| "Purity 2: Defiance" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:57 CST
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Wow. A little trip into Toga's mind. I take it this is sort of the life flashing before one's eyes before death ideal. Anyway, I'm chomping at the bit (aren't I always?). Wow, i can't beleive it's almost over!
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Reviewed By: DawnIllusion On: February 22, 2005 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! They're finally together again. Nice long chapter. Can we expect more soon? (Please say yes?!)
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 12:14 CST
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A beautiful chapter for a beautiful moment. Ahhh, you never cease to amaze me... =) I can't wait to see how their long awaited talk goes.
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 22, 2005 03:12 CST
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TOOOOOGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!NONONONONONONONO sniff sniff...come on Sei pull on that hidded past life and figure out whats going on. You can do it. Save him.. Toga wait a little longer hold on NO GIVING UP!!! PANT PANT ORION
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 17:27 CST
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Humm i should have known you would find a 3rd option.I'm just guessing here but i'm assuming that the resion that toga does not heal has more to do with the fact that he was kissed more then the fact that sierra refused him due to the alfiction. The wha i see it Toga knew to only reasion that she refused him was becouse of her dieing.. So when sess kind of droped the bomb and told toga that he could stop it that should have been enough to allow him to heal.. Unless the only reasion that he still does not heal is becouse of that kiss he thinks sierra may yet refuse him becouse of it?? Anyway that's my theory.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: February 21, 2005 17:06 CST
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What an interesting little flashback Toga had of his childhood. A bit funny to think that he was afraid of water or the things that might be lurking out of sight but not too hard to believe of a 6 year old. His childish reasoning was quite sound and I giggled about how he thought that his sister should have been fed to the 'water-youkai', too cute and very typical of sibling rivalry. But the disturbing part of the memory is what triggered it...drowning. It's also not good that he's so far gone as to not even be afraid of the connection. He really has given up. *grabs a tissue* I know he and Sierra will make it, but that barely lessens the angst in this chapter. And now Sierra is finally getting the hunch that things are not as simple as she had convinced herself. She knows deep in her heart that she will never love anyone like she loves Toga. I hope she realizes soon that Toga feels the same way and that 'someone else' isn't even an option for him. -- Sess is playing it very cool...not surprising. If he confesses part of situation, then he would have to explain all of it...including his own deficiencies in his attempt to control fate. (dang...I could go on and on...but I won't! LOL) -- Great Chapter
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:55 CST
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Wow, Fluffy asking a human for help. There's someting I thought I'd never see. I don't care how necessary or good it was, somebody has to rub that in. The next chapter is going to be very interesting. About your writing, does knowing how a chapter is going to make you feel ever cause you to not want to write it? For that matter, what do you enjoy about writing so much that you can't stay away from your stories?
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 21, 2005 15:44 CST
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Sienna decided to go with Sesshomaru rather quickly, yet refuses to acknowledge Toga's call to her soul for what it is? ::claws desktop:: Oi! Why has Sesshomaru decided to leave Sienna unenlightened--lingering anger&disappointment that Toga's youkai chose a human? Yet, being a youkai, isn't that an involuntary choice? Fantastic chapter, sooo looking fwd to another super-sized helping. :)
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 21, 2005 15:41 CST
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Wow. I didn't think it was possible, but now I'm even more worried than before. Hurry Sierra! On the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 21, 2005 14:39 CST
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Loved it. So that's what Sierra keeps hearing Toga in her mind. Very intersting. And I loved the little flash back with the pond story. That was awesome. haha, very cute how he was afraid of a water demon coming to eat him-- and then the "I'm not crying," lol how very Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru-esque of him to say. I really wanted her to be in Japan by the end of the chapter, and to see her interacting with Toga. I'll go sit and/or stand in my corner now, which ever your prefer, for being so selfish, hahaha. Fabulous job--- I adored every minute of it. Thanks for writing! =P Bye bye now, take care you. ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: February 21, 2005 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh man. toga's in trouble. hes about to kick the bucket, man. hope sierra and sesshoumaru get back to him in time. and whats that about inuyasha telling his kids to be more like toga? he actually compared his kids to toga? thats kinda harsh..
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Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:06 CST
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Sometimes Sheshoumaru can be such an ass. I wonder what he would look like being something other than a prick? Do you think that he could cry. *hmmm* There is a thought see if you can make him cry. Cause I think that he needs it. You are doing a wonderful job with this story, I had been aching to read the last couple of chapters! But one thing is for certain, Toga is very cute! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 11:54 CST
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wow, i haven't reviewed in a long time. Lets see. Excellent, as always. it must get a little tiring to constantly hear people saying how good it is. Um, if Toga didn't mate Sierra, how can she still feel his emotions and hear him and stuff? or did I just miss a chapter? Also, if Huntington's disease is genetic, wouldn't it have been on Sierra's adoption papers? if its a dominant gene, her mother would have known it was in the line, so there was a chance it would be passed on to Sierra. I don't think it would have been so surprising. Well, just me being nit picky. Great chapter, as always.
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 04:00 CST
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update, oh god, please update. Toga is the sexiest character i have ever heard of, please dont let something drastic happen to him, i'd be super sad.
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ave one question only. Are you still only going to update on Sontag?
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