| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: *sob*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 13:05 CST
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Toga's pain is a tangible thing. How much more can he bear? He even forgot his 'fluff' -- Something has got to give. This goes beyond stubborness. It's like a vicious pain loop that the body doesn't know how to stop anymore, (I've seen that kind of pain, it took 3 days of straight morphine to stop it, and I wouldn't wish it on anyone) only this is emotional. I think that Sierra and Toga's problem needs outside assistance now to fix it. --- Waiting anxiously for solution!! Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hunter.88 On: February 05, 2005 22:41 CST
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Oh shit....Kari kissed Toga...and I'm guessing Brent was the one in the car..?--Great fic, keep it up! ^^
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:03 CST
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Yep, saw that kiss coming from a mile away. Silly girl. I love the idea of Kagome trying to play match maker or at least re-match maker between Sierra and Toga. Hmmm...with Inu-Yasha and Kagome around if the truth slips, Toga might actually learn a solution to his problem. Of course then there's the question of how pissed Sessy's gonna be when he finds out.
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 05, 2005 12:52 CST
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Wow, it just keeps going. Such drama....whew! Anyways, It seems like Toga isn't handling it very well at all..wonder what will happen to him.
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Title: Did we just break the speed limit? Thank God for seat belts...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 12:23 CST
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Well, I sure didn't even consider Mike to be the contract-stealing culprit! Toga's right; if he wanted to fire her, he should have. But no, he goes to extreme lengths to color her incompetent. That just smells wrong. There has to be more to it. Why hire her only to set her up? Someone else must be pulling the strings and Mike's just a puppet. --- Yay! Auntie Gome and Uncle Yasha are here, but jet-lagged and hungry (What do you mean, there's no ramen?!?) LOL -- This chapter was fast-paced. Toga is furious at his now ex-boss, still torn over Sierra, disgusted with himself and Kari over her grateful kiss, (although it looks like she wanted more than to just be friends) he's also feeling guilty for lying to his Aunt and Uncle, coupled with the overwhelming loss of hope for his relationship with Sierra...the poor boy must feel like he's losing his mind. --- And now I'm curious about the man in the parking garage who was watching. Soo many things to consider. -- Great chapter!
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Title: Uh-oh
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Considering that mystery man's reaction to Kari kissing Toga, I take it that he was Brent. And if that was Brent, I bet he'll pop up later to accuse Toga of cheating on Sierra before they split up and try to beat the crap out of him and Toga won't lift a finger against him since Brent is Sierra's brother. *sighs* Poor Toga, but maybe now that Kagome and Yasha are here, things will start getting betteer for him. I feel so sorry for Yasha having to deal with that plane ride. I've had my fair share of ear-popping before, but I don't think my experiences could compare with Yasha's. Anyways, great chapter Sueric. ^_^
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: February 05, 2005 11:50 CST
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It would be best for Toga to loose it when Kagome and Inuyasha are there to catch him - poor baby - he's so sad. I feel bad for him too. Uncle and Auntie will make it better - or at least help him help himself
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 10:48 CST
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OH, I don't like it... It was Brent in the car, wasn't it? And now that Toga's restrains are stretch to their limits, oh that can't be good... What will save them from themselves (Brent's foolishness of thinking himself the stronger man and Toga's sanity slipping - will is youkai blood protect him full force?) It will take a miracle for them to go out of that confrontation unscratched. Will it be InuYasha and Kagome? Sierra passing by? Or even Sess finally trying to speak to Toga following Kagura's threats? Can't wait for your update ;-) MouF
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 10:35 CST
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O.o dead puppy boy o.O I'm surprised Yasha managed to keep his temper in check. And Kagome's desire to meddle is precious... and SO Kagome. I'm betting Sierra will be finding out about this kiss from the mysterious figure, LOL. And I wouldn't want to be Toga when Sie shows up. Though I can just see poor dejected puppy kind of quietly saying to Sie, you don't want me, but no one else can have me either? I thought you rejected me so I could find someone else. Oh, gah, the saddness coming up is just... overwhelming. I think I'll need tissues ::sniffles::
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Reviewed By: D.V. On: February 05, 2005 10:29 CST
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WHA-?! She kissed him?! The wench must diiie! Oh, man, this chapter made my heart hurt... ::sniff::
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Reviewed By: kyonarai(NSI) On: February 05, 2005 10:27 CST
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UGH! KARI! THAT LOW DOWN SNEAKY SON OF A BASTARD! TELL HER TO KEEP HER DAMN LIPS OFF TOGA! Ok I'm done....Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 11:54 CST
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Sue, what are you doing to the poor puppy?? Poor Toga! Anyways great chapter as always...just wanted to let you know that I was still around. I'm sure you get so lonely with so few review of your stories. I thought I would try to keep you fingers busy by mentioning my name in the closing credits of each chapter-- see how much I care about you? Anyways, hope you're having a great day X)
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Reviewed By: Kadaede(NSI) On: February 02, 2005 07:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knopw I am making a stab at the obvious here, but if Toga and Sierra mate, wouldn't his Youkai blood purify or destroy the disease?
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Reviewed By: kolohe(notsignedin) On: February 02, 2005 01:29 CST
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arrgghh why didn't i make that connection before?! "sango"... "coral"... hellooo, kolohe. haha well i thought that was pretty darn clever sueric. it adds a very nice twist to the story. damn it, kari, leave toga alone... >_< ... although i'm quite sure toga won't pursue anything with her, since he's already chosen sierra. mou sesshoumaru, stop being so pigheaded... kagura , break those fans out of retirement and use him for target practice. maybe a few wind blades will knock him out of the hole he's dug for himself. looking forward to the next chap, as always.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 23:37 CST
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I think Toga is incredible, keeping the fact that this is killing him in order to spare Sierra from the pain that knowledge would bring. I'm so glad Kagome and Yasha are going to come charging in to the rescue. =) Sesshoumaru apparently still has his head located in his anus... Kagura should whip out her fans and get her mate to shape up... though he's too intelligent to not come around eventually. And how does Kari fit into all this? Is she really interested in trying to become a bit of rebound fun?
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