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| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Reviewed By: Az On: May 24, 2006 20:53 PDT
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WHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -bows down on hands and knees and sobs- i've...*sobs*...never *snifle*...been..*sniffles more*...so *sob* ...happy *wipes tear* dear lord.......its like...some sort of indescribable feeling...and lol i have exams this week and i've just gotten so sidetracked reading this -damn my inability to not stop reading!- drrr....why did your story have to be so damn good? you have too much talent and too many fans to keep us waiting so long *sobs* we miss you....what do i need to do to get you to update faster? 10 reviews per chapter or something? i'll give you candy -holds out candy- well, okay i'll stop giving you wierd reviews if you update faster *hint hint nudge nudge* but i get what you mean by too much school work...drr...work is the devil; especially when you get that strike of inspiration mid studying for a math test like me lol...the urge to write comes at strange times...okay now i'm rambling on about jibberish. well, just wanted to say great chapter and i really hope you don't make us wait in too much suspense ^_^ (i may die if you do you see?) update soon! loved it!!
| Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: May 24, 2006 07:45 PDT
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.... Not only are you writing an excellent stor, but you are evil, pure evil: Leaving a cliffhanger like that, that is my job! But please update again soon, this one, is just too damn intense to be left alone like this, just please don't take around half a year to update again, please...
| Reviewed By: srg1 On: May 23, 2006 22:56 PDT
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I was so happy when i saw an e-mail from you stating that your story, The Seduction Game had been updated!!!!! I couldn't wait for some free time to read it!!!! I thought about it all the way coming by from college!!!!!The chapter was so terrific!!!! I enjoyed it so much!!!! Usually I review on Adultfanfiction.net,but since its going through updates, I've been reading reading it here. I really love your story. Its one of the best I've read. I hope you continue this story, because it is really really good. If I can get an update, my email is srg13510@hotmail.com. I hope you update soon, I'm going to be wondering for days what happens next. Again, this is a great story and it really brighten up my day.
| Title: FUNNY LADY!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this is some funny shit! I hope ya update soon cuz i can't wait to see if he gets her. i inu in this fic what bad puppy he is!:D UPDATE SOON AS YA CAN! I do Inuyasha don't care for bush!^o^
| Title: hi
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 18:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi this is girl_x_16 i don't know if it let me show me logged on or not cuz this thing has been acting kind of strange... oh well, i liked the overall chapter especially the part where inu and kag kinda have a little fight but then inu reviels a little about his past with being a half demon. I thought it was so touching that kagome cried for him and it was so SWEET!!!!! hehehe, but i was a little confused at some points, but i think it'll all clear up later on... your writing style is definitely different than others i read; it's a good different. Not many people can create that "flow" of writing and have a certain "feel" that you get when you read it, kinda like a certain emotion that carries you through out the story that changes with certain events and makes you feel that you're really there. It's a great that you have this so i can really enjoy when you do update!!!! I was so excited to see you updated sooner than expected!!! It's a good thing June 5 isn't that far away!!!
| Reviewed By: katt_jam On: May 23, 2006 17:57 PDT
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LOL I totally thought that you forgot, ty ty ty for the chapter though I loved it.I had tons of fun on my trip though, saw lots of places but it is nice to be home. I thought Id die of suspense though, you made us wait a LONG time for this chapter I didn't think I'd make it to the 22n'd glad I did though. please update soon. I don't think I'll be able to handle another long wait like last time. BTW you really made my day better for me with this chapter. Keep up the great work.
| Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT(NSI) On: May 23, 2006 15:57 PDT
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UGH U SHULD UPDATE MORE OFTEN YA NO!!unless ya have writers block then ok buh still please update =)
| Title: YEEEEEESSSSS!!!!!
Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: May 23, 2006 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!!! Finally, another chapter... i was beginning to worry you gave up on this fic, because i LOVE IT. This is by far the one fic in a VERY long while, where each chapter is a perfect mix of everything, and i laugh with each chapter. It seems like things have slowly began to change between Inu and Kag, I'm also beginning to see why Inuyasha acts the way he does, you portray him so well, and its perfect. My only wish is that i could see more chapters more often... but then again, i'm just glad to read them as they come. Oh yeah... before i end this review, it seems like you noticed my self-proclaimed nicknames too, hehehe. Oh well... but anyways, you would like me to write more Kagura fics? Hmmm, i just might. But first, i have to finish the current story, Time Soul Exodus. But, i'll seriously take that into consideration, and i hope that if i do someday publish a new Kagura related fic, you'll read and enjoy it as well. That is all for now, i hope to see more soon, the character developement is just so... *mwah*! Perfect, in this fic.
| Title: YES!
Reviewed By: AndiCrow On: May 22, 2006 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! After waiting i don't know how long you finally updated! I can't wait till you do it again? Why did it take you so long?
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, as for my ice-cream cone you gave me? You're right, and I did :D ....and savored every bite, too. Damn but he was good, too. :P
| Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, now I remember why I have this on faves, lol. Was beginning to wonder if it was let go or something. Well, for whatever the reason, Im glad you're back and updated. Loved what Kags had to say about Miroku. Everyone has a goal in life, and that just happens to be his, lol. Also love the goings on between Kags and Inu. A cabbage, lmao... Hope it continues. Should be interesting where you take all this. Update when you can.
| Reviewed By: Jenvara On: May 22, 2006 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! As always, your writing is the best. Please, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: IIDiIV [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 20:47 PDT
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Excellent my friend, excellent! Oh, and I'm surprised you understood my name, most people don't get it, lol.
| Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 12:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your updating soon, right? onegai! i love your story and would love to read more of your writings. please don't stop. you are one of the best authors on here. don't stop.
| Reviewed By: Jenvara On: April 19, 2006 22:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please oh please write some more! I love your story. You are a good writer and I cant wait for more.
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