| "Forever Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 199 ] |
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Title: Awww....
Reviewed By: Amie On: July 26, 2005 14:58 EDT
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The Knives and McKenna scene was so sweet. Boy, her ex-fiancee was a piece of work. Good hit, Alexander! Hmmm, what's Caden going back for? Can't wait to find out! Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 00:48 EDT
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otay...will draw you a caden pic..you just have to give me super duper extra special descriptions so i can get a good mental picture. already i have an idea..but it needs work...kinda like my story..alas the rally is drawing nearer(means i get money..but o such hassle...and the nice hot weather inspires sweaty bikers..ick)the wedding...didnt suck to horribly(there was open bar..but that didnt apply to those of us under 21)..got hit on by two 17 years...an ego boost despite the fact they were snockered. yea! fluffy moment between mac and knives. and you put Caden in the chapter, that made me happy! more moments with him are needed..oi! mediaminer isnt sending me notification emails anymore...what a rip! i about missed your chapter and one of my other favorite story chapters..made me angry..but i better go to bed.. gotta get up early to do chores before it gets warmish. oi...since you are leaving i say you should post a chapter before you go(and one when you get back)...pretty pwease..with sugar on top! well now im leaving...send me that caden description so i can start on that picture. Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 17:17 EDT
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Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I am still here and still enjoying this fic. Of all the fics I've read that center around Trigun, this is the best. I look forward to it every week. . . Thanks for keeping it going!
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: k9gmilly On: July 22, 2005 02:55 EDT
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Sorry i havent reviewed in a while but ive been busy and bored so i finally decided to check my email and your story was there i mean it was like a Miracle. and the chapter was great like the others of course.well i cant wait until wait i think the next chapter is coming today. well i'll be back in a couple of hours. other then that ta tah for now.
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Title: Alexander!
Reviewed By: Amie On: July 20, 2005 14:02 EDT
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Back from vacay and two, count 'em, two great chapters. Alexander...LOL! I love that name, though. The take over was very exciting. Now Vash and Kniv-um, Alexander are the good guys - too cool. I liked McKenna's father. Can't wait until the Vash-gumi is back together. Thanks so much for writing! Merci!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing!! I stayed up most of the night reading it, and finished reading it this afternoon. I really enjoyed reading this, please keep up the awesome work, I can't wait to read more chapters, especially after Vash and Meryl are reunited!!!
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 10:02 EDT
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Yet another great chapter. One question though...Alexander? Too funny. My obsession grows as you update, so I will sit impatiently until the next chapter comes out.
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Reviewed By: Aaml4ever On: July 16, 2005 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the first thing that i would like to say is that you are a very talented author and that this fanfic is one of the greatest stories that i have ever read. Also this has got to be one of the longest fanfic ever written, i mean damn is is long. not that it is a bad thing but this stroy so far has taken me upwards of up to 5 hours to read. Longer than i spent on an actual book.This story is worth being published or even animated. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: S On: July 16, 2005 02:46 EDT
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Awesome job, per usual! I did not see teh whole Federal Marshal thing coming! That threw me for a loop! I'm not going to write as long a review this time- I have the new Harry Potter book on my desk and I'm only on page 70-something. A love triangle between Meryl-san, Caden-san, and Vash-kun would be so cool! Or even Meryl-san, Milly-chan, and Caden-san. Milly-chan needs someone since Wolfwood-san died... and we all (hopefully) know that Meryl-san and Vash-kun belong together. Meybe Vash-kun will go after Caden-san first and he'll arrest him, getting Meryl-san back in the process? Maybe Mac-san's old fiancee will reapper, begging her to come back to him. Knives-san will obviously put him in his place for trying, but it would be interesting to see him reappear!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: July 15, 2005 23:43 EDT
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Oi...yea i did check it out...believe you me, plenty of hentai images popped into my lil blonde head. umm yea...story definately needs some barry white and a whole lot of alcohol to induce plot bunny procreation. that and i just got a whole bunch of inuyasha dvds that have been sucking up all my time..which then led to me doing some more drawings(which i may have to draw you a caden picture grr)...well oh balls...i have to go to a wedding tomorrow so i better go find something decent to wear...uggh(one of my classmates) i feel like such an old maid some days...anywhosits..i should send you a rough outline for my story or general plot idea...but yes..off i go...oi...one more thought, there better be some caden in the next chappy..this character must be explored. arigato.. Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: AngelQueen42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 15:36 EDT
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You have to update soon! Please! I beg you!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: July 10, 2005 01:29 EDT
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Oi! Yea..you should post it there. uggh...so many troubles with the new fic...it hates me. curse the celibate plot bunnies....If i ever get to wisconsin(planning is not working with tme) i probably will end up smuggling back cheese too. Did you enjoy my loverly picture? Hope so...o and now that i have this excellant new mental image, Can i have Caden since you wont let me have Vash? Dang my desire for tall men with dimples...curses...well lovely chapter and whatnot...i think it is time to go sleepy sleepy since i dont have to go pick rye out of the wheatfield in the obscenely hot weather tomorrow..keep up the good work and update and all that whatnot..you know the drill... Ja Ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow - I just had some catching up to do! And boy did I miss a lot while I was gone. I love the new guy - I bet he's gorgeous!!! A man for our lonely little Ms. Thompson? :) *sigh* Getting ready to drive halfway across the US - and no internet for 2 weeks - I'll be doing some catch up again! It's worth it - the story just keeps getting better!
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Reviewed By: S On: July 08, 2005 23:13 EDT
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(Continued from last review) I'll only have a bit of time in the morning- and I have a 6 AM flight on the 17th)
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Reviewed By: S On: July 08, 2005 23:12 EDT
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*jumps for joy* I absolutely loved this chapter! Maybe we're trying for a Caden-san/Milly-chan pairing? He seems really drawn to her. Of course, I could be wrong. The interaction between Knives-san and Mac-san was just adorable. It showed in every word how much he cares for her- it was so sweet! He managed to remain in character and care about someone- I loved it. Vash-kun is acting like his old self again- like he was when he was with Meryl-san. Knives-san is getting ready to start some serious mayhem- he's happy and a bit more carefree. I can't wait to see what happens when they get inside the Federal Building. I hope the next chapter comes out soon! I wonder if something will happen to Mac-san. I mean, she's told to go to a safe place, but what if someone sees her and she has to get help from someone? (Like Knives-san.) He'd probably warn Vash-kun that he was going after Mac-san as he was leaving, right? Knives-san loves Mac-san too much to tell her to wait a moment. Well, that's if Mac-san can contact him without him opening up the connection. I forget if she's done this before, gomen nasai! I'm leaving for three weeks, starting the 17th, so I won't be able to read the story while I'm gone. There might be a few computers, butI may not have the time to sit there, read the story, and then write a long review. (Could you please please please try to have the next chapter up by the 15th? I'll be busy most of the day on the 16th- I'll only have a bit of time in the morning- and |
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