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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: DarkDaemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cheers on the new chapter! The story is progressing fabulously and I commend you on your ability to keep it at a decent pace. It is sometimes difficult not to rush things or get bogged down with the details and you have managed to balance the two with style. Your humor is also refreshing (no one falling over or shouting "Booby!" or anything like that) and enjoyable. Keep it up and I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 19:18 EST
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Oh man, will she ever remember what happened? I have a feeling that she won't. Which would be good for their love life. That is if they ever have one. Not that I am complaining about the slow progess. It's great to see that they don't love each other at first sight. Can't wait for more, later.
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Reviewed By: inulover123456 On: January 16, 2005 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...OMG....OMG....THE POLICE ARE THERE....OMG WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN? PLEASE UPDATE SOON.....ITS A GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!
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Title: Zero-G
Reviewed By: Assassin_Chiq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 17:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol... I love your story, but I LIVE for your comments. *wipes tears from eyes* I love it. And trust me, you're not the only one with your sense of humor... Though at the moment I can't decide if that's a good thing...
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Title: Leaving on Jet Plane
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 14:01 EST
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I think something ate your scene break between Kagome half-remembering on the tabletop and Kouga and Inuyasha fighting. ~~~ (Snork!) Inuyasha's professional ego is very funny. ~~~ No particular desire to incite, not insight. ~~~ Android copy?! WHO STOLE MY IDEA?!?!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(*waves*) On: January 16, 2005 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles sadly*I would like to thank you, so much. Today I've been depressed, and I don't want to go to any funerals later in the week. But I re-read...And...*smiles*Your work still makes laugh. Thanks so much./Rin:RETURN OF HE SEA MONKEYS! RETURN OF THE SEA MONKEYS!/*rolls eyes*Please bring back Naraku's stupid sea monkeys so she'll shut up...*rubs at temples*I'm getting a headache.../Rin:RETURN-/SHUT UP!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 16, 2005 12:41 EST
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ew cat spit n tuna...lol
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 10:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! *claps* This fic is awesome! Kinda reminds me of The Sinner in the fact that instead of killing Kagome, he harbors her and tries to help her gain freedom, and that Naraku is his slum boss...But, hey...I still love it :-) You are and always will be my most favorite author. Man, the questions asked were rediculous! Dude...even I know when someone from England is writing...*shakes head* I don't see why people can't just put two and two together to make four...*sigh* But, either way, I know you put a lot of effort into your work, and you are to be commended. I can't believe someone thought it relevant to ask your bra size! LOL Dude, you can be rest assured I'm only going to comment on only your fiction, and that you're just plain awesome! I can't believe it took me soo long to read this masterpiece! Kudos ;-P
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Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 18:22 EST
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Great chapter, keep up the incredible work, and please update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: RozeFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 07:48 EST
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The words are from 'Nadsat' talk from the book 'A Clockwork Orange'. The book's compromised of a lot of words that are derived from foreign languages - but mostly Russian, even though the story is primarily told in English. My point was, to the baka who refused to accept that British-english was an acceptable form of grammar, that stories could be told in whatever format or style they wanted to be. ^__^ So I wasn't trying my hand at Russian, I was just quoting the style of Anthony Burgess.
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Title: russian usage
Reviewed By: ,INU-KAGLOVER On: January 12, 2005 04:01 EST
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Your russian stinks....Just kidding!!! Don't chop my head off!! Giving you a hard time. I'm sitting here reading all your quips back to those bakas giving you a hard time about your writing. I find nothing wrong with it all, you've done a great job. I am a russian linguist tho, so it took me by surprise to see you write russian. Took me a bit to figure out some of the words, cause the english version and cyrillic version are just not quite the same. But nuff language crap. Awesome story, enjoying every second of it!!
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Title: how fab are u?!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin (nlo) On: January 12, 2005 01:58 EST
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wow! i just read the whole thing from start to...well ur last update anywho...i love it ur characters are so realistic u write them with loads of depth! I'm a real fan f ur work & can't wait to read more! ur a riot & truly talented i look forward to ur witty replies to r/r almost as much as chapter updates! as 4 people who think ur mean...it's an aries thing! we aries are bitchy by nature or at least thats how less inteligent people interpret it! (lol) thanks 4 sharing ur awsome talent along with ur wicked sense of humor! smooches kittin! btw...why do u think everone is so concerned with Inuyasha's age?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 20:41 EST
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Hm... but wouldn't her body be cremated? At least... I believe in accordance to the buddhist ceremony you seemed to be describing... or maybe you were leading up to that. But that's not an essential part of the story, the character interaction was. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Storymind On: January 11, 2005 19:32 EST
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I absolutely love your stories. I've read all of them at least eighteen billion times, and it's becoming an obsession (Been stuck on Dead Famous for going on two weeks now...) I love this new idea, though I can't wait to read Great Minds Think Alike. The summary was horrible. I'd become your stalker and all, but I don't live where you do and I don't want to scare you away... Cause i'm waiting for the sequel to Dead Famous and to see the ends to Autumn Bane and Rules of Acquisition.That one especially. I would have written reviews sooner, but i'm hassled for time a lot. ^_^; Keep up the fabulous writing, hoping for an update soon! -Storymind
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 11, 2005 18:29 EST
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poor kag =( evil bitch kikyo strikes again...lol i luv ur reader responses very funny=D
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