| "The Love Nest" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Title: Chapter 5: Mutsumi
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 17:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hawt! ;) Mutsumi is the sexiest of them all, in a lush-bodied plus cute face sort of way. I can well see her romping her way through the rest of the household. :)
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Title: Nice perspective
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 09:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I initially did not like the fact that that "old biddy" had so much influence over Keitaro and his harem getting together (personally, I feel the girls should unconditionally come to him of their own volition), but your writing style as well as the fact that you build this up slowly and with great detail won me over. The depth of plot including cultural references (in a lemon!) in particular is outstanding. Only nit is with minor spelling errors (you use loose for lose, etc.). Interested to see where you go next with this. Regards. W.
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 00:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to read more, please try to update this fic as soon as you possibly can
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Reviewed By: Ransumi On: September 25, 2005 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. =] Keep up the good work. =D
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Title: ch.5
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ch.5 was another very well written chapter and your portrayal of Kanako was very good. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has to be one of the better stories I've read for love hina. and you have gotten the characters just as they are. I cant wait to see more. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kiyana On: September 21, 2005 18:34 EDT
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Two down... wonder who's next? I'd say... hmm. I'd say either Mitsune or Shinobu. :) Good chapter, at any rate. 'With the occasional orgy thrown in.' That's the way to go! :D
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Title: Chapter 04
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 16:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
The "sexy little sister sneaks into bed with you" sequence was worth it alone. /feels like such a pervert :)
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Reviewed By: SystemHack On: September 16, 2005 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job, glad to c ur still alive, srry its just my way of say good job
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Title: ch.4
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter and I like how you are splitting up all of the letters equally. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 06:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. If you keep up this level of quality, this should be an excellent fic.
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Reviewed By: SystemHack On: September 11, 2005 15:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
good job! keep it up. nice to see a plot
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Title: It's getting there
Reviewed By: Logistikill [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 07:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
You are taking your time and developing the set-up, which is good. I just hope you don't become overly-focuses on the set-up and forget the lemon(s)! ;)
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Reviewed By: someguy773 On: September 06, 2005 22:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Best chapter yet by far. Great premise and it's getting better. Keep it going, release more soon.
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is moving along nciely and the chapters are each a good lenght to keep me craving for more. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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