| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: January 16, 2005 11:10 CST
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"..blow an ass gasket.." LOL, I love that saying when it is as Sess expense!
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Reviewed By: Sari15 NSI On: January 16, 2005 08:49 CST
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Wow....when they fall, they fall don't they. I can't believe he might just let her take the picture for him....and he was just so sweet to her trying to get her mind off of everything. She's had a rough time with all of the stuff going on with her biological parents. I only hope that everything turns out okay, it would be hard for anyone to deal with meeting them.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 00:31 CST
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Did I hear right? He has offically agreed to do the calendar...hehe. Sierra has used her powers of persuasion for the good of...drooling fangirls! LoL --- Jeeze, much as I want to just dismiss the seemingly conniving Kari, it looks like someone is sabotoging her at work. Once is bad enough and can look like an accident, but twice is more than coincidence. Now the question is "Who?" and "Why?" And how far is Toga going to be dragged into it? --- Great chapter.
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Title: =( I did too review the last chapter... look below =)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 23:54 CST
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Poor Sierra... she just not getting her happily ever after is she? I'm glad she gets to do the photo shoot for Toga though, I bet that'll be tons of fun!! Aunt Gome called... I wonder when Daddy is going to make a reappearance...
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 11:37 CST
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Such a hard place to be. I cannot claim to know what Sierra is going through specifically, but I do know that having that much emotion bottled up within oneself is hard... very hard. Toga is being wonderful support for her and that's all she really needs for now. She's too emotionally unstable to think about forever, ne? Ahhh, the beach... AND a camera... I'm sure Sierra will be nicely distracted in the next chapter or two. I wonder what's going on back in Tokyo? What's Sesshoumaru up to? And how are the twins misbehaving? And isn't Huntington's disease a genetic disorder?
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:09 CST
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Now I'm lost again.. or maybe it is still. It is still early in this "Meet the Parents" thing. I'm sure more will be discovered. I see that you have a book in your story again. Books in your stories always seem to provide the answers...
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Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 16:51 CST
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This has become one of favortie fanfics, i literally drink them in anytime I see a new one! lol I really love toga and sierra, they are excellent characters! I really wonder what is in sierra's past...or when toga and her will actually become 'mates'.
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Title: ha ha i mock you mmorg by not signing in =)
Reviewed By: angelfish007 On: January 12, 2005 16:16 CST
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::wallows in the angst:: ahhh i love the angst as much as the fluff =) poor Sierra... i can understand her mixed and hard emotions... i can't relate directly bc i'm not adopted, but i can understand her feelings, it has to be hard... you know, i'm sure Toga could find MANY ways to get Sierra's mind of things =) ::hehehe, petting the puppy! chasing the cat!:: =) ... how long will it take Sierra to get to reading that book? i am really interested about her past ... also, will she see her parents again? is this disease genetic? ahhh sooooo many questions! lol cant wait until next chapter! (this one wsa terrificly written as always, especially capturing Sierra's emotions) =)
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 16:01 CST
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Very sweet, very sad. I love how you do that in your writing, mix sadness with beauty....
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Reviewed By: aitu-- not signed in On: January 12, 2005 14:25 CST
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Hmm. In response to Toga's final thought.. I know a few things you could do that would keep Sierra's mind off her adoptive parents... *wink wink* The questions is: will you take my advise and do them???! Oh i love this story, yes I do, and I am back to singing, in my review. Can't wait for more! Take care SUUUUUUUUEEEEEE!!! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 14:14 CST
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Sierra has a heavy load right now and Toga is taking the perfect stance...lovingly supportive. Her Rock. *sigh* Yeah...I think Toga on the beach with lots of skin showing will be a big distraction for her. If that dosen't get her mind off of things, she's brain-dead. LoL, great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Akihanah(too lazy to sign in) On: January 11, 2005 22:23 CST
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Aww, kawaii. I think Kari is out to get Toga. She may be a good person, but she has the tendancy to kill any romantic anything going on between Sierra and Toga. I think its funny that Sierra want s Toga to go onto the beefcake calendar. Most girls i know would have serious issues with their boyfriends doing something like that. I've never had a boyfriend, so i can't really say. I think the people in this story are just really really really hentai. That, or I'm just sheltered.
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 15:50 CST
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The Fluff! Oh lord the fluff! I LOVE THE FLUFFYNESS! that was soo cute, and the whole sierra growling thing, maybe he should tell her. Oh boy, I've been getting up at 4 in the mourning to read this story, FOUR IN THE MOURNING! I LOVE...no wait...I ADORE THIS STORY TO DEATH!!!!!!!!
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Title: Drama!
Reviewed By: chichiwvu-nsi On: January 10, 2005 18:51 CST
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drama drama drama drama! yay!!!! I LOVE drama! lol.. at least in stories. I love how sierra is becoming possessive of Toga like Toga is of her.. There is so much that can happen at this point of the story. and the office buddy.. Why do i feel like she is planning something devious and evil?
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Reviewed By: pyro007 On: January 09, 2005 23:41 CST
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now there is some dog slobber i would actually like to encounter hehehe ... that line was priceless, and him telling sierra he can smell her lol ... they are so adorable together, ::enjoying the fluff before the angst comes charging in:: now is Kari just damn paranoid that people in the company are out to get her? or is there someone trying to get her fired? damn these little questions that just nag at me and i can't let go of lol =)
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