| "Forever Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 199 ] |
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: Senn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 00:23 EDT
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So I cheated and I decided to leave you comments on here. I noticed that you updated MediaMiner before Fanfic and plus I love reading your replys to my comments. I'm hopin gyou do recognize me from Fanfic. :D Yes, you are incredibly evil and that was such a cliff hanger. but I'm glad to FINALLY got (or is about to) talk to Meryl and straighten things out. Man this has been such a great week. Our football team finally beat our rivals after losing for 23 years.haha. I'm looking forward to next Friday!!!! love and peace! -Sen
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ohhhhh I like it! Finally everyone is saying what they mean. And of course, it was Milly who got the ball rolling! Is she awesome or what?! I can't wait to see how M will respond. She has been hurt, and may not just rush back to V... but you never know! Till then. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: S On: September 16, 2005 22:21 EDT
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Awwwww! That had to be one of the sweetest cliffhangers I have ever had the pleasure of reading- can we just fast forward 168 hours (or 7 days) so we can find out what Meryl-san has to say to Vash-kun? I love the way you advanced Caden-san and Milly-chan's relationship- those two are so meant for each other. Knives-kun and Mac-san didn't appear much in this chapter, but a paragraph about them would have seemed a bit out of place as they are already happily in love and attached to each other. Cadden-san and Milly-chan have yet to form those bonds, and Vash-kun and Meryl-san need to find their connection and layer it with their will and true emotions so it won't get broken by a stupid child's selfish wish ever again. (Jessica-chan sneezes in the background) I can't wait to find out how Meryl-san reacts to this new bit of information- and I wonder how the plot will twist next time? We still have a way to go until the end, correct? Cruz-san needs to get his just desserts, after all...
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Title: Short and Simple
Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: September 13, 2005 01:01 EDT
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I really loved this chapter, I just wanna beat Vash for acting like such a *******, Caden too. DARN CLIFFHANGERS, I HATE YOU ALL SOO MUCH!!!!^^. Keep up the great work, youll know I will review not much I can do since I am soo odssessed with it. I for I think 4 am would count as really early.
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Title: YOU...
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko (Not logged in) On: September 11, 2005 21:57 EDT
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And your evil cliffies!! Why do you torture us like this? I MUST read more, keep up the exellent writing! ^^
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Reviewed By: childofdarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 20:51 EDT
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Okay, Vash has officaly reached a new level of stupidity. Making a girl jealous is the absolute last thing you do! At this point, I`m saying Meryl deserves better. Maybe not Caden, but if Vash is going to continue to hurt her like this, then she should get herself a new man.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 00:59 EDT
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uggh...with the cliffy. Hmmm....Vash's "Meryl getting back" method is not what i would call a winner. I cant say id be likely to take a guy back after something like that, unless i was given some super good reasons. Poor girl...Oi...I can see some serious beatings in the future or some dismal moping...not sure...Vash is sure in a pickle.. Well Cadens diversion worked a bit too well. I can so see why Meryl was shall we say stunned into submission..daaaang...Darn you and your cliffy of leaving us hanging with Vash witnessing said "ardently kissing" moment...I so cant wait till the next chapter....Curse you *all the while bowing down to Aine's fanfiction greatness*....Dont suppose you could release that next chapter early eh?...naw...didnt think so...I have a wonderful colored version of that Caden pic for you...well i better go before my thoughts run away with me...Hmmm....what does Knives think about all of this i wonder...interesting.... Ja ne DFA
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Reviewed By: Mageblood On: September 10, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very creative way to turn the story!, anthing can happen now. what will vash do? go balistic and try to hurt and kill or just Sucome to the pain and once again become an empyt shell??????? I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!. But hopfully i will find out next week, stay great and Loveable to your readers.
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Reviewed By: Lady moon On: September 09, 2005 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I soooo can not wait till next friday!!!! I soooooo hate clifs but it was a very nice set up!! insperation to you and your work!
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Reviewed By: amber_waves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You do know that you're killing us, don't you?!?!?! All the back and forth... at least we know you won't be wrapping it up anytime soon! I think V went way to far... he really just needs a hard kick to the ass! I think M is too messed up to be responsible for anything anymore. But it doesn't mean she can't open her mouth either. Anyhow, till next week.
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Reviewed By: Bob13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 21:21 EDT
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Poor Vash! How could Meryl do this to him!? But the moron (Vash) could've just explained everything to Meryl in the first place. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: S On: September 09, 2005 20:49 EDT
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Oh my. I never thought that Caden-san would hide the map somewhere like that! Vash-kun's idea to pretend to sleep with that whore was an excellent idea. Bad on his move, but it held with the story and made it that much more interesting! My, my, how the tables have turned. Meryl-san doesn't even know she's hurting Vash-kun because she doesn't know he saw Caden-san 'kiss' her. Vash-kun doesn't know that Caden-san and Meryl-san aren't lovers. It's all a tangled up mess of miscommunication- and how will this latest mess get straightened out? I wonder if Knives-kun (He seems so lieable now I just can't call him '-san' anymore, but don't tell him that!) will tell Vash-kun what actually went on. He may just let his brother sort it out because Vash-kun got himself into this mess. Who knows? Maybe this will give Vash-kun the push he needs to talk to Meryl-san honestly.\ Until next time!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 17:32 EDT
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*Sigh* I know that it makes the story more interesting, hence I am still here, but dammit, I wish they would kiss and make up. Thanks again for another awesome chapter that makes me want to read more. . .
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Reviewed By: Aaml4everFC On: September 05, 2005 04:32 EDT
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Im not going to write a very long review this time, the first and foremost reason being that its 4:39 am and it's a school day. I absolutly loved this chapter!I dont know what darkflameangel's problem is but if a girl came up to me like Vash had done, I would've been all for it. Im looking forward to seeing caden start "wooing" milly as well as the wolfwood/Rem pairings. Im soo looking forward to finding out what kind of idea the gunman has come up with this time^^ ~Aaml4everFC
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Reviewed By: S On: September 03, 2005 22:11 EDT
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Gomen nasia! I haven't been able to read or review for a while, but I must say things are coming along nicely! I totally believed the way Meryl-san acted when Vash-kun and Caden-san fought. Vash-kun even apologized to her afterwards! I do wonder what Vash-kun is hiding up his sleeve. Will he attempt to push the 'I-no-longer-care-for-you-and-am-now-a-womanizer-worse-than-ever-before' charade to teh limits? Will Meryl-san break down and go to him? Ah, choices, choices... The hint about Caden-san and Milly-chan's possible romance was very micely done. You haven't neglected Knives-san and Mac-san either. Now, if only Meryl-san and Vash-kun got their acts together... A wonderful chapter, as always!
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