| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 15:37 CST
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Interesting.... but then your chapters always are. We'll have to see what comes of this transfusion idea. You mentioned you've written some other stories aside from your fanfiction and The Legend of the Grimoire. What were they?
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Reviewed By: Aitu---not signed in On: March 08, 2005 14:51 CST
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Ouu--- very interesting indeed! This marking sounds like some nasty business! te he he. I thought that Toga's cousin would have given him much more crap than that. I suppose there is always that chance that I just might be wrong! hehe. Well Sue, I'm going to be skipping out on you for awhile-- time to spend some time on the Mexican Rivera--- yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyey! So take care, and I look forward to catching up on all my reading when I get back! Hasta Luego! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 14:21 CST
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Great chapter as always Sue! Question, I can understand why Kagome, Rin and now Sierra have to be marked in order to extend their life, but why did Sesshomaru have to mark Kagura since she is a youkai and should already have a life-span that matches his? Am I confusing things with your other stories where it was simply the act of making love with the exchange of body fluids and scents, were the only things necessary to mark your mate?
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 08, 2005 13:59 CST
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Oi! Kich is one smart puppy!!
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 13:18 CST
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Oooookay...raise your hand if you feel incredibly stupid. ::raises hand:: I can't believe that I didn't think of such a simple solution! If it works...well, it'd be a lot easier than the alternative. Then again, maybe it *shouldn't* be easy (as nothing in life worth having ever is). Hmmmm.... Another brilliant chappie!
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Title: Ah haa.....
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 11:26 CST
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Transfusion...sometimes the answer is so simple, it could be staring you right in the face and you wouldn't know it. Why would anyone ever make the connection between an old 'magical' custom among youkai and a modern human medical practice? "Oh, thy devious mind dost bedazzle mine eye." If 'marking' was a thing of the past before, it's really going to be retired if the transfusion works. Yay for Toga & Sierra and for all future mixed pairings!!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 08, 2005 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Blood transfusion*!! ::slaps self on forehead:: if this works, you may have single-handedly revolutionized the marking process! Leave it to you to think beyond the phalanx. Highly plausible that this next generation of Inus, being raised and schooled in contemporary times & institutions, would theorize this option...I am *so* looking fwd to the detonations, however, when Inuyasha, then Sesshomaru hear this. (bad Washuu,bad!:D). Kichiro,not having been mated yet,and educated conventionally-despite also being steeped in youkai traditions,but which remain more abstract in this day and age--cannot fully grasp the souls intertwining in the process, the youkai urge for completion...through mating. Thoroughly enjoyable as always, the banter between the 3 Inu sons, as well as Kagome and Inuyasha's effects. :) Q,please:Had you indicated *5* years occur between Sienna and Toga's mating and...*cough*...Purity 3's...'interesting' occurence? (spoilers would be so rude,whoever's reading this other than Sueric should check out Purity 3--dynamite story!) Thanks! :)
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 08, 2005 10:14 CST
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Blood transfusion! Good idea. Not nearly as dramatic though. I liked the bit about the soda with the glass ball. I saw one of those once; it was pretty cool.
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Title: Such Strong Passion!
Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that your lemons, be they random, or placed in just the right way, show such extreme vehemence! I love the sensuality, the raw emotion in your chapters that give the reader the feeling that they are in the story itself! Definitely give yourself a pat on the back for this one, you deserve it. You rock!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 07, 2005 22:03 CST
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Awsome chapter. Deeply enjoyed and appreciated, as always. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 17:09 CST
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Must...go...cold...shower...... ::fans self:: Whoa. I guess all that waiting was worth it! It was super hot, but still incredibly beautiful and tender. I'm so happy for these two!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved it soooooo much. I came here from animespiral.com (hi it's me, inugrl15!) so I could read the lemon, and yes, I cried. It was as romantic as a Inuyasha/Kagome lemon!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: kyonarai(NSI) On: March 07, 2005 16:04 CST
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Great chapter, Toga and Sierra deserved that, after waiting sooo long. Now Toga just has to mark her...I hope it all goes well.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:25 CST
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*grins rakishly* Incredible as always. Yum.
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Title: WAFFage + Sue's rules = High Voltage
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 07, 2005 11:55 CST
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Finally! After all the heartbreak and the misunderstandings, Sue administers the best medicine of all; the ultimate expression of two people's love for each other. It's been a long time coming and they deserve it. -- Beautifully, exquisitly, and tenderly done. I'm still of the opinion that there should be a new term for scenes like yours that doesn't imply "sour" as the word 'lemon' does. -- I'm going to go stick my head in the freezer now to get rid of my blush! LOL
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