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Title: Awesome Job
Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: August 18, 2005 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant possibly tell you how great the last chapter was, I thought that it was great how they broadcasted the annoucement of Vash's bounty. The part when Meryl was affected by how Vash was now free to live his life "With another person" that part made my day. Then came the cliffhanger *sighs* how very irritating.XD Good luck with the next update.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 23:14 EDT
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Eh? That's it? *sigh* Guess I'll have to wait until next update. ARGH! Anywho, awesome job once more. Can't wait. As much as I like Caden, I really hope that he ends up with Milly, because Vash and Meryl are supposed to be together in my mind. . . But author's preference. Thanks again for the update.
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think you're just having fun confusing me! He definately is a flirt! I can't wait for the next chapter. Isn't Caden a darling for playing on V's jealousy that way? :) I suppose we'll see, eh?
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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: sexy77 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aine - I got hooked on your story a couple of months ago and have been following it ever since! I love your originality, maturity and your ability to leave me hanging in suspense until the next chapter!Keep up the great work!Much love!
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Title: 100th Review!
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 13, 2005 19:32 EDT
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I'm honored to have been your 100th review! Congratulations!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Amie On: August 13, 2005 19:30 EDT
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This is going to be FUN! I have to feel a little sorry for Vash, though. I can't wait until Meryl sees him. Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 14:36 EDT
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umm...no i still have to work 2 more days for the rally, then ill be done. ooo fluffy moment! i like the fluffy fluffy. more fluffy caden/milly moments are in order. i see much pain and bruises in the next chapter for a certain blonde gunman. when the rally is over i shall try to get started on you picture. but only if you give me a really good chapter...heee hee... but i better go eat now.. Ja ne~ DFA (signed in again....better write this momentous occasion down)
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Reviewed By: S On: August 12, 2005 22:11 EDT
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It's back to 'S' again! (I was signed in last time and didn't feel like signing out...) I loved this chapter! The touch with the radio mentioned that Vash-kun's bounty was gone was excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter- how will Meryl-san react when she sees Vash-kun? I also want to find out what happens after Caden-san says that Meryl-san is HIS insurance girl now. Will Vash-kun get all defensive and cause a scene? Maybe Meryl-san will walk in just in time to hear what's going on? It would be interesting if she heard Vash-kun's voice and stayed out of the bar, but listened as he told how he went through hell and high water to try and get her back. Or perhaps she'll have paused outside when she heard Vash-kun's voice and then Caden-san said something to make Vash-kun leave and he and Meryl-san run into each other... I love the way you're slowly developing the relationship between Caden-san and Milly-chan- they would make a perfect pair!
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Reviewed By: LiLlAdY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and i just found it today i really hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, was I really wrong about the Caden and Milly thing?! :) But you know, a bit of jealousy can never hurt a great story. It just keeps getting better. Here I am half-way across the country and still have this to depend on! Keep it way up, girl!
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Reviewed By: Bookkbaby84 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:50 EDT
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I loved this chapter! I almost forgot who Keele-san was, but then I remembered when Meryl-san and Milly-chan told Caden-san about him. I do hope that Vash-kun catches up to Meryl-san and she takes him back. I hope that Caden-san gets his name cleared- and I would also love to see Mac-san and Knives-san in a traditional ceremony, but that may be pushing Knives-san a bit too far... I hope to see the next chapter out soon!
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Title: just accept the infernal spam code
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 12:54 EDT
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it will be a bit on the doodle...ah the rally...its amazing the number of endearments you pickup in one day with a spaghetti strap top..eh..back on track now..i'll get right on that doodle after work.hmmm...i feel the need for more fluffy caden moments..yep..oi! how was the thingy(cant remember what you had to do)? dont you owe us another chapter? You should since im signed in 2 times in a row..impossible! best go take a shower now! Ja ne~ DFA
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Reviewed By: shayniemaisonnueve On: August 06, 2005 00:49 EDT
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I love the fic1 It's so original! You write a perfect Vash, and Milly is spot on! I really like the new guy - I think basing him on Brandon Heat was brill! He's brutally hott - hot with two 'T's, honey, LOL! God, you've got talent - a great plot and characters with depth. Thanks so much! I'd definitely recommend this fic! (I'd love to see what you could do with a 'Hellsing' fic, ::cough, cough::. Just sayin...!) ^_~
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Reviewed By: wench On: July 29, 2005 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far.... such a cute moment between those two!!! can't wait for another chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 20:13 EDT
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I just had to add that ironically enough, Alexander means 'protector of mankind' or something along those lines. Too funny when you think about Knives in that sense.
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