| "Journey to Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 373 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 14:07 CDT
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Whoooo... that was.. damn.. hot... Anywho.. *fans self* I know I'm getting lax again about reviewing. Side story.. fell in love, found out it was a lie.. now, I'm just picking up pieces. Oh well. I'm back to writing my own stuff. NASCAR stuff. Want to make my one character Japanese/American...but I suck at the language.. I'm using your stuff for pointers..*ducks head* if that's okay.. Anywho.. back to your story.. I am so loving this.. so much!! I loved the lemons! Always good when your feeling down!! Keep 'em coming, but don't wreck yourself along the way!!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: June 15, 2005 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, yummy lemony goodness. ^_^ Haven't read a foursome in awhile, so that was extra delicious. ^_^ Poor Aten though, hopefully he'll go to Zira and find out what's wrong. *hugs Aten plushie* Loved the chappie, see ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 00:12 CDT
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Omg. I'm so bad, I can never review when i need too! So much has been happening. Its still hard to believe that Yami is still so persistant but so passive with Yugi and all the shyt he has done! And yeah, I don't lknow you think Aten can go see Zira with Aten, maybe so he can feel a bit more comfortable? Anyway, this chapter was still super cool with its lemony wonderfulness (And sad with Aten's sex drive frustrations) but still it was all good. Loved in major amounts.
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Reviewed By: Broken Time (I'm going to kill my compie -_-;;) On: June 13, 2005 15:59 CDT
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Awww, the squeal I could have posted for Ryou's angst/cute-ness was impossible.. Poor Ryou-chan! I will never be able to get over it when my Dai-Dai leave meeeeee U_U
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 13, 2005 11:28 CDT
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Lemony goodness, lemony goodnes, here. Come and get it.
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Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: June 13, 2005 09:26 CDT
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ooh lemony sweet. poor aten... it's not easy to get exited even if it is with the one you love. hopefully, things will be good. the drawing is nearly done, i jsut had a hard time wiht aten's weapon. love ur stories so can't wait for more! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: June 13, 2005 03:04 CDT
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Yugi is one brave man, and I especially liked his last line to Yami. Very interesting. Stupid asshole, *glares* As for Aten, poor him, so much drama ahead. Don't worry abt the lack of lemonyness, I'll shall be patient. ^_^ Busy schedules are hard, I should know, I was going crazy from not having an adequate break for such a long time until last Fri. Can't wait for the next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Broke Time *Smashs computer* On: June 09, 2005 21:26 CDT
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Why, Yami.. Why must yuo be so meeeeeeeeean U_U ?? It upsets me so muc that he's done all these horrible things to everyone.. and he's being such a jerk! *Grabs mallet and polishes* Oh my.. I may just have to bring this out VERY soon if he keeps this up!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 09, 2005 21:01 CDT
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Yami is being a bigger asshole my the minute, and no I can`t tone down that description. He is making things so bad for everyone involved, if he could see with the eyes of love he would see that he could at least be friends with Yugi, if he would just stop being... well, you know.
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Title: phew
Reviewed By: Draza (lazy ass) On: June 09, 2005 19:15 CDT
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wow...i was worried there for Yugi for awhile. Plus for Aten when those cops came, i almost thought it would be Yami pulling some stunt or somthing. And it's been awhile since we've had a Yami/Yugi confrontation too so...*throws cookies* that's for a long over due confrontation!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 09:24 CDT
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You may have said you didn't have time for lemony goodness, but the drama makes up for it! I feel bad for Aten. He's still got so many problems coming his way. ..But Yugi ROCKS BABY!! I think he's the only one who can talk to Yami in a slightly assured way (if that makes sense). The anticipation for the sequal is high for me! ^_^ By the way, good luck with your schedule of karate, therapy and work. I could never handle as much as you!
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Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: June 09, 2005 08:23 CDT
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ooh damn!! yugi, u r one brave young man for standing up to him but an evil more evil than yami? ooh boy... the drawing it's nearly done so i'll scan in b&w and send it ur way. ooh the suspence is alreayd killing me!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: June 06, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy sizzles! That is a lot of things, and the plans for the sequel, wow lots of drama, drama drama drama, where would I be without your drama. lol. Eric shall be dead! And foursomes are yummy! ^_^ Sequels are awesome, Fall From Grace sounds pretty. Hayden is really demented, poor him; Glenn as a stripper is surprising but interesting. lol. The last ch w/ Robbie taking care of Cassie was cute too! And there goes my long laundry list, XD. I'm sorry I can't comment more throughly but hopefully I'll be able to once again after this week. ^_^ Really awesome ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 05, 2005 21:04 CDT
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Apocolypse would work best, I mean the whole battle is going to happen. If Yami were to win then the world be destroyed. Maybe Apocolypse diverted. Depends on who wins.
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Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: June 05, 2005 16:19 CDT
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ooh already the suspense is killing me!! i don't know what to say but what else is there to say except i cannot wait for the next chapter. btw, the drawing of hte final battle is nearly done. i hope u like the trident... i had to use one of my toys as a model...
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