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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. I'm not too good at putting stuff into words, (that's kind of why I'm here, to write better,) so I'll be blunt. I'm definitely a total sucker for romance, to the point of some others thinking it's wierd, but your stories can keep me happy for months apiece. I must thank you for being that good.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:42 CST
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Well, you've got everyone curious about Sierra's natural parents. "Coral" is a family name? Hmm...that is what "Sango" means...LOL "Curiouser and curiouser..." Naming the pup "Kirara"? 'mika or tiny sparkles' - cute. ---Hey, isn't it possible for Kirara to still be around? Of course they did fore(or is it 'pre')shadow her with Midoriko, which would make her REALLY old...hmm. ---Lovin' it. ---- Happy New Year and Happy Birthday to your son!
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Toga is just *awwwww*-inspiring! I think that you have a way of writing these men in a real yet thoughtful way . . . the way we wish men really were! lol!! Uh oh, here comes the boyfriend. i think he may have heard me laughing! Anyway, awesome, awesome! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:41 CST
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This is such a contrast from Metamorphosis! I love the intricacies of the developing relationship and look forward to finding out what other means of bedevilment you have in store for the couple! Fantastic read! Keep up the brilliant work! ~Squalleon
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 16:57 CST
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Okay, warm and fuzzies for everyone. That was very sweet. I'm *dreading* the day the rest of Sierra's family finds out he's...not...quite...human...(heh! Not human at all!). And yet I can't wait! I'd scream for more, but I hate it when I'm demanded upon when I'm posting. So let me just bat my eyes and pout a little...*grins*
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 16:29 CST
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Aww...sweet, sweet, sweet! A puppy, an over-protective brother, a stuffed dog and a Kiss under the mistletoe. You couldn't have ordered a better christmas if you tried. A little jealous tension in the early part of the visit just makes better parts all the sweeter. *happy sigh* Wonderfully WAFF'y.
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Title: AWWWWWWWWW!!!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 14:37 CST
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oh, this so gets awwww-proval!!!! They are so damn cute together! Lol, what's the puppy's name?
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 09:28 CST
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AWWWWW! *holds on to chair to keep from floating away* that was sooo sweet!!! oh my god....*melts* keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 16:55 CST
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I smell trouble on the horizen.... This story is absolutely adorable, by the way. I can't get over how cute Sierra and Toga are together. Really. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 13:52 CST
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Toga is going to stick his foot in it, isn't he? Lordy, I hope not but it seems like he might be headed that way! I hope he has the sense to behave himself with chick from work. I don't think Sierra is one to stand by and let her take her man, right? Hmmm…. Can't wait for the next chapter! =Diane= ps! Your FMA site rocks!
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Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 13:48 CST
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Christmas with Sierra's family? Is this the calm before the storm? Can't wait to read more! Just fantastic!
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 17:48 CST
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If I draw... .... why did I know you'd say that? That was pretty lame, I'm glad Toga is aware of how lame he sounded. Hopefully this Kari girl won't develop any sort of thing for puppy-boy. Sierra would rip her apart, lol. Have a Merry Christmas!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 13:25 CST
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Aww, just when I was thinking that I needed that safety belt to keep me from floating out of my chair this time...Toga goes and cancels on Sierra. What a let-down. Hmm...I guess that Toga's just gonna have to make up for it! LOL ----On a side note, I came across a picture by 'YanaGoya' of a "Black-Haired Sesshoumaru" at deviantart - www. deviantart. com/ view/ 6426978/ (just cut&paste and remove the spaces.) I was thinking that this is kinda what Toga would look like. Mmm...yummy! ----Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 11:23 CST
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I can't believe Sess took that telling off without 'doing' something.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 11:18 CST
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OH NO!!! Something bad is going to happen. I just know, lol. Gotta love to hate all those simple misunderstandings, haha. Myabe Sierra won't find out about Toga having dinner with some chick who she doesn't know and there won't be some fight where Toga has to convince Sierra otherwise, haha. In other news, I'm surprised that the site will let me review again! Who knows how long that will take. Hmm, MAYBE Sexxhourmaru is setting this all up and when Kagara finds out she's gunna be pissed! haha Hmm, maybe Toga should get Sierra a nice pretty ring that comes in a blue box,in a Tiffany setting, hehehe. Just a thought. I think it would go over big. Anywho, fabulous chapter, as always, Sue. I loved it to death. Can't wait for more!!! Bye bye and happy christmas eve! ---Aitu
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