| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Title: Ch. 7
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:45 EST
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Inuyasha should be worried about giving himself away at Kagome's funeral -- he's leaving so many cues that he knows the family. ~~~ Smacking the corpse indeed!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:31 EST
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you're only 17?? Damn I feel old. Great chapter BTW. um... Is there going to be any... romantic involvement between Kagome and Inuyasha eventually?
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:05 EST
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What is the deal with knowing how old Inuyasha is. I like your first anwser to that question. I feel sorry for the girl in the casket. I guess Kikyo paid someone not to run DNA test. I get the feeling that their going to leave the city. Hope Inuyasha learns to 'see' Kagome soon. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: fallen_angel13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 02:53 EST
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:P yet another review, are you going to update other stories such as The Sinner, and Autumn Bane??? BTW i can't seem to review on ur christmas one, so here: I really liked it!!
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Reviewed By: fallen_angel13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 02:50 EST
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Can anybody tell me why it is WacDonald's??? I don't get it :S :$
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Reviewed By: fallen_angel13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 02:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, and I didn't even notice that you spelled the words wrong, though I lived most of my life/and did schooling in New Zealand so I probably wouldn't know otherwise, and very creative on the author notes/FAQ, and is Kagome ever going to find out that Inu was the one hired to kill her? and LMAO with Naraku's Sea Monkeys, very creative!!!!!! Oh and even if you don't want to write a lemon you could do some mention of it, ie just saying inu shagged Kags or Kikyo!! Oh well Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 09:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update!!!! *huggles story* plz?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 22:14 EST
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LOL. Your dodges on Inu's age are quite amusing. Can't wait for the next chapter... though I can't help but pity Kagome due to the fact that she now knows that her Aunt really did kill her for the formula...
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Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:30 EST
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Another awesome chapter, I loved the ending. INu is just too cute, ha ha, gods I could just picture that awkward moment. So, anyways that was a great chapter, and I hope Kag gets some new clothes soon, it's the least Inu could do for her! Keep up the incredible work and please, please, please, update as soon as possible!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 21:11 EST
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Ah, no lemon. To bad. But I plan on keeping with the story. Great chaper. Poor Kagome, crying her eyes out and he doesn't care. Hope for more soon. Later.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 18:52 EST
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Myeh? What is "perform DIY"? Done in years? Down its yap? Dorky Inu-Yasha? Do it yoursel-- oh. I get it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Don't worry, my pretties. It won't be long before you feed, and then you can be at your optimum strength to spawn a new generation that will conquer all!" ~~~ Sea monkeys! (snorklesnorklesnorklesnorkle!) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hee hee! First the woodsman gives the queen the drowned and battered corpse of a pig and now Snow White has cleaned the dwarves' skankhole apartment! ...oop, sorry. Their flat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "-further complications arose when not only one wife, but two arrived at the funeral ceremony of Miroku Hoshi. Bitch slapping ensued…" ~~~ MYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAHHAHAHHAHHEHEHEHAHhahaAAAA!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "But she didn't seem to be after his nuts." ~~~ Lucky for him. It's the next best thing to the carotid.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah I still really love your sense of humour! And this is sizing up to be another one of your best stories. Don't worry bout the tossers harping on bout your spelling. Spell the way you want to! Why should you have to change the way you've spelt things your whole life. They are correct to you and correct to a lot of your readers. I've lived in the states for almost three years, and whilst I might typically spell colour as color. I still can't seem to put z's where we put s's. Its just not cricket! ^-^ I still like to tease people over here when they use the word fanny. I act so horribly offended, hehehe I'm evil I know.
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Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 15:55 EST
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Loved it!! Great chapter, though I was sad to hear that Miro actually died, but I laughed at the porn star crack between Inu and Kag!!! HOpe to see and update soon! Keep up the incredible work and please please please update as soon as possible!!!
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Reviewed By: Malific [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 01:24 EST
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I love how the story is going. And I also quite like your Britishness, I really don't see why so many people have problems with it. Keep up the good work, though I doubt it's possible for you not to. BTW: I miss reading new chapters for "The Sinner" ^,^
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Reviewed By: RyuuzaUchi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 19:54 EST
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Hi!!! I was wondering if you could tell me what does those words in your last review answer of ch.5 meant. I'm curious since my english is still limited. ^^! I'm not saying that I'm stupid(sometimes I am^^), I'm just a idiot. But if you can't tell me, then it's alright.
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