| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Azalie*nsi On: October 02, 2006 01:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Another chapter! loved it. Please update soon!
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Title: luv it!!!
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank god you wrote another chapter. This story is sooooo good. Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: srg1 On: October 01, 2006 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you're one the best authors ever, you put up the newest chapter at such perfect times!!!!! I've been having an stressful day, but seeing this new chapter really helped me out. I couldn't believe the begining, I thought it could have been any one but Miroku. I can't wait to see more on Metsuki. I really wonder about her. She seems also to be a very good character. The ending was fine, not dull at all. It's a good place to end, now I'm wondering what will happen next. I really can't wait!!!!
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 19:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely fantastic chapter. I have loved this story now for what seems like forever. When it is complete I have no doubt it will be a masterpiece. Keep up the great work. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaThinksImSexii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great chapter, as always. I'm loving the sexual tension between them, even if Kagome refuses to aknowledge it. Smashing job; I can't wait to read the next chapter! When's the lemon gonna commence?! Lol. ^_~
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! You updated!! Yes yes! This was such a hilarious chapter with the Miroku-almost-death-scene. I loved it that Sango came in right when Miroku and Inu were talking about her. I also liked the Inu and Kag scene at the end. I hate the fact that Inu is holding Kag and wishing for Kikyou. I hope he learns to like Kag for Kag soon. If this happens, maybe, he will be less of a womanizer. *shruggs*. Anyways, thanks for the update again. Please please update soon. I always enjoy reading your story. I hope the next update will be soon. Bye
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Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 12:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are only a hand full of fanfictions I enjoy and this is one of them. Please update.
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 23:34 PDT
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Aww, I thought you put up another chapter. Oh well, please update soon. But take your time.
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Reviewed By: haleos18 On: August 13, 2006 21:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice...very very nice. i really enjoy the way you depict the characters- it's very fitting for them. i really hope to see more chappies soon!
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Title: OMB
Reviewed By: Original-berri On: August 12, 2006 14:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMBBBBBBBBB UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! CRAZYNESS! AWSOMENESS!! YEAHHH SWEETNESS WOOT WOOT SUGARRR
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Title: Please update!!!
Reviewed By: Renea On: August 12, 2006 10:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I love this story so please update as soon as you can, b/c i got to find out happens next. Thanks
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Title: Welcome back!
Reviewed By: Darks_lil_angel NSI On: August 11, 2006 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you didn't fall of the face of teh earth! Well I'd thought you'd up and quite like the author of 'Close encounter of the Fluffy kind' a few years back. A very good sess/kags pairing and an awesome plot just like this except its Inu/Kag anyway glad to finally read an update and I really did like the way you made Kagome have a fire like temper that always makes her funnier. Looking forward to more frequent updates. Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: JM On: August 02, 2006 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have the perfect writing style. Your story is very original. I just love it. Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, since I'm a first time reader of this fic my review will be for the whole thing, so it'll probably be long, lol. To start, I absolutely love the plot of this story! It's very original in the fact that you have Kagome move into Inuyasha's house when they're at a very rocky part of their slowly developing relationship. There's so much raw emotion between the two that I love reading every moment of it. Suffice it to say I enjoy how the characters react to one another and I think you are doign an excellent job with characterization thus far. I also enjoy how you keep hinting at certain aspects about demons that we don't knwo yet in the story that will hopefully be explained later on, such as the mating ritual, Inu's being compared to Wolves and why it's so horrible...etc etc. Those are just a couple of the things. I could talk about the plot all day but I better move on to other things. Your writing style keeps me comming back for more and not just because I want to learn more about the things I previously mentioned. Just like this last chapter, such an evil cliffy, hehe. ^^ You make such good use of plot devices that you have me awaiting your next chapter eagerly. Yoru chapter length is good and the only thing I could ask for would be longer chapters. However, I know there are time restraints you have and I'm just happy that you haven't given up on the story altogether. There was a long period of time between the newest update and the previous which was why I thought you had abandoned it for sometime. Glad to see you're back! ^^ Spelling and grammar was good except in certain places but nowhere near to makign the fic unreadable. On the contrary, I found that it flowed rather nicely. I do enjoy the amount of description you use to describe places, people, and events. Honestly, the only thing I could ask for more of is the actual story! I do hope you continue writing and post whenever you can. Take care for now and I await your next update! ^^
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Title: NO
Reviewed By: Inu4me On: July 20, 2006 13:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have abdon this story! This amazing well written story!
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