronicles-Great story) thanks for dealing with the ungrateful who just bashed you or your fic and good luck on the next on... We'll be waiting.
| Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 06:51 PST
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Oh man, this was a great story. Maybe...a one-shot of this to see Kagome and InuYasha raise their baby?? pleady-please??? ::puppy eyes::
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 18, 2005 06:35 PST
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Thank you very much for this beautiful fiction. I know it was hard for you to write and I'm sorry about that. I hope you realize what a treasure each chapter was to me and how much I look forward to my "Sueric time" every day. You have certainly brought additional joy into my life through your writing and I am deeply grateful. Wishing you all the best and looking forward to your next I/K story. Many thanks! --Kim
| Reviewed By: Dawning Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 05:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading Metamorphosis since...chapter 55, and I've loved it ever since! You've done brilliantly to keep the everyone in character, and even better to keep going despite what some insensitive people have said. Everything was beautifully written, and it's easy to tell you've put a lot into it. Keep going!
| Reviewed By: serendith (gave up on the signing in thing) On: February 18, 2005 04:01 PST
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Sue, I would like you to know that you are a pleasure to read. I wish there was something I could to to intercept all the idiots who seem to plague you but, alas, the email seems to breed them. I am actually really upset to see this story end here (especially with that epilague - tease!) but be sure that I will continue to read you with your other stories that you write. I can't tell you how dissappointed I am that people made this so hard on you. The point of fanfic is to take stories in directions that they haven't gone yet ... it seems silly that people have such a hard time wrapping their head around that. I haven't been reading the purity continuations (my time is limited so the only fic I have been following lately has been Meta) so you might see me show up there for a bit. I want to thank you for writing (this story and others) because it gives me a well needed diversion in my everyday life. If you ever need an ego boost feel free to contact me (you can do so through my journal which is listed as my website) because I truly believe that you are a wonderful, talented, kind person.
| Reviewed By: Patriot On: February 18, 2005 02:30 PST
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Those people who wrote the nasty emails need to have their own heads examined. How dare they do that to you! I love the way you ended it! I know what you mean by real life cutting into writing time. I write some as well, but a story I started is currenlty in the 'abandoned' status because I first started writing it to give me something to do. I then got a job, and it became impossibly hard to keep at it. I don't know how you manage to keep writing, would you let me in on one of your secrets?
| Title: aww...all done....
Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 01:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope this comes out properly, as MM sometimes has a tendency to barf on me. Metamorphosis is all done. **sniffles** But, I have to say, it's up right next to Lucky Ones as being my favorite Inuyasha story ever. I have to admit though, the thought that ran through my head when Kagome volunteered to have a baby for Miroku and Sango was "how the heck are they gonna do the artifical insemination?" I was *so* pleased to see Kagome's reaction throughout the whole thing, it seemed so very real to me. And Inuyasha's reaction to *her*. Though ya wanna bash the boy over his head, to get it through his thick skull that he's worth something. *G* I must admit, waiting for the [admittedly lovely] love-making, I was getting to the point where I just wanted to lock 'em together in a closet!! LOL But, anything good is well-worth the wait, and boy that sure was. I've always wondered about Sesshoumaru, since it usually seems to me that his attempts to kill Inuyasha feel half-hearted at best. Even when Inu lopped his arm off. I can't really see Sess and Inu ever becoming bosom buddies....but the relationship you've portrayed between the two of them...this I can see. In short, I thought the characters were spot-on, and while I was a mite bit irked at not knowing the sex of Kagome & Inuyasha's baby, well, I can live with that. *G* *Please* keep writing, as it would really be sad if the Inuyasha fandom was deprived of more of your wonderful epics. ^_^
| Title: Sigh ! its over.
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 23:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sue, Bravo!!! excellant ending. Well I have to say that I knew that many of us wrote ( including me) requesting a happy ending w/ marriage and babies. Please understand that most of our questions and requests was how immersed many of us were with the story. Sue, your writing is so good that many of us got emotionally drawn into the story. The first thing that I would do is get up with a cup of coffee and go online to read your next chapter. It was absolutely addictive!! Whew!! I'll probably have metamorphosis withdrawal symptons for weeks !!!. LOL. I also knew that lot of people's remarks were nasty when they didn't get their way by forcing you to comply with there needs such as writing a lemon, etc. I can tell that these persons have hurt you but I am so glad that you kept your focus and wrote the way YOU wanted to and finished the story. I am sorry that you felt the way you did about the story, but it is still one of the best. It shows me that even with much hurt, pain, and conflict of the heart , one can create such beauty as well as a masterpiece. No matter how you feel, Metamorphosis IS a masterpiece and I thank you for completing it> ( and a baby, sigh). NOTE: I believe Einstein said this quote which is one of my favorite and to me, expresses your strength: "Happiness is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to deal with it." Thanks again and keep writing. J.
| Title: A fan
Reviewed By: BakaInuGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 22:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, I've been following your work since I read Purity. I loved that fic and I loved Metamorphosis. I'm actually really upset that you got discouraged from bad reviews and emails. Your writing is unique and Metamorphosis probably has the BEST villian since Naraku that I've seen in fanfics. I'm actually inspired by your stories' unique plots, emotional tugs, and characters, and I can only hope to be half as amazing as you have been. Just look at all the recent reviews you've gotten from authors/readers that you've touched with this story! I look forward to work you'll have in the future and I hope you never get discouraged again. You are one of my absolute favorite authors here and I wish you all the best in your continued effort to change the future of fanfiction. Thank you for Metamorphosis. ~BakaInuGirl
| Reviewed By: Trishna On: February 17, 2005 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story. It's nice to see a real issue covered in one of these stories for a change, and done quite well. Did you have to do a lot of research? Keep going. This story is a credit to you and to fanfiction in general. Don't be too discouraged by those who would abuse you - I'd like to see them try and write a story - most of it would be badly written pointless drivel. It was a well written story that drew me in and kept me reading, although I felt that sometimes you tend to belabour the point and stretch things out longer than they should be. That's basically my only criticism. You've won yourself another fan!! :) Can't wait for the next one.
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