| "Journey to Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 373 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank goodness you didnt kill off Aten!! I hope Aria tells her parents what happened to her. Just think what Marik and Bakura will do! *evil grin*. I'm also glad that Aten and Robbie will admit their feelings to each other. It's about time...Great chapter! And I'll put away my weapons now. ^^;;
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Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!) On: January 06, 2005 10:40 CST
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Well, it actually let me review, thanks goodness! Those two kids have no end to the crap pulled on them! Aria raped!? And now Aten Dying!? You can't do this to us dammit! *wails* Those two deserve a good, long, boring life after growing up like this, don't you? I think you need to be called the angst queen! At least you were good enough to let us all know at the end of the chapter that you won't be killing our favorite little boy off... You know, it's hard to not call Aria and Aten chibis anymore... they are 15 after all, and getting a little old for that... damn! *sighs* Oh well, I'll get over it. Please update soon!
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Title: darn it
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made me cry in school. that's how good this chapter was. i glad your not gonna kill Aten i like him he sounds like such a cutie... by the way where did you get all the Arbic from i'm trying to found something i can read in Arbic but i can only find a few thing. i'm english but i can read and speak arbic without and difficulty. anyways thanx for the story i hope you have a another story after this one.... bye from yamialex17
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 09:34 CST
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*the only sound is crickets, as Lady Elfskye has passed out cold*
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Title: *crying*
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 09:15 CST
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omg poor aten, aria and robbie!! ooh they go through so much crap in such young lives... as least andrew and jason got what was coming to them and eric, i hope he gets nightmares! lord... i hate to think how marik and bakura are gonna react if and when they find out. no, i take it back. i hope thet track those sick psychos down and torture them when they find out!! this was not aten and aria's fault. they jsut... made mistakes but they're learning from them. gods... well good cahpter. can't wait for sunday to arrive for this to continue.
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Title: O_O NCS?!?!
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 23:33 CST
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NCS?!?! And a foursome NCS?!?!?!?!?! With whom?! *readies the Sennen Spear of Osiris, chopsticks of doom, and my trusty daggers* Ok, ready, sort of. lol. Nice ch though, I'm glad Bakura and Aria are on good terms again and that Bakura is finally home. That second to the last part w/ Seto's annoucnement was a whole lot of suspense, glad that guy didn't suceed in killing Seto and his family. Good laugh on the chibi Arias. ^_^ *huggles* Kawaii! lol. Hmm, Aria might be in some trouble, perhaps a lot of trouble. Guess i'll have to find out. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 15:39 CST
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*readies Millenium Backscratcher, Rusty Spoon of Doom, and new weapons such as the Lightbulb of Darkness, the Candle of Massacre, and the Graham Cracker of Evil Vile Bloody Death* Okay, I'm ready for whatever you throw at me!!!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I loved this chapter... heh Atem has trouble with long words just like me. At least he does not have to worry about vocabulary books... now those are bad! ^^; anyways can't wait to read the next chapter *hugs Aten plushie*
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 03:00 CST
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Wow, lots of drama. May the Barnes and his group of people suffer in agonizing pain and die a slow gradually painful death. *glares* Poor Aten. *hugs* Aria was quite mean to him, siding w/ Kieth is not only low but sad. She needs some sense knocked into her. *shakes head* She losing the baby might prove to be a good thing. Poor Umi. And Bakura's still not back, he's too stubborn for his own good. Ah well, he better come to his senses soon, his family will miss him. Like father like daughter, lol. Monday's your next update, ah well, I wish you a Happy New Year! ^_^ See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 18:22 CST
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*systematically murders each and every person in the group at the end**grabs her Millenium Backscratcher and stabs you repeatedly*
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 17:52 CST
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Take your time. Good things come with a focused mind. SO, as for this chappie, it was too sad. I almost cried. I didn't because my son kept coming in and I didn't want him peeking. That was just too much. I'd like to slap her. Really. Take care.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 10:38 CST
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... i know i may regret this later but is eriously hope aria learns ehr lesson the hard way. love is blind and she is living proof. fathers, will think every man int eh world is wrong for their adughter becasue they want someone perfer. umi is not only a perfer gentleman but he is perfect! keith would fuck anything wiht a tight ass regardless of gender. and the barnes... may their dicks rot off and may they end up with an fleet of carnivorice parasites slowly and painfully eating them alive. and if aria does get raped by eric... i know i will regret this but maybe it'll knock her off her high horse several pegs. she should really listen to aten. he has lived this this shit and survived. scarred but he's alive. sorry for the harsh comment but... gods she is jsut, stupid.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there a reverse spell? and btw...i love ur writing so much that i think it influences my own...i don't this i have used Iterami yet, but can i? I don't want to make that mistake before at least informing you. Continue soon
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 02:32 CST
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*growls* Bakura is such an ass right now, and Yami's making it so much worse. I hate him so much! *thinks about stabing him repeatedly* Poor Aria, *hugs* I'm just glad Ryou and Malik are so understanding for her and Mariku is about the same, because she needs that. It's only Baku that's being in histerics. And Aten was cool. He was being psychological, yeah, that was interesting. ^_^ Dramatic ch. lol. The lemon was awesome too. Well, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Valea On: December 28, 2004 01:46 CST
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Aww, that's so evil! Poor Aria, all scared! And damn Bakura just going off! And damn Yami tot hell! Turnign everyone against each other. he's too evil for comfort. I hope Bakura gets over it, besides the child won't survive wil it with Yami's curse (as sad as that woudl be, would you have Bakura dancing or actaully showing remorse?) I'm super happy that this reveiwnging thing works now, I can cacth up with all the reviews i have missed yay! Looking forward to next update! eep!
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