| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy to read this chapter!!!!! Keep updating, please!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 22:05 PDT
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Awww. I just found this story and I love it. Kagome has fallen pretty hard for him, I think, if she hasn't totally gone berserk over being molested. It almost seems, from the way you wrote it, that she had a crush on him in middle and high school. And, to defend the research on internet argument, my local university is very strict about this. You need professor permission to even get on the computers in the library there.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha'sLurver On: August 02, 2005 21:31 PDT
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Nice fanfic that damn inuyasha is starting to get to poor kagome puhlease update soon its a very good fanfic and your very talented love to hear more soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 01:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
about the last review most of it was BS my friend put me up to. I'm not one to back out of a dare even if it ruins what little rep I have. but the part about the castration is true I'm smart enough to play it slow around here fortunately. very nice fic I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe inuyasha gotta love him neways yah poor kagome...damn that kanna neways update as soon as you possibly can ok buh-bye for now its a really good story.......................................
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Title: whit
Reviewed By: update On: July 24, 2005 21:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! this is an awesome story. please hurry and update. it has good suspense between kags and inu and reading all the limey goodness just makes we want to.... phew is it gettin HOT in here!!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 03:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Update soon
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Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 04:22 PDT
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bouzu is the correct spelling (the line above the 'o' means that it is a double vowel). ryuu means dragon. i'm glad that kagome has standards. true love waits. ja!
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story is so cool! Please update! I like it when Inu is teasing Kaggs! But Kagome really should do something against it... When Inu Yasha said: "Would it be so bad to love me?" I felt like melting to my chair... I guess that was the moment when Kagome's willpower broke (too)!
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Title: Diablo's Review
Reviewed By: DemonicUprising [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great really it is wonderful, though kagome seems a bit too fast to fall under inu's 'love spell' and doesn't fight back well enough i dont know about where you live but around here if i were him and tried that i would be leaving with out my balls and teeth, among other things and she should have a tazer.... and pepperspray ...... and a light saber....... lol ok forget the last one he wouldn't make it out of there with his life oh and give her a bazooka and soome genetic alterations and suit like the master chief from halo and a plasma sword to castrate his wannabe playa ass i'm the real playa in this game and i don't want his wussy pussy ass in his ferrari to fuck up my reputation, ever seen the fast and the furious? i only drive 6 second cars i make at least 100 grand a week pimpin' hoes, sellin weed and crack, selling illegal guns, and racing, but i still love your story you on my fav list
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Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 01:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word, amazing. This is one of the best and very tasteful NC-17 fics I've read so far. I can't tell you, because I'm sure you already know, how hard it is to find someone that can actually WRITE. Period. I hope you don't start making the chapters too short, because I actually like them really long. It gives my hand a rest at clicking so much =P plus it gives you a chance to elaborate on things a little more. I'd say, sretch the fic out some more, whatever happens between Inu and Kag, don't let it happen too soon. I like the teases though. =P I can't wait to see what happens next.. with Kikyou. Till then, I'll be checking here everyday just to see if you'd updated yet. Keep on with the wonderful work. ;D This fic makes me want to read every fic you've ever written. ^^
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Title: frickin awesome
Reviewed By: sweetsango202 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fanfic. one od the best ive read. and ive read thousands. the character attitudes are perfect and love the story!
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Title: Seating
Reviewed By: Kerica On: May 28, 2005 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really awsome. The only problem I could find was the seating. It said that Inuyasha sat next to his mother, and kagome next to him, and Rin next to her, Kagura than Sessomaru. but it also says that Seshomaru is sitting next to his father, who is sitting next to Inuyasha... Unless it's a round table... I think I just answered my own question. Well thanks for your time. Wait, wouldn't Inuyasha notice that Kagome didn't pull out langire when he gave her the presant? ~~~Love the very confused Kerica
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Title: cool...
Reviewed By: STEPONMOI16 On: May 24, 2005 20:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS AMAZING... I
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Reviewed By: skittles163851 On: May 24, 2005 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS AMAZING... I
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