| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: February 26, 2005 17:17 CST
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Whoot!! GReat job with the chronicles!! I loved that story..it deserves the awards!
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Reviewed By: canibabeta?? On: February 26, 2005 11:08 CST
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Wow...this is strange for me. After an absence...I have FOUR chapters I haven't even read yet! I was looking forward to this when i got home from the hospital. These chapters were so fun to read. the return of the twins was hilarious! It's fun to see their characterizations come out from what we know of them in P3! The arguement between Sess and Ryo was so entertaining as was the restaurant scene! It's nice to be back!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 26, 2005 10:20 CST
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Uh oh, trouble brewing in paradise. Sierra is starting to put together the pieces of what it means to marry Toga. I know Toga's impatient but six weeks is not much time to be engaged. Since his blood chose her, she doesn't really have a coice. If she says "no" she will be murdering him. Sigh. All very disturbing. Toga's kids will be half demon, half human. Can a hanyou be Ruler? It would seen so but I imagine that will cause tons of trouble. Thanks for the update. Congratulations on Chronicles!! One of my all time favorite fictions!
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Reviewed By: sweetchic15010 On: February 26, 2005 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew that they would find a way to be together. :o) Please update soon because I am dying here...
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 25, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did I believe once Sienna and Toga reconnected, as they had so ephemerally in his dreamscape, that their life together would commence in short order? Nope, not in Sesshomaru's house. Inuyasha is actually supporting his older brother's stance? Our beloved non-conformist hanyou?? :) Oh, I am SOOOO LOVING how this intricate tale continues to be woven. Heh; Ryo and Kichiro Kagome's "perfect angels"?? LOL...Sue, your OCs are just a riot--thanks for bringing this reader along on their escapades! :)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 25, 2005 20:15 CST
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AWW, congrats on the awards for chronicles. it deserves it!!! all of your work does. but definatly chronicles...that was such an awsome fic! great chapter for the update. man, do i feel bad for Toga. both twins in a small area with others around, that's ruff. all i see are three very much inuyasha-like young adults sitting around a table with one being half yash half sesshy....you just know that's bad. i'm beginning to agree with Toga...Yash should have neutered Ryo as a pup...he just loves getting into trouble, doesn't he? great update and keep it going!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 25, 2005 18:26 CST
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Why the delay why why and why isn't Sei more upset about it too? Sigh 'orion
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Title: Another fun chapter!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 17:20 CST
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I figured that we were moving to the story's denoument, now that the biggest obstacle to Toga and Sierra's relationship has been removed, but I'd forgotten about the second-biggest obstacle...Sierra's demon in-laws. Poor girl--as if marrying a guy from a different culture and moving to Japan weren't making her transition to married life difficult enough, she also has the whole youkai culture to deal with! I have a feeling she's going to be quite overwhelmed... Um, does Sierra speak or understand Japanese? I know Toga and his cousins have been making an effort to speak English to her, but what about everyone else? Having been to Japan for the first time recently, it's pretty unsettling to suddenly become functionally illiterate (a lot of signs are in English, esp. for trains and subways, but it's the little things that get you, like the menus or even display placards when shopping...) and not able to understand background chatter, announcements over the PA systems, or even casual eavesdropping. And my experience, growing up in a bilingual family, is that people easily slip back into their native language when the discussion gets heated, or starts to deal with complex or sensitive topics. Sierra's going to feel like a fish out of water, for sure, even if the family's making an effort to try and include her. Anyhow, good chapter and I look forward to seeing how the wedding spins out. I really appreciate the frequent updates to your stories!
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Title: I was signed in...but I took too long...darn automated de-logger.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: February 25, 2005 15:57 CST
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Now why is Sesshoumaru delaying Toga and Sierra's wedding? It's a moot point that they are a couple and nothing is going to change that, so why the delay? -- OMG...the twins; they're like carnal sharks, Ryo especially! The way they 'swarmed' around that poor girl in the restaraunt...LMAO!! Toga's, "You should have been neutered" just about killed me! -- Sierra is learning more about her soon-to-be family every day and she's not too happy about the more violent practices that youkai must master to keep life and place in their society intact. Looks like there will be some serious discussions ahead. --- Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 25, 2005 15:34 CST
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hehehehehhee. Did Henti betas nominate you? lol!!!!!! Ah-- it deserved it =P So what prizes do ya win? An all expense paid vacation to________. (Fill in the blank with destination of choice.) hehe, good good chapter. Well, I'd write more, but I'm out for the weekend. Yey! It's finally getting nice out again! take care! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 15:26 CST
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*snickers* You'd think after all his centuries Sessho-Maru would get over his youthful petty manipulations. Proved me wrong, eh? Poor crazy kids, all they want is to get married!
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Title: LadyBarrista
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 15:00 CST
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Another great chapter Sue! I shiver with anticipation and delight to see what new ways you'll come up with to torture Toga during the six weeks before his wedding, (though, the hands off policy that his family has forced on him is a fun beginning).
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 24, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea! I'm so happy! LOL I love it when Kagome bullies Inuyasha. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 24, 2005 20:18 CST
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yay, things are looking up for Toga!! i so won't ask about the 'tail' incident...::grimaces:: eep. anyway, great stuff you have working, as always, and...yeah....yay, weddings!! so...shall the future father-in-law be sharing a wedding dance with the bride? ::stares off into space:: Fluffy-sama...dancing...weird.....Great update!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 24, 2005 18:14 CST
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Aww, yey! A wedding! And yey! A baby! (Congrats Sari!!!! PS--What's her name?) Ah, perhaps my favorite part was Inuyasha asking Toga if he was going to let Sierra boss him around, or something to that caliber, hehehehe. And then Kagome making him flatten his ears-- PRICELESS!!!! hahahaha. Gotta love it. Fabulous job-- Oh how I enjoy the whole Toga saga---It's like we've watched him grow right before our very eyes! hmm. How long until the wedding? lol. Like a day? And hmm, will Sierra's family know before the given event? I'm putting my money on they are flown in to Japan on the first flight possible? Who knows-- just a guess, and god knows I've been wrong in my bets before, te hehe. Good Job!! --Aitu
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