| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sara R. On: March 29, 2005 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love the story:) I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! Please?
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Reviewed By: gunslinger_inu (lazy, wont login)) On: March 22, 2005 22:40 PST
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that was sooooo awesomely awesome it hurts! update soon!
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Title: Seduction Game
Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 20:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. So far I have liked every bit of it. Spelling and grammar are excellent despite the occasional typos which are of course impossible to avoid completely when writing a story. I love the plot for it leaves my mind wondering in all directions. I really do admire authors for I am much too lazy to write more than a half page at a time so I am left to simply search through the fics to find something that suits my quirky personality. I have added your fic to my favorites list for easy access. If you wish to contact me you can do so at my AIM address Demonic Guy55 or my Email address DemonicGuy65@yahoo.com. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: forever_love (not logged in) On: March 16, 2005 15:30 PST
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after reading over the third chapter twice (im sure that wont be the last.) I am now forced to wait painfully until youre newest chapter comes out. which i can only hope wont take as long as the first three anyways love the story!!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 12:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! this is a great story and i'm glad that i found it! That was a very juicy lemon in the first chapter. I hope you update soon! i cant wait for more. this story is going on my favorites list!
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Title: Price for college
Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 05:57 PST
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Oh, one more thing... the normal price for college in America can range from about 8,000-12,000 if you from that state or as you said 21,000 if your out of state.
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Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 05:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! Great story... just keep updating
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 18:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg! i LOVE this story! it's almost the same as other stories i've read but this is MUCH better and it makes more sense to me =) I LOVE IT! and i hope you write more chapters soon. this is of course going in my fav stories and authors =) n e ways keep up the great writing, and i hope to read more soon =)
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Reviewed By: living dead On: March 06, 2005 12:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good and i cant wait for the next update. are souta and kohaku gonna get girlfriends? are u gonna add shiori in because shes a hanyou and i remember inuyasha saying he couldrelate to her or something in the series
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Reviewed By: vivi55 On: March 05, 2005 03:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Like it, keep udating!
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Title: Tee he
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 22:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far its really cutie for the most part the player thing is on my already pissing me off I have a feeling he's going to do something stupid.Besides that keep going!!!!!!!
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Title: more please!
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 22:35 PST
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Mm... love it. I especially love a cocky, arrogant, playboy hanyou. I just can't stand that he has a personal maid that caters to his every need... it does make Inu a man-whore. But with Kagome the righteous in the room next door, we'll see what happens. I'm totally looking forward to your next chapter! Ja ne, Joy :)
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: candy_gram [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic please wright more pretty please . PS your story is so cool so ppppplllllllleeeeeessssseeee wright more.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: March 03, 2005 14:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: March 03, 2005 12:31 PST
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once again, great chapter. :]
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