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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 20:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where to begin? I just finished Meta after a couple straight days of reading and this is definitely tied with "Chronicles" and "The Lucky Ones" as my favorite IY fanfics (I can't choose just one!). I have to admit that this one was harder for me to read than "Chronicles" (which I just loved for so many reasons - a good number of which are in the obscenely long review I left there! LOL). The subject matter just hit way too close to home. As a woman suffering from infertility (I've been through everything short of in-vitro, which no success), I completely empathized with Sango's despair, agony, and envy. I also felt so connected to Kagome and her decision to help her friends. I just loved her all the more for it, even though I knew she'd have a hard time with the aftermath. My sister (who has a lovely little boy) and I have discussed this very scenario as a possible answer for me. It's a difficult thing to contemplate (and, ultimately, do, as Kagome did), even amongst the closest relations. I just love the way you honestly portrayed both the love and purity of spirit that prompted the act, and the angst of the result, as well as the joy. It's a very complicated situation, but I think you dealt with it with the highest amount of sensitivity. I do have to say that you made me bawl my eyes out when Sango thought that Kagome was going to take the baby away - when all that emotion came out...it just hit me hard. The sign of a wonderfully crafted story! (more above!)
| Reviewed By: Akina_the_healer On: February 27, 2005 13:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed earlier. I'd started reading it a few months ago, it is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I've only been reading fics for three years maybe more. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other fics, i'm sure they'll be as entertaining as this one ^-^. ~Tsunami~(Not a member of MM...)
| Reviewed By: marijang69 *not logged in* On: February 27, 2005 12:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! My NAME is in this fic! lol although you probly didn't know it was my name, i feel so honored hehe well newey, this is an AWESOME fic, i'm glad you FINALLY finished it! you update on an almost-daily basis, so i was REALLY happy!!! well, please make a sequel!! i want to find out how Mari reacts when...well, IF she finds out that Kagome is her ACTUAL mother! and i seriusly want to know what gender the hanyou baby is!! pretty please!?! p.s. lol by the way, MARI is my name...not marisaiko!
| Title: Long live, Sue, Queen of InuYasha fics
Reviewed By: Lady Yukiko On: February 26, 2005 23:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After a week of hell, I was finally able to find the time to sit down and finish Meta. What can I say about Meta that hasn't been said by many others who have enjoyed it as much as I did? I find Meta to be one of the most beautiful and soul-touching stories I've ever read. Like all of your stories, Meta has made me laugh (God how it's made me laugh ^_^) and made me cry (I think I went through several tissue boxes) along with InuYasha and company. I'm sorry that the foolishness and narrow-mindedness of some people ruined your enjoyment of this beautiful story and I thank you from the bottom of my heart that you continued on and finished Meta despite their cruel words. You are one of the most talented, intelligent, and funniest writers that I've had the pleasure of reading the work of and I've enjoyed those few chats we've had online. I'd like to thank you for your stories because whenever I've had a bad day, the day always got much brighter after reading one of them. I eagerly await for your new story and the newest chapters P2 and P3. ^_^
| Title: puppy ears*tweak tweak*
Reviewed By: Inu_terra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A perfect ten. It was just a wow story! Fantastic job.The enjoyment factor was amazing, the kind of story with the plot that doesn't need cliffies at the end of the chapter because the reader is already wondering WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT?...at least that how I was effected.You did amazing an amazing job with the characters!Just a WOW job!!!!!!You have an wonderful sense of humor!And romance!It was such a touching story makes me wish for an over protective soulmate to banter with!I want to thank you for being a writer I cannot wait for your next fic!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 19:20 PST
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lmao i LUV the confrontation w/ inuyasha and miroku "She'll be fucking living in this tree till your pup's born, then I'll toss it to you, you fucking pervert" rotf thats priceless, well i'm only on ch. 14 and i have to say this story is REALLY GOOOOOD! its gonna take a while to read it all [81 chapters!]
