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 Reviewed By: to-lazy-to-log-in  On: January 12, 2005 14:01 CST
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NOOOOOOO!!! Sniff...Poor Marik...
 Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in)  On: January 12, 2005 13:20 CST
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The idea of a YamixMarik NCS would be bad. I mean, Marik is going through so much right now. His son is in the hospital, they have yet to find out what happened to Aria and Aten, and they have to clear Malik's name. Marik has enough on his shoulders, adding NCS would break him spiritually. Marik is the rock of the group, more than Bakura. Crumbling is not an option. Anyways, I love this chapter. Hopefully Asher will get to burn Barnes *huggles Asher* he's so cool! FIRE GOOD!!
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2005 10:21 CST
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I don't know. On one hand I do, but.. Oh, well. Wonderful chapter as always!!!
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 10, 2005 10:19 CST
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Poor Marik! Suspect #1 in a string of bad things he's innocent of, and no way to prove otherwise to boot! That damn Yami, he's really got to go, and straight to hell! Too bad you didn't write the sex scene for Marik and Ryou... Marik is never truely gentle in bed, so it's always fun to read about his little exploits... I hope you update this soon, ok?
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: January 09, 2005 21:52 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You really are evil aren't you? You left it at an evil cliffie again. lol. Now everyone thinks Malik is behind this string of crimes that he doesn't he even know about. Grr, I hate Yami! *starts to kill the nonliving again* Well, I better not start ranting again. Anyways, back to my review. I'm so glad Aten is alive. Poor him, and Robbie too. *hugs them both* I'm also glad Umi forgived Aria and they're back together. Such a great and angsty but sort of happy ch. Oh one question, you mentioned something about Kaiba bringing Joey and Hayden to the hospital during Bakura's phone call, did you really mean Hayden or did you actually mean Jaimen? That just sort of didn't really make sense to me, so I'm wondering what you meant. Well, I can't wait to see what happens next. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 20:39 CST
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What the hell? Malik? How could you? He better not take the fall for that asshole Yami. (I`d like to beat the nonliving crap out of that thick headed Pharoah, baka, oh,, um) Just ranting. Hehehe. Anyway, what are you thinking? Nothing had better happen to him. I love the cuddly, sometimes slightly psychotic Malik. He is too cute. Don`t do that. Give Aten a hug and a plushie. Best wishes for a speedy recovery. And give Robbie a hug as well. He seems to need it too. (Yes I know Aten is a little old for a plushie but who cares I want one too and I`m almost 30.)
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 18:24 CST
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... *removes all weapons from your body (Graham Cracker of Evil Vile Bloody Death was...it's too awful to say!!!) and gives you a S'more* Okay, I think it's okay if you live a little longer...
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 17:54 CST
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No. And furthermore hell no. This is not happening. This was a supersad chapter!! I can't wait for updates!!!
 Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 15:20 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh gosh I am so sory for not reviewing I just read and go off so many apologies, and yeah! Like last chapter I remember that and then I was liek I remember it all when you posted it up to that point and I was so asd btu so relived that you didnt kill Aten off, it would break my heart, btu I'm so happy he's alright for now! So happy and they confessed each other's feelings..and ya know it kinda surprised me that everyone would be so surprised I mean couldn't they see how clsoe those two were? *hugs Aten* feel better sweetie! And I'm so happy that Aria has learned from her mistakes, though she had to go through so much to learn from them, and that Umi forgave her and things are falling into place and yay! I;m so happy for people! But now this whoel malik thing...poo I hope they can run away! :/
 Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 14:16 CST
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That was SO touching! Finally they know. I know Aten will get better. Can't wait for the weddings.But now they think Malik is the suspect of those crimes. Great, just great. >.< I know he'll be cleared, but that will take forever... Also, Hayden was mentioned in this chappie, but I didn't notice him say anything. Was he really there? If so, does that mean he got better??
 Title: Draza
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 11:54 CST
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*sniffles* that Robbie and Aten scene was so cute and touching...I'm glade Aria finally realised that she was a stubborn bitch. And Marik had better keep a low profile from now on, huh? oh well. OH! here's a little present for Aten *hands monkey plushie* I hope you get better soon little Aten!
 Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 09, 2005 10:43 CST
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*screams* i am so glad aten is okay and robbie admitted he loved him and umi knows hte truth and aria has him back. oh lord... oh i cannot wait for yami to get waht he deserves. and i like glenn i jsut hope nothing terrible happens to him... ooh this story has me on edge!!
 Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2005 23:37 CST
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That was heart wrenching, good god girl do you know how to cause people to cry, I`m sobbing like a banshee now. It was definately one of those cliffhangers that force you to come back.
 Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2005 23:04 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG, I was afraid that it was going to happen to Aria. Poor her. *wails* So evil! But I'm so glad Yami Aten had his revenge on those bastards. Mwahahahahaha! Just wait til Marik and Bakura finds out, I think I'd love for them to go after their remaining. You're so good at this, tormenting people. lol. About time Aten confessed his feelings to Robbie. Poor Aten, I'm glad you told us won't die, because if you left it there, I don't think I'd be able to stand it. An extremely captivating ch and very evil. And yay, Seto plushie! ^_^ I can't wait to read the next ch. See ya then. ^_~
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 06, 2005 14:06 CST
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*stabs with Millenium Backscratcher and Rusty Spoon of Doom* *sticks Lightbulb of Darkness and the Candle of Massacre somewhere VERY uncomfortable... both lit* And you don't want to know what I did with the Graham Cracker of Evil Vile Bloody Death.
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