| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: tumblegirl910 On: June 11, 2009 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is my all time favorite! This is actually also the first inuyasha fanfic I have ever read and I was hooked from then on. I hope you update more because you are just an amazing writer and I literally hang on every word of this story. Its just so different from your average inuyasha playboy kagome innocent story. There are so many quirks and of course I'm absolutely dying to know if those two will ever get together and if kikyo will come into the story again later on. Please update soon! I look foward to reading the rest of the chapters.
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Irish_Neko On: May 13, 2009 10:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of the best writers here on mediaminer. I vastly enjoy reading your work. Another perfect 10! Your plot is great and you make the characters life like.
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Irish_Neko On: May 13, 2009 10:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of the best writers here on mediaminer. I vastly enjoy reading your work. Another perfect 10! Your plot is great and you make the characters life like.
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Reviewed By: tumblegirl On: May 01, 2009 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been my favorite fanfic for years and it just keeps getting better and better! Please update soon cause this is truly an amazing fanfic
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Reviewed By: braindrain217 On: April 26, 2009 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story can't wait for the dance. lol.
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 17:21 PDT
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Hi there! you have a really interesting story so far, I really like it! I look forward to you next update!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 20:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant story!!! been reading it mostly non stop threw out the holidays (and staying up late to 'just finish this chapter...' lol) even thought I am working
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 14:06 PDT
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Wow, let's just say it's been a verrry long time since I've reviewed anything. This is a great fanfiction. I would like to say that the Playboy InuYasha and Anti-Fan Kagome idea is a bit overused. But you write this wonderfully, either way. I do sometimes find that the sudden changes in InuYasha's mood (going from arrogant to emo) are too sudden, but, then again, that's how he is in the manga and anime, so good job on getting his character through in your writing. It's hard to find a good fanfic like that. I would, though, like to see a more in-depth look into Sango and Miroku's relationship, because currently it seems to be going nowhere. ... man, I hate these spam filters, way to annoy the people who lost their glasses, mediaminer
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Reviewed By: popi222 On: April 12, 2009 22:33 PDT
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so ive had this fic favorite for forever and i just have to say that it is always worth the wait! It is great and i cant wait to see what happens at the ball and how koga will fit into everything. Keep up the awesome work!!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 15:35 PDT
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Its been a long time since I've read this story. Thank you for coming back and adding a new chapter to it. I hope to see more real soon!
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Reviewed By: dunno momo On: April 12, 2009 05:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay an update !!^^ well i prefer longer updates and longer chapters i love your story
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Reviewed By: little_wierd [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 03:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story you have going here!! Definately loving the dialogue! Keep it up can't wait for the next chapter! Very talented writer might I add! xD
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 00:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow I found a good story to read! Hmmm...as for chapters...I like them long.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: April 11, 2009 21:47 PDT
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I've just read your story from beginning to your most recent chapter!! Wow!! I love it!!! I love the vulnerability hidden beneath his words sometimes and I love how jealous Kagome gets when she suspects he's been with someone else (but hasn't). I love how you've made them dependent on each other to sleep too. I am also amazed that all this is in a matter of days but seems like it's over the course of a few months ha ha!! I can't wait for the ball and your teaser has left me optimistic that we may get to see Kagome cooking him breakfast yet *wink wink* Can't wait for more but I will patiently!! Thanks for the lovely story!!
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Title: Welcome Back!
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 18:52 PDT
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Welcome back! I am a fan of this story. I believe that I have read it twice. The interaction between InuYasha and Kagome is "deliciously crackling." Unfortunately, it has been a while since I have read it. However, I still kept with me the main points to be able to follow this much awaited update. I am glad to hear that your eye operation was successful and that you are now able to write. As for preference of frequency and story length, I think that should be up to you. If the story is pouring out of your fingers because the inspiration is there...then I recommend that you continue writing. Editing is a bit of a chore, a necessary one I know, but you are a great writer so I doubt that there is much to adjust here and there. I admire writers like you who are able to write a piece at a time. I need to sit think about the whole story from beginning to end and then write. But that is limiting. I may venture into your style of writing but it's scary to me. Anyway, I have found your Inu/Kag story one of my favorites and I especially love the pseudo sexual moments between the two. The layering of their history, their possible destiny, the temperaments, the physical dependence that they now feel towards one another, the support of Kagura and InuYasha's mom of their possible union, Sango's friendship, Miroku's friendship, Souta's admiration of InuYasha, Kikyou's dangerous presence along with others such as the one who attacked Kagome and injured her arm, the timely debate (sorry about the criticism...I didn't realize that readers would react that way about it - I too think about Charging Handles Forward...he is a great writer and I hope that he's fine)....to mention a few...I enjoy all of these intricacies. I especially enjoyed your description of InuYasha's room and how it exuded his personality. That is interesting to me since I am not much about decoration but I guess if it helps to describe a person then I enjoyed how Kagome reacted to it all. Thanks for updating and most of all thanks for sharing. Best, QS
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