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Reviewed By: Renate On: June 18, 2005 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How come all the good stories I read are never finished or never get finished this sucks! Well please update very very soon. It's very good I had to stop twice because I had to do something and I couldn't sto thinking what's gonig to happen next must read...so keep going!
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Reviewed By: bluemoose13 On: June 17, 2005 10:46 EDT
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i think that is sweet how you made jessica break up with vash... that way he didnt technically go back on his word...yeah. i work at that daycare but im in another room so i dont get to see him that much. :( Si
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Reviewed By: S On: June 11, 2005 12:03 EDT
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I feel so special now! *claps hands* And yeah, this is still (and always will be) Bookkbaby84. I just loved this chapter! Vash-kun is actually happy- Jessica-chan finally let him go! The idea about taking over the Federal Building is just hilarious- I can't wait to see how they pull that off! I also wonder what Meryl-san and Milly-chan will say and do when Vash-kun shows up. What will their co-workers say?! Or maybe everyone will just be all like 'Oh yeah, just Vash the Stampede come to visit. happens every day.' (Not.) Anyways, another awesome chapter! I was in a strange mood when I wrote my review, so it's a bit more childish than my other ones! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 02:10 EDT
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im glad you liked that chapter...i labored long and hard on it just for you(ok maybe not juuuust for you, but since you are the only one who reviewed it, we can consider it as such)...damn talking about raging hentai, geez someone needs to hose knives off(note i would sign up for the job if it became available, wet gorgeous man with raging hormones...dream come true)...and of course knives is good in bed, he is after all a "superior being"...lol...so i need to make a trigun fic eh? hmmm....the rabid plot bunnies arent given me much to work with other than another songish inspiration, now a hentai*ish chapter, that i may be able to do with little work...lol...well enough of my o so wonderful reviews that amuse and amaze...time to insert the standard "keep up the good work and update soon" phrase(i need to come up with a new one)... Ja ne~ DFA (check it out...i logged in..arent you so proud?)
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Reviewed By: Timothy (the phoanix On: June 10, 2005 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT is as great as the R vesion but better for ovies reasins. Keep up all the work and can't wait untill the next chap is up in like a few hours.
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 12:28 EDT
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You are aware you`ve gotten me addicted to your story now right? It`s soooooo good. This last chapter was excellant. It`s nice to see Knives become a somewhat likable character. Now if only Vash would get his head on straight...Update soon!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: bluemoose13 On: June 08, 2005 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh naughty naughty me!!! whoo !!! yep i'm a little hyper today, trying not to be sad, Jay is going to day care soon, but at least i get to see him all the time there. so anyway as i said on fanfiction, great chapter...lol i kinda like this one better!! Si
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Title: ::Smoking Cigarette::
Reviewed By: Amie On: June 05, 2005 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO needed that. LOL! Great, great chapter! I'm so happy for Knives and Mac. I liked the dream sequence with Wolfwood, too...I really liked the part where you described him moving his wrist to punctuate what he was saying. It really made a mental image for me - I could just see him doing that. Go, Vash, go - Meryl must be so desperately unhappy. I love this fic! Merci beaucoup!
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Reviewed By: Stephers On: June 04, 2005 20:33 EDT
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OMG! this was perfect! continue continue continue!
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 02:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my gawd!!! As awesome as ever! At last everyone has finally come to their senses. Though I was expecting the proposition to have a bit more to do with K wanting Mk as a mate? :) Ah well, I suppose you'll get to that. :) Oh oh oh, I had a question - okay, we know that M's (and now Mk's) PNc counts are going up - but does this create some sort of physical need between M & V (or Mk & K) - I mean, could that also affect why V & M are feeling so damned miserable while being apart? Not just their emotions tearing them up but their bodies are physically missing each other too? Just a question. Loving it, as always! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: ReadingWhiz89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 00:57 EDT
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O.O For the first time, I read the FF.net version AND the MM.org version. What a difference! Chapter 38 was incredible! Liked it A LOT!
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Reviewed By: ~Darkflameangel~ On: June 04, 2005 00:37 EDT
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not logged in(not a surprise there)....daaaammmn girl, well thats gonna lead to another priceless dream tonight...much appreciated though. i dont blame Mac for hurrying to his room, i probably woulda sprinted..lol..bout time knives got some loving, a hundred plus years without any lovin was bound to make him "cranky"...lol...well after that chapter, you may have just inspired me to go write that citrusy fresh chapter of Hidden Intentions that i keep promising you...hmmm, whoops back to what i was trying to type, darn visual got ahold of me for a second...there goes any hope of being productive, lol.. seriously awesome chappy! i bow down to your all encompassing greatness! keep it up...and you know the rest of the drill! DFA
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Reviewed By: S On: June 03, 2005 23:10 EDT
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Awwww! Mac-san and Knives-san are finally together! Knives-san is so in love with her, and MAc-san feels the same way about him. So sweet! (Maybe they'll get married... ^_^) Go Vash-kun! He's finally getting the courage to break it off with Jessica-chan, and then go after Meryl-san! He so does deserve Meryl-san... Milly-chan and Meryl-san centric next chater, huh? This ought to be interesting... I actually had an idea in one of my own Trigun stories that I was planning on writing- Vash-kun and Meryl-san are apart, and Meryl-san starts going out with some other men, just to get over Vash-kun. He arrives on the scene of one of her dates and gets pissed off- even drawing his gun, though just to threaten. It would make for an interesting turn of events, ne? So... I loved this chapter! Hope to see the next one soon!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 21:06 EDT
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Hello, my dear! ! ! I see some interesting developments occurring! I still enjoy your story, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but with school and all I had to catch up! And I love the direction your taking with Knives and Mckenna, not to mention the mutation as a result of sexual activities. . . Delicious! Look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: More goodness
Reviewed By: Amie On: June 03, 2005 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These chapters were great! I love the idea of the mutation that will change Meryl and allow her to life a longer life. And Knives ripping Jessica a new one - ha ha ha - LMAO! That was so good. Thank you for that. And Knives setting Vash straight, too. Please update soon! I'm looking forward to Knives breaking Vash's record. Merci beaucoup!
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