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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:39 EDT
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Eeeee! Cool. Another player. Please allow for a fangirl squee *wait for it* Okay, I'm done. But anywho, I would like to see Knives in that outfit. Okay, on to other things, this story has progressed well. I still enjoy it and I can't wait for more. . .
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Reviewed By: D.V. On: July 04, 2005 13:07 EDT
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Ooh, nice new OC - VEERRY NICE, LOL. He sounds just brutally hot - besides that, I like guys with reddish hair, LOL. Nice work - AGAIN! Vash deserves some competition.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: July 02, 2005 15:58 EDT
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Gomen! Nope didnt get ye ole outline done as you can tell...woot vacations for you! Although technically i am on vacation i should be going on a roadtrip to wisconsin in a few. seriously...i have a plot..sort of..in my head..but the celibate plot bunnies are so not helping me..oi, i posted Hidden Intentions on AFF and i have 15 reviews buddy! and almost 400 hits so far..im soo proud(i blushed at one of the reviews..)but yes..wondermus chappy as always..cookie for you! hmm so we gots another hottie on scene..what is it with me and the hottie outlaw type characters..shiznit if you made him haver curls oi...i might not survive. so how many chapters are you going to have in this story..curiousity wonders. but i best get back to cleaning the porch(ick!)...keep up the good work and a big ole cookie for you(a huge one if you update before friday).. DFA Oh yea...ill mail you the outline if you send me your e-mail again..i think i lost it...Gomen
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Title: Caden=yummy
Reviewed By: Amie On: July 02, 2005 03:07 EDT
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Yay, more chappies! Knives and McKenna are so sweet together...who'd a thunk it? You did a great job with the sparring session between Vash and Knives! You write action so well. I like Caden - I hope he's a good guy. Is he trouble for Vash, or a new light for Milly? Thanks so much for keeping up with this fic. Did I happen to mention that I really love it? LOL Merci!
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Reviewed By: S On: July 02, 2005 00:46 EDT
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I absolutely adored this chapter! I've been in DC for the past few days and this was a great thing to come home to. I had a slight suspiscion (How do you spell that anyway?) when 'Ian' was introduced about him being the Bringer of Chaos, Caden-san. This is about to get very interesting... He seems a lot like Vash-kun, and though we haven't seen him kill anyone I'm betting he will kill someone. He started with his brother, correct? Though he may have been framed- and I just reread the first chapter in which he was mentioned. Maybe he's just like Vash-kun and doesn't kill and was only framed for his brother's murder? He didn't seem like he wanted to kill the men he faced, but that could have just been a way to get his message to Cruz-san. I can hardly wait to see the boys again! Knives-san is so cool in his coat and with his glasses- just like Vash-kun. They must really really really look similar now. Well, except for the shape of teh glasses and color of the coats, anyway. I can see their takeover of the Federal Building now. Knives-san may want to just kill the humans in their way, acting like the arrogant and merciless Plant we all know and love, but Vash-kun will tell him not to and Mac-san will ask him not to. Maybe Mac-san's connection with the bulding will help, maybe it will hinder them. Either way, this is one chapter that I absolutely can't wait for! The next chapter will be so cool. I look forward to reading it.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: June 24, 2005 23:27 EDT
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hmmm....i have an odd thought for you today...i was hanging up sheets to dry outside and a bunch of socks fell out onto the ground...the first thing that popped into my head(randomly i might add) was "its like christmas...but with socks". anyways lovely chapter...and i think i have the outline for the first chapter of my trigun ficy...expect it by monday if i dont get busy(i was planning this while i was checking heifers this evening)...wondermus...knives in a sexy duster and shades..will wonders ever cease? well my dinner is getting cold so ttyl. Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: k9gmilly On: June 24, 2005 23:15 EDT
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You had me worry when vash said "Do you wanna to do this in the kitchen or the bathroom?" but now I know he was just getting his hair cut. Anyways I cant wait for the next 15 chapters. But I have to dont I?
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Reviewed By: S On: June 24, 2005 21:06 EDT
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Another excellent chapter! Knives-san and Mac-san are so good together! I just love this fanfic- I can't wait to read the next chapter! Are we going to be visiting with Meryl-san and Milly-chan, or are we sticking with Vash-kun, Knives-san, and Mac-san? I honestly hope that we stay with Vash-kun and his group- I really want to find out what happens at the Federal Building! How will Vash-kun ask (nicely, of course!) for the bounty to be removed? How will everyone reply? What difficulties will they face? How many guards do they have to fight to get in? I got carried away... I hope to see the next chapter soon! (Meryl-san being irresistable will be very interesting when she meets the next outlaw she's supposed to follow around. I mean- even though Meryl-san is still hurting over Vash-kun, taht won't stop the new guy from trying to woo her with his gentle ways... (Gentle? Hardly! ^_^) Meryl-san's reaction will be most interesting)
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Reviewed By: K9gmilly On: June 22, 2005 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally Knives and McKenna are going at it. I just love this story? This is the longest story I ever read and liked at the same time. You should have saw the look on my face when I saw that you had I think 219 pages. I'll be back in to days.
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Reviewed By: Folken_Fanel19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 10:18 EDT
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i love what you are doing with the story, i look forward to every friday when it's updated. I cant wait to see what happens.
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Title: Two great chapters!
Reviewed By: Amie On: June 19, 2005 03:09 EDT
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Things are starting to move on the Vash/Meryl front! I think you let psychotic Jessica off a little too easily, though. Should have made her suffer a bit more! Can't wait to see what will happen when the girls are on the road again. Hmm...Meryl with long hair. Will looking Rem-ier be a good thing, or a bad thing? LOL Can't wait to find out what happens! Merci!
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yet again, wonderful! Thanks for the view from M&M. It's about time for M to get out of her funk, well, as much as possible. Changes are a great thing. And of course, who else would kick her out of it! Can't wait till next week.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: necko girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I relly like your story just dont stop nd update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: S On: June 18, 2005 17:35 EDT
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I'm loving the new development! Meryl-san and Milly-chan are leaving on a new assignment, just as one very sensible doctor, an arrogant Plant, and the man with the biggest bounty on his head plan to storm the Federal Building, take control of it, and get the bounty removed. It's too cool! I think I may know what's causing the differnce with Meryl-san- could it be the thing with the Plant genes and that's why her hair's growing long and she's irrisistable? (What I wouldn't give to be irrisistable to men... ^_^) So Meryl-san is going to get a change of traveling uniform? Her appearence is changing quite a bit- what if Vash-kun doesn't recognize her? That would be so funny if Meryl-san and Milly-chan were in the area of the Federal Building when Vash-kun, Mac-san, and Knives-san take over the Federal Building. Since Knives-san has to teach Vash-kun how to use his powers as a Plant- and that would take three weeks- then Meryl-san and Milly-chan would have had to have found their new charge. This ought to be interesting!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 00:20 EDT
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hmmmm...nope my plot bunnies are celibate..but randomly at like 2 in the morning last night i had the tickle of a plot, now i must find a direction to take it.(must mean my plot bunnies are starting to act like rabbits again!)hmmm a whole chapter with meryl and milly...milly does amuse me so..too bad they killed off wolfwood in the series, that always angrified me. missed our dear gorgeous specimen of male flesh in this one..aka Knives and Vash...but yes wonderful chapter as always...so therefore since i went through all the trouble of signing in this time(and dont let your ego get all big from it either...lol)the next chapter should be super fantastic wonderful eh? lol keep it up!! Ja ne~ DFA
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