| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anonymous111 On: October 12, 2006 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to say that I enjoy your story greatly, and hope that you find the time to continue until it is finished. I also like the way you portray most of your characters, though I think Sango is a tad bit harsh(we all know she loves Miroku's attentions even if inappropriate)
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Reviewed By: Sess_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOVE YOUR FANFIC SO FAR I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I like this story of yours, its great. But with Inuyasha saying that women are objects is the part were I want to kill his arragont ass. Well I hope you update soon and keep up the work you do.
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 09:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing so far... I love it... cant wait for the update.... I can only imagine how Kagome is feelin thinking that inu wants kik back and thou he kind of does but kag is his mate and wow just update soon PLEASE!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: October 04, 2006 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just have to write the next chapter and soon. I can't believe that Inuyasha told Kagome that she smelled like Kikyo. That just made Kagome feel low. I just hope Inuyasha will listen to his youki for once. Kagome is just perfect for Inuyasha. She could help him out with his playboy attitude. Please write another chapter soon cause I just can't wait. I wonder what Inuyasha will think once he finds Kagome sleeping on him. I'll be waiting for it. LOL!!!!
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Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 22:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the great work.
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Title: nope
Reviewed By: pyro2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 15:57 PDT
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your totally wrong i really like this chapte its not boring at all!!!!!!! but could you please update sooner then you did because i have to go back and reread it now!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 07:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, i can see why you hated this chapter yourself, it did seem to lack the usual 'you' like in the past chapters... its hard to put into words though. But anyways, this chapter was still VERY good, i got to see the different side of Inuyasha again, proving that he isn't completely an asshole... then again, i could be wrong, but hey, that is why i keep coming back to read this, to see what the answer finally is. Oh yeah, and the humour was once again superb, i just love the humour and character interactions in this fic, makes me laugh every time i read them. I hope you update again soon, or at least a bit sooner than this chapter, i really want to see what happens next, and i put emphasis on the 'really want' part. anyways, see ya next time, this fic is one of my absolute favourites!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: demon godess On: October 02, 2006 22:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey im so happy you wrote this chapter and i cant wait for more. Hope to hear from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 21:57 PDT
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hope kagome doesnt have to be stuck in kikyo's shadow for too long, but good chapter! and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 21:34 PDT
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Inuyasha's flip-flopping from seducer to hurt puppy certainly makes for not a single dull moment. Though I think Kagome has gotten used to him, because he's been getting steadily more uncouth and she hadn't ripped him a new one yet. Whether she will in the "awakening scene" depends on where his hands are when she wakes up, I think. I'm happy to know that you're starting the new chapter soon. I love the length of your chapters, they feel like mini-stories. I know you won't even put up a two page filler. So, please update soon, but put a nice amount of quality work into the chapter. Even if you weren't satisfied with this one, I certainly liked it.
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Reviewed By: Adoring Fan On: October 02, 2006 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! It's soo cool that you updated on my best friend's birthday! Thank you for updating! Now I'm going to go read another brilliant instalment of 'The Seduction Game' that I know is going to be as perfect as the rest! Please update sooner if you can! You are my favorite author! Thank you!!! Lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelov elovelovelovelove you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ Meow!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 09:50 PDT
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This is very good and getting really spicy, I can't wait for more.
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Title: You've Updated!
Reviewed By: I.G. On: October 02, 2006 05:24 PDT
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I really liked the ending. I liked how you've made Yasha such an ass, but then such a sweet, little boy as well. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Sexy Neko Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 03:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT! Updated! I love this story. I know I reviewed on FanFiction, but it's so good... I decided to put another! Update soon. :D:D
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