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Title: TGIF
Reviewed By: Sara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOO happy its friday again! I do so enjoy a good bedtime story. Is there going to be more mush? I just love mush. Especially in dry sarcastic tones. Seriously! I am looking forward to next week! Sara
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: September 30, 2005 22:56 EDT
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well balls...you did give me my milly and caden moment, not quite what i had in mind, but there is something to be said for plot development(sides i had way to much time to let my deviant mind run amuk driving home today as my car recently decided to become a flaming piece of shit and the electrical(my radio, power locks, air conditioner, interior lights, horn) decided to take a hike sunday night when the horn was randomly blaring and the cops had to come wake my ass up and tell me it was happening...yes it was a shitty night)hmmm..so you might have to hook me up with beemer boy, since my wheels suck now...lol...hung like a horse? that reminds me of another email i just got..you might like it...liked the chapter, so Caden aint human eh? Balls! What is it with these darn non-human beautiful men? lol...reminds me so much of my new anime love, Bleach! You have to see it..it so rocks my socks. Back on track now...my narrative senses are tingling...Whats that narrative senses? There is going to be some bad guy ass kicking in the future...and timmy fell down the well?(sorry Lassie moment..i had to say it)I cant wait for the next chapter.... Ja ne~ Darkflameangel Quote for the day~"If at first you dont succeed, skydiving probably isnt for you."
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:43 EDT
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Once again, my dear Aine, you leave us wanting more. I'm so glad that you have kept writing this, I enjoy it so much! Thanks again and I look forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 22:43 EDT
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Wow. You where right, this chapter had more twists and turns then a bag of pretzels! Update again soon, and have Vash strike a pose!! I love it when he strikes his doofy, yet lovable, poses.
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Reviewed By: Stephers On: September 30, 2005 22:17 EDT
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OMG! when are you going to update?
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Title: great
Reviewed By: a_cute_bunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo great. I wait for every friday now. keep up the good work. i love your story! Sara
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YOU ARE EVIL!!! But wonderful too. :)
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 13:47 EDT
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I hate cliff hangers! You should've had Vash just show up and save Meyrl. Now I have to wait. Update again really, really soon so Vash can save Meryl and they can have a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: S On: September 24, 2005 00:28 EDT
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Okay... now I am starting to think that you enjoy our torture. Or at least, Meryl-san's and Vash-kun's. I can't wait to find out what happens when one enraged Humanoid Typhoon, one pompus but protective Plant, one fiery female Federal Marshal, a best friend, and a new charge decide to attack Cruz for abducting Meryl-san. Vash-kun will obviously be enraged- most likely at himself for not getting there quick enough. (Guilt trip before the anger.) Mac-san will be sorrowful and guilty, and Knives-kun will comfort her while he feels pity but keeps a cool head. At least, I assume so. Milly-chan willbe so sad, and she and Caden-san will probably get closer while he comforts her in the loss of her best friend. Ohh.... this oughta be interesting! Now that Vash-kun knows the Meryl-san loves him back, he'll be gung-ho about getting her back and will stop at nothing. We'll get to see him really steamed now. Watch your back Cruz. They're coming for you.
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 00:08 EDT
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Will our favorite couple EVER get a break? Gah! Another great chapter, I can`t wait to see how things progress for our little group.
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Reviewed By: lonestar On: September 23, 2005 23:02 EDT
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Just wanted to say I love your fic. Knives is just too funny with his calling McKenna "woman" and being an arrogant ass. I like how you portray the characters.
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Title: heres a review if the spam code ever works
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: September 23, 2005 21:48 EDT
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how cruel!?! not fair...you leave me with a cliffy, you dont post early, AND no Caden and Milly...thats just cold..lol...jk...eh no rolling sweatily around in the sheets, poor sexually frustrated vash. hmmm, i was wondering when there was going to be a twist in the ole plot...now i know... Ummm, the party kinda sucked for me as i was the youngest one there...so shoulda went to visit my friend instead...question of the week, so is everyone and their dog trying to set me up or what? i swear...lol...i intend to go post one of the picks as soon as i get signed in...feel free to link to it...You know my usual requests and what not...hop to it...lol jk..or am i? Mmwahahaaa! Ja ne DFA
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Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: September 18, 2005 22:29 EDT
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That was a great chapter. Have I told you just how much I hate cliff hangers lately cuz I really hate them. Oh well it just means that I will have to come back here next week for the next update. Good luck on the next chapter ~FC
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 16:35 EDT
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Update again soon! I want to know if Meryl will take Vash back now or if she'll blow him off again, for good this time.
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Title: Holy balls! Awesome chapter!!
Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: September 17, 2005 01:57 EDT
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Wooot! Yes i loved the chapter almost as much as the teaser. might have fallen off my computer chair if I somehow managed to come up with an even better sexy half naked caden image. get 'r done Vash! bout time he overcame the testosterone filled baka gene and got his broom-head in gear as far as meryl is concerned.GASP! that was a horrible cliffy! *sounds of sharpening of pitchforks can be heard* Hmmm....i might be persuaded to post one or two of those pictures on my MM account. You will have to choose which ones if i am sufficiently persuaded. 7 days!!!!! I dont think i can wait that long...*Gasp..cough...shake...shudder...other Forever Mine withdrawl symptoms* I just cant take the tension anymore(sexual and otherwise) between our dear characters. Well i best get to sleepy since i have to go to a party tomorrow night for all of us employees that used to work there before they closed it down...man it is just so depressing driving by where that building used to stand...anyways...off i shall happily go to dream of wet half naked gorgeous Caden like mens...lol..jk*(or am i)Keep up the kickin' work!!! Ja ne~ DFA
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