| "Journey to Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 373 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 15:39 CST
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Wow, that Yami needs to be put in his place for sure! Wandering around in the guise of Marik of all people... this is going to be hard for him to prove himself innocent! Everyone is gonna think he really did it! I'm so glad that Aria and Aten made up after that nasty fight... and that was a wonderful lemon with Yugi and Glenn! It would have been better if Yami hadn't been spying... please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 11:38 CST
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You got me hooked again. I love the evil way you wrote Yami (has a weak for badguys). A part of me hopes he grows a brain and see that Yugi has REALLy moved on and the other part feel sorry for him. And aten and aria ar the best =)
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 11:08 CST
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ruh roh. Yami Aria and Yami Aten together hunting Yami. Good chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 23:47 CST
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YAY! I can finally review now! Some fluke, huh? Well, I enjoyed your chappie, although that lemon with Aria/Umi was a bit odd. They're so young, you know? Can't stop fate, huh? I hope Aten will find the courage to tell Robbie how he feels. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 18:36 CST
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Now THAT was a good chapter!! What kind of puzzles me is, how can Aten and Robbie be intimate but not already admit love? Just a bit funky to me. ^_^ Anyways, Bakura is going to go after Umi with a shotgun if he finds out what happened between Aria and him! What fun! Erm.. sorry that my reviews are sparse! Just a busy Christmas season. Good luck with this story, and I can't wait to read more and more of it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 18:21 CST
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That was a good chapter... and a nice lemon too. Oh Bakura is going to flip out on them both! Can't wait for the next chapter! *hugs her Ryou plushie and waits for the chapter*
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:33 CST
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*blink* I think Bakura will notice quite quickly. She's gonna limp, man. Glenn's not a woman *Checks Glenn for boobs* Well.. He could be a flat woman!You never know... *Looks at Glenn's pants uneasily* Dare I tread the ground of a taken man/woman's area? I think not! I still say he's a woman, though!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 15:32 CST
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Awwww.... poor Aten....
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 11:34 CST
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Oohhhh, Bakura will KILL when he finds out! But that was such a sweet lemon... I'm so glad he was gentle with her. Although poor Aten... I can't wait until the day comes when Aten gets to pound Robbie into the floor... and if Aria can't block her emotions, then I don't think it'll be long... LOL Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset(computer problems) On: December 13, 2004 17:25 CST
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What the hell is that about at the end? If Yami hurts Marik,,,I don`t know what I would do. And what is with Yami Aten and Aku, I thought Yami Aten was okay, but now he merged with Aku and Aku is crap, unless you changed him. What is going on there? Who`s baby does Aria have first?
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: December 12, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, not Marik! *growls* I hate Yami! He better not suceed in this. The beginning of a story and already so much is happening, you are great at this. *sigh* Poor Aten, he needs a heart transplant. So now Aten has a full yami, that's interesting. Very interesting. Heh heh, guess the chibis are so much of a chibi now, are they? It's Ceres, Lily, and Ivy's turn to be chibis. lol. Wonder what Umi plans to show Aria.So Glenn knits sweaters w/ Otogi? He seems to be fitting in nicely enough. Can't wait till ur next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 20:28 CST
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*gasps* No, not Marik! I don't think that Yami's impersonation of him would be good enough... that entire house would know the difference! Right? Poor Aten... now he needs a transplant? something like that is so hard to find! I hope at least that Dr. Zira's search is worldwide... that may give a slightly better chance. Hayden's not any better? That's not good at all... I was hoping at least they'd find a way to keep him a little more mellow. *sad sigh* I'm curious to know what Aria's surprise is. I hope it's not a fish, she may not appreciate that too much... LOL Update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Drazaria On: December 12, 2004 14:14 CST
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*grabs millenium fork* Ah yes...the smell of a new story *takes a great big sniff and coughs* whoops, that too big a smell. Well i'm here to review again, and review i will. But *glares at Yami* do i have permission to poke and spear him and a couple other characters if they bug me? Please? Just one little hole?
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye (nli) On: December 12, 2004 14:00 CST
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AHHH!! Great start!! Oh, man!! I really like this already!! Glenn seems too good. Oh, well. Aten is soooooo cute! Aria and Umi sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! LOL!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:51 CST
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oh my god! o.o don't hurt Marik!!!! Nooooo...he's my favorite!!! But anyways, really great chapter! I wonder if Yami Aten will kill Yami cuz of what he does to Marik. Oooh that would be soo cool. Die Yami yay!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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