| "Journey to Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 373 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie (Very tired) On: March 30, 2005 20:37 CST
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Sorry for not reviewing the last little while, but I've been sick... I'm finally getting better though. Please, don't tell me it's already too late for Kailani! She can't be dead... and just when they're all going to be safe finally! Well, safe for the time being... At least the wonderful lemon offset the tragedy! I think that was the first lemon for Joey and Seto that you've done in a very long time! Update soon, ok?
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Title: oh dear gods
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too tired to log in) On: March 30, 2005 19:40 CST
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i knew it, i knew it! and people like that really exist out there! those poor people and childred... they were innocent in all of this! i gotta lay down but gods, things are not getting better but worse.
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 30, 2005 19:00 CST
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*crying* poor baby. What a horrible way to leave it. However we all knew it was coming. Until Yami is dealt with she can`t have a child survive. I loved what Asher did with the cars and those men deserved to burn. How is Asher by the way. Here, give him this from me. *hands torch* Take good care of it Asher. Love you.
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito T_T On: March 30, 2005 18:52 CST
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First it was so sad and awful! T_T Then the lemon made it better. Then you had that evil ending!!! ;__; *Curls up in a fetal position*
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye @_@ On: March 30, 2005 10:16 CST
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HOLY CRAP... first that, then lemon, then this.. you trying to give me a heartattack????? OMG!! *stalks you with squeakymalletofDOOM*
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 01:13 CST
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How lovely! Its so much happiness they FINALLY got married! *throws flowers around and skips for joy* And now Aten and Robbie can get married safely hopefully! Oh yay! And there is acceptance going on! *sighs contently* hehe! Now if only we could see what this random noise is about. And Aria's not going to go crazy and like shave Lanie's head is she? And dude, the dragon bonding was so cool! *dances* this was a super happy chapter that i superly enjoyed! 'twas great!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) On: March 27, 2005 03:38 CST
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Yay for the happy marriage, yay for the yummy lemon, yay for the tolerant priest, yay for the kawaii chibi dragon, yay for the evil guy that's dead!!! ^_^ And yay for the awesome chappies! lol. I sound so hyper, but that because I love the happy stuff in these two ch, but I know that probably won't last that much longer. Hope that engine doesn't foreshadow something bad. *is very suspicious, very, suspicious* XD Can't wait for more, hopefully I can read your ud on Wed this time. See ya. ^_~
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: lissete ( lazy) On: March 27, 2005 03:06 CST
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that was sooooooooo special ::holds up Golden Paint pen:: Don't ruin it...
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Reviewed By: elusive_dreamer On: March 26, 2005 21:21 CST
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the last chapter's really sweet...and i think the song really fits their wedding^_^(NOTE:umm...i think the song was by Shania Twain and not Faith Hill...)gotta love Bakura and his undying thieving mind as well as Marik's dirty mouth(ahem...for cursing, and in church of all places!) hey, thank you for commenting on my suggestion!:) i thought of this as i was reading on your past stories when yami went to ryou and asked him if he was willing to die for his loved ones(i'm not sure what story this is in and yami's exact words but this is how i understood it anyway). about diabound, i found some info on him in Missq's site, so check it out if you have time. hmmm...so aria and aten's battle is on the next story...okay, at least i know that your story about the itemris and ishtars won't be ending anytime soon^_^(i really love bakura's surname in here, it sounds really cool!)i guess that's it for now, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: 2lazy On: March 26, 2005 17:07 CST
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what timezone are you in? you live in canada right? All bow down to the canadians!!! Didn't ya say that you'd update on Saturday, or wus that just me. I wonder if Kailani will have as much energy as chibi Aria on an M&Ms high. I'm looking foreward to all the weddings (are ya gunna make seto's a chaotic disaster, dun dun dun.) and lots more juicy lemons, with a hint of anzu bashing now and then. tomorrow have a Happy Easter (even if you don't celebrate it)
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Title: eek!
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too tired to log in) On: March 26, 2005 14:44 CST
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loved hte wedding it's official and hte priest