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| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 18:55 CST
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*Claws computer screen screaming* OH TOO CUTE!! I think that was just the most adorable chapter ever. I loved the kiss scene at the wedding, so CUTE. I love the dance with Gin...poor girl is going to be alone forever with the guys she has in her family. The scene with poor Nez was my favorite...that girl has no idea what is going to happen to her...LOL! Keep up the wonderful work. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 18:44 CST
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Love the little bits of foreshadowing to Purity III. You *do* tie up all the loose ends, don't you dearie. The wedding was lovely, nothing less than I'd expected. I'm happy to see Sessy's back in his right mind (as right as his mind *ever was...I love the dear to peices but sometimes his values get a little bit...odd). Can't wait for the wedding night and Sierra's reaction to the subsequent blood exchange (?).
| Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: March 02, 2005 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a wonderful chapter for the story. I can't wait to find out if the bride and groom will be able to sneak out of their own wedding. I have to tell you that your comments on how Inuyasha's and Kagome's twins behave have now perked my attention. I was wondering...Are you going to write a story about them? I would love to hear more about them. ^.~
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 02, 2005 16:17 CST
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YIPPEE!!!! On to the Honeymoon!!!
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai(NSI) On: March 02, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! That was so awesome, "Kami, dog! Come up for air," I loved that. Well Toga, no more cold showers... I love this fic so much, I come home from school everyday and the first thing I do is jump on the comp and check for updates, which there almost always are. You write beautifully, leaving me hanging onto each word like a preciouse possesion. The drama and angst almost kills me, but then everything always works out, it's just...amazing. I loved metamorphoses by the way, and all of those morons who sent you bad emails? They can burn for all I care, because it was a fabulous story! I don't care what ANYONE says, you are a great writer, and don't ever think less of yourself. In short, YOU ROCK! And those who think otherwise can shove it! *Inuyasha fangirl salute* WRITE ON! ~Kyonarai
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 15:34 CST
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Dunno if I remember how to do this Sue... it's been soooo looooong. Lol, the foreshadowing in this leads beautifully into P3:Forever, I wonder how many would have caught onto it if you hadn't posted the first chapters already, lol. As it were, I'm sitting here laughing my ass off at Ryo and pitying the amount of work Nez has set before her. I do believe Gin said it best... "Ryomaru no baka" LOL. Anyways, moving on from my giggle fest to the highlight of the chapter. Gawd woman, you write emotion like no other. The wedding made me cry, well, the kiss made me tear up a bit. So sweet! That dress is to die for, as is the veil. Simple and elegant... the very personification of our lovely Sierra. My fingers are still itching... might wanna watch for a picture... eh hem, anyways, beutifully done chapter and I think Sesshoumaru is back in everyone's good graces, and it was all worth the wait and now... on to the honeymoon o.O no delays for the poor sexually frustrated puppy... right??? OH, one more question; did Kagome actually get InuYasha into a suit?!?!
| Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: March 02, 2005 03:25 CST
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wedding wedding soon Toga will start howling in frustration. humm where is the other brother? I for some reason think he would have be lest affected by the news but thats just me. "orion
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: March 01, 2005 23:50 CST
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Well, that went a lot better than I had thought it would. No fist fights, no real big confrontations.. I bet Toga feels a lot better now that he has that off of his chest. Ah, to have been a fly on the wall when Sesshoumaru and was it Seirra's brother (?) were talking. I wonder what could have possibly filled that conversation. hehehe. Fantabulous job! Love this story, as always. Take care now, bye bye then!--Aitu
| Reviewed By: Lena17 On: March 01, 2005 20:56 CST
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Wow! You know..I think I would have personally died of shock from that...and hmm...when I think about it...Kagome and Yasha were pretty lucky in their game as well...since her mom understood on her behalf and all. But...wow....
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 20:18 CST
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Well, Sierra's family certainly had the proper reaction. shippo was brilliant, by the way...Jeezee Chreezee! Foxfire at the dinner table, i'm surprised toga was the only one to slap him upside the head! Thanks very much, I think Sessy *was* enjoying it a little bit. I've always imagined him as I little bit too amused/perturbed/irritated with the whole of humanity.
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 01, 2005 19:22 CST
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Apologies for the lack of reviews, but I had to say that I found this chapter so funny. I could just imagine a room fool of humans, Toga, and everyone else trying to delicatly explain the situation then Shippou does fox fire out of now where. I was wondering how Sierra's family was going to handle their future son-in-law. Thank you so much for this story, I really have enjoyed it. I think Toga is one of the best characters you have.
| Reviewed By: serending (I really should log in ... but it takes so very much effort now!) On: March 01, 2005 17:29 CST
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I like the fact that Youkai doesn't translate directly into "demon" because in my mind demons are inherently evil ... and who could think of Yasha, fluffy and the rest as evil?? I hope I didn't offend when I posted my last comment about Sierra. I didn't mean that I don't like her as a "person" or that you didn't write an amazingly complicated original character. She just didn't seem to have the inherent strength of the other females that you write (if you read the whole story in one sitting you are struck by how much she is crying ... but I realize that she is going through a lot) but she showed a lot more of the "youkai mate" strength in this chapter when she stood up to her family like that. I hope I am not making the hole deeper. Anyways ... yeah. Love the chapter and the story! I am really glad that Fluffy gave his approval (I am a Fluffy Fangirl!).
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 01, 2005 17:17 CST
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Hehe, Shippo is going to pay for that one! Hasn't he ever heard of subtlety? Well, all in all, I think the 'humans' took that rather well...considering. It would have been worse if they had been the kind of people who preach predudice on race, creed and color. Can you imagine a new catagory? "Species" Hopefully the promise of Sierra's continuing health will be a large deciding factor on how accepting her family will be. *Snicker* I wonder if all the 'cloaking' spells will be removed for their benefit...Oh I have an evil mind! LOL -- Wow...there we go, assuming that Seeshoumaru's motives for delaying the wedding were some perverse torture tactic and we are found to be wrong. That is so like him. He will willingly take flak for his decisions because he never explains anything; like the autocrat that he is, he expects his orders to be carried out, no questions asked. So while his actions might be in question, his ulitimate purpose is often surprising. *shakes head* You never fail to amaze me with your plot twists Sue...You totally ROCK!!
| Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 14:54 CST
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LMAO! Oh, man...I can't imagine trying to have *that* conversation with my prospective in-laws. Poor Toga, I think he's gonna break something if this wedding doesn't happen soon! I think it was really cool for Toga to find out Sexxhoumaru's true motives for holding up the wedding. After all the bad feelings between them, it's nice for Toga to be reminded that his dad isn't so bad. :)
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 11:55 CST
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All things considered, I think Mrs. Crawford took that news rather well. Poor Toga, Sierra too I suppose... ah well. The wedding's delay will make the honeymoon much sweeter.... or so the saying goes... Then again, who ever knew a virgin to get it right the first time, and there are two of them - and the added burden of waiting and waiting and waiting... Toga's gonna blow an ass-gasket of his own soon. lol. Here's hoping that he doesn't rush it the first time, that would not do, Sierra would wonder if she really had made a mistake - "That's it? Forever?" LMAO
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