| Title: slayer
Reviewed By: F.G. drake On: February 24, 2005 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I,ve read your work on fanfiction.net ,changed sites when there was a lemon, stared at my ceiling for countless hours because I kept thinking bout the story. ( I'm a guy and not homosexual) I cried when it was a sad scene, laughed my ass off at hilarious scenes, unfortunately was not able to review every, or any for that matter (I'm sorry bout that)I am a huge fan of your's (I LOVED chronicles btw I reviewed on my account) also I think you have enough, but i would love to have the honor of bieng a beta reader. I am very open minded, I hold wisdom beyond my age, even if i lack the experienceto use it. and if you're looking for metaphores and action scenes... I'm tha man. here's my e-mail if you have msn.(or just send an e-mail) ghache@nbnet.nb.ca and well, personally I dont expect you to accept just because I asked. but I do wish to help, and be given a chance. Also, my imagination can expand to various length's.
| Reviewed By: Kores On: February 23, 2005 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my firt time to review on this story because I was trying so desperately to catch up on it :P Took me about a week and a half I think. But anyways, I think that this was a wonderful piece and I look forward to reading more by you. Keep up the good work and heart. It's truly amazing!
| Title: Metamorphsis
Reviewed By: Kiramara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story alot. you are one of my favorite authors. Mainly because you always keep me hooked. By the way WAS KAGOME'S BABY A GIRL OR BOY OR TWINS OR WHAT????????????????????
| Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 10:18 PST
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This adventure was a metamorphosis of sorts for all of us. I'm glad you were able to finish despite some... foolish people. Never let the schtooopids get to you Sue, you're too good for that. Thanks for always sharing your heart ^_^
| Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:02 PST
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This was a great fic. I loved the changes that the characters went through. And I like that Inuyasha stayed the way he is. Thanks for the ride and just so you know you have inspired me to yet another fic idea. Again thanks, later.
| Reviewed By: Siderius On: February 20, 2005 12:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, I loved this fic from beginning to end. Truly wonderful and very bold for a new spin on the Yasha/Kagome relationship. I love all of your fics and this was no different. Wonderful. It truly was. You do everyone a great service by giving us these fics. ^_^ Can't wait for the next!
| Title: Metamorphosis
Reviewed By: inutama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear writer, I have been reading Metamorphosis from the begining and really like the story it was different and I like different, and for the mean things that people have said ignore them you are a good writer and I want you to keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: toyou. On: February 19, 2005 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there. I just finished reading your story, and WOW. Your style of writing is Fantastic. Even the lemons. Yes, even the lemons. Your choice of words are just flabbergasting(in the good way), and they show such subtle and powerful feelings in such a different way than others. Honestly, reading your story was like being born again. I love the way you write. a LOT. Your choice of words... they're just so beautiful, and they are so perfect. I can't believe your story's going to end soon. It was such a rollercoaster - ups and downs. But it was so very touching, and hilarious, and absolutely beautiful. Don't get discouraged by flamers. Really. Those who can't understand the beauty of your story just arn't mature enough. Lastly, keep writing, and follow your dreams. Are you thinking of starting a storybook? I recommend you to. All of us will support you 100%! I'm sure many people will love you too. I absolutely adore your style of writing. Well, this's all I have to say. Good luck for your subsequent works, and thanks for this breathtaking story. Sincerely and lovingly, your fan.
| Reviewed By: EAP On: February 18, 2005 23:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to reveiw because I've had such a wonderful time reading your story. I just got into reading Inuyasha fanfic, and yours is one of the first I've read. I think its excellent. You have a distinct style that was competely compelling, I started reading on Feb 7th, and I was caught up a week later. You have a great ability to create a character and make it so that you can imagine them being there from the beginning. I think you are incredably creative, and all of your charaters are flawless in their portrayal. I also have to say that I admire you for your strong convictions, with knowing who you were writing for, and not letting other people dictate your creativity. Kudos. I'm really, really looking forward to reading your other stories, I hope you continue to write. Good luck! EAP
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