| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: battousai69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 12:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter!!! Great story. I have already read the first two chapters more than once! I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: lighting On: March 03, 2005 08:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!*~ This is one of the best flics I have ever read!!*~ PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON, I can't wait to see what you have planned next!!!*~ I LOVE the story line!!*~ Continue, It's AWESOME!!*~ lighting-hellcat
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 03:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and i cant wait to know what happens in the end. plez update soon. devils child
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 19:31 PST
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(T.T)I think I've read over your first two chapters at least 20 times now! Your writing skills=FANTASTIC!!! I can SOOO Not wait for the next chapter hope I dont have to wait much longer!*wipes tear*
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Title: Very Nice!
Reviewed By: DarcKyHlt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 13:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting scene,and setting.I love every minute of it.-I can't wait for the next ch. plz email me at: QtPi_1404@yahoo.com when a new chapter is made.-Very good wording,and imagination.I am able to paint the scenes in my mind as I read,which is a very good thing.
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Reviewed By: buyo On: February 07, 2005 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz hurry and write the next chapter
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 14:02 PST
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WoW Omg I LOVE your Fic so Far!!
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Title: i luv it
Reviewed By: sweet-mizery On: February 02, 2005 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! i LUV ur fanfic...itz so awesome!!! can u lyk...write more plz?!!? itz rly awesome -ur fan
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Title: CONTINUE!!!!
Reviewed By: ihatepurplemonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 19:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was frickin great! awesome story.please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TweetyReviewer On: January 28, 2005 19:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, the spelling/Grammer would be 9.5. You're style of writing is very refreshing. I review only the very best, and yours is. Your speeling has a few minor mistakes, but what doesn't? The enjoyment factor would really be 20 , it's a great story. I enjoy how you portray kagome and fierce-sexy-stuborness. Write more - and I'll review more.......promise.
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Reviewed By: Inudemon On: January 28, 2005 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and how Kagome didn't just fall over Inuyasha! your story is really original and creative and I admire how you didn't make Kagome some weak ditz like most people do and you added a competitve spirit to her! and i just LOVE YOUR STORY!!! and I can't wait til you update!
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Reviewed By: seashell On: January 20, 2005 21:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story, can't wait till you update.
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Hopes_fall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 13:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's all around! PLEASE UPDATE FASTER! :(! PLEASE! And add yummy lemons PLEASE! ^_^ For me? Anyway LOVE IT LOVE IT~ As usual...lol. Well Bai!
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Reviewed By: ficfan7 (logged out) On: January 11, 2005 19:36 PST
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i realy like your fic, keep updating and i'll keep reading
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Reviewed By: animeangel779 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 15:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the way you didnt rush into a lemon or anything. You gave each character a unique personaliyty and then inforced it instead of just being like "oh well...Kagome likes inuyasha so besides the point that shes a virgin shes gonna fuck him anyway". u dont have to go painfully slow though. Just a medium pace. I could wait one more chapter for a lemon. Good job so far though. Im looking forward to another chapter.
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