| "Journey to Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 373 ] |
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 17:24 CST
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*pant* *pant* finally caught up...^^ i love it...lol porno stash. and btw y would Robbie says godS if he only believes in one?
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Reviewed By: Nanx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 12:31 CST
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Hey, I haven't reviewed for a while, but I was busy with a report for biology. Guess which subject I chose? Heart failure. Thanks for the idea :-) I really didn't know what I should do. That reminds me: is it okay if I use a piece of the chapter (translated in Dutch) in which Zira says Aten has heart failure? It would be a nice intro for my report. Well, enough about that ^_^0 I really liked it, almost fell of my chair laughing. Marik and Bakura are priceless XD. Me wants more!
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not signed in) On: February 27, 2005 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I swear I almost died of laughter!!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 19:41 CST
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*Dies of laughter* Oh, 'CEOs who like it up the butt'! *snort* Holy poo on a stick! THAT is the most hilarious thing I have ever seen.. BEsides Marik's impression of Yami.. that kill me XD.. Oh my *Laughlaugh* Ohhh, so funny.. *Huggles Chibi Mako Plushie* Thank you for the plushie! It's so cute!
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Reviewed By: Lissete(to lazy) On: February 26, 2005 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaleo:I remember when I used to sneek Porn into my room...Ahhhhh the memories Jadien: -_-
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Reviewed By: L@ On: February 26, 2005 19:00 CST
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OMG! There looking at PORN!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy now to log in) On: February 26, 2005 18:42 CST
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OMG... from the mouths of babes... poor Robbie! LOL that was so good! "I... umm... I didn't think... I mean... I didn't know... oh god! I didn't know it went in there!" I damn near died on that one! And it was a wonderful lemon you wrote. Playful yet romantic! I can't wait for the next update!
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Title: *frowns*
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 13:48 CST
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*Taps Robbie and Aten on their hands* naughty boys, you shouldn't be snooping! That was great, never knew you could sleep on stairs though...wonder how comfortable it is...anyways, i wonder if Mokuba is going to go through with a vasectomy (don't know if i spelled it right)?
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: February 26, 2005 13:21 CST
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the lemon was very sweet, thr drunk part hilarious, and hte prono stash. i wish i could say more but i don't feel so hot. laterz.
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Reviewed By: anubiset (laughing to hard to log in) On: February 26, 2005 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That part with Robbie and Aten worked out great. I loved it. Oh, thankies for the drool guard, I needed during the lemon. That was ubber hot. (that guard worked perfectly although, I still got drool on the desk.) I am so loving the whole Robbie thing, even though I knew what was coming, I still couldn`t get enough.
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Reviewed By: I IS ME On: February 26, 2005 10:47 CST
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Aww!!!!! *steals Cassie... and Seto's porn collection* Hooray for kleptomania!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye(too tired to log in) On: February 26, 2005 10:23 CST
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*Dies laughing at end* Oh, goodness! Whoo.. that was one hella chapter there, girl! Very nice!! I want more, cause I'm addicted!!
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Reviewed By: I Is Me On: February 25, 2005 17:07 CST
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The one at the bottom... Moaw!! Aten & Robbie Fo toot!!!!
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Title: *shudders*
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 15:23 CST
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you know...i really don't wanna know what your twisted mind came up with that includes a spatula, an egg beater and a banana...and that was an interesting little scen with Robbie and Aten on the dance floor. I'm glade Yami Aten could learn to trust Robbie as well...but did he react the way he did to memories of what ppl had done to Aten and him?
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Reviewed By: Beysie (Very tired) On: February 23, 2005 13:09 CST
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I liked that chapter very much! I'd write more, but brain is on the fritz... Just update soon, ok? Looking forward to the lemon next chappie!
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