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 Title: thanks
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too tired to log in)  On: May 19, 2005 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh thanks i was running low *opens box and pulls out tissues and takes bat* does that mean we get to torture that shit head pharaoh soon? that was a romantic chapter but i feel so bad for Aria. umi really does love her. robbie and aten are so happy and in love. marik is a horn dog but he mises aten, me too! cries and blows nose* the video tape? ooh i'm getting mixed feelings about this. anyway great chapter! it's bound to keep me awake for work today. oh yeah!! i seriously hope that eye of ra will protect her and i really REALLY wish the gods would stop protecting that has-been pharaoh! don't those idiots have eyes to see the sins he's committeed?! *glares at statue of anubis* if i didn't love him so muhc i'd shatter it.
 Title: Used to be lissete
Reviewed By: Oferia  On: May 19, 2005 08:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh No....VIDEOTAPE!
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in)  On: May 19, 2005 08:10 CDT
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Oh..Oh, is that what I think it is? Is that the one with Yami on it? I bet it is. I mean it hasn`t shown up yet. That has to be it. I hope Marik watches it. I know the boys meant to use it, but I know that weddings can get you sidetracked. They take a lot of energy to get ready.
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: May 15, 2005 20:09 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww, these two ch was majorly sweet and fluffy, a few of tearjerking moments. I'm happy for their newly joined love! ^_^ Loved Aten and Robbie's wedding night, the lemon was nice ^_~. Awesome chapters! I loved all the humor, hentainess, and the sweet fluffy moments. Too bad I missed the chance for the wedding gifts, but if it's not too late for Aria and Umi's gifts I'd liked to give them my best wishes for them. And perhaps a pair of handcuffs for Aria to use wouldn't be bad. ^_~ heh heh. I apologize for missing all those lovely chapter, I didn't get to read for a long time, well maybe it was like two weeks or so. ^_^; Hope to read the next ch on the day you post. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 15, 2005 01:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great job on the last few chapters! There were a few tearjerkers for me here and there, but great job nonetheless. I don't really have any comments this time. My minds been extremely clouded lately so I can't exactly think right. But anyway, keep up the great work and I will hopefully return sooner next time. @.@
 Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 15, 2005 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffles* its so sweet, bakura cried! And jsut thinking about the past, gets me all teary too *blows my nose* and it was an interesting/cute wedding night. (so did aten not get aroused because he was stressed/afraid? ) anywho, im so happy theyre all married now and super happy, makes me sad to think that people may die :( and just too soon...
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in)  On: May 14, 2005 16:35 CDT
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That was amazing. I cried with Bakura. I know he didn`t cry but I did it for him.
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in)  On: May 14, 2005 16:35 CDT
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That was amazing. I cried with Bakura. I know he didn`t cry but I did it for him.
 Reviewed By: Broke Time(NLI)  On: May 14, 2005 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwww, it's so... *Sniff* Fluffy.. *Twitches lightly* The fluffy overload, and Bakura crying.. to much to take *Twitch twitcH* I-- *Explodes happily*
 Title: weddings
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too tired to log in)  On: May 14, 2005 13:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
*hugging box of tissues* i'm sorry but i always cry at weddings! *blows nose* and it was a double wedding how romantic!! *cries some more* have a happy life you four!!
 Reviewed By: Broken Time (I am logged in.. such wishful thinking)  On: May 12, 2005 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holy poop on a stick.. they finally did it ^__________^ Yay for weddings with the fluff! *Gasp* Glenn! I totally forgot about him O.o I feel ashamed.. Horrah for the happy couple, and the soon-to-be couple!
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in)  On: May 12, 2005 12:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so beutiful that I cried. I loved it. I will be going now, to finish crying.
 Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Draza(too lazy to log in)  On: May 11, 2005 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
That wedding was so...*sniffles* beautiful....*cries* i've read these storiesfrom begginning to end and over and over again...it's great to read about Aten's wedding...you kinda get a gut feeling that things are either going to end soon, or change dramatically...you know? *sniffles again and runs off to corner*
 Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in)  On: May 11, 2005 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh that had to be so very sweet!! i'm really happy for them :) marik is jsut plain... horny but i don't want to see him change. great chapter!
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in)  On: May 08, 2005 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I`m glad I gave you an idea for the next part. This chapter was amazing. I hope that Aten and Robbie`s little video taping will work. I want to see him get what he deserves. Not only did he confess his sins, he confessed Charlie`s as well. That is going to make that even better cannon fodder. Not to mention what he said about the little hate group. Hopefully it will get to a police officer that is not corrupted. There has to be one. Maybe and internal reviewer that is on the force to weed out the liabilities.
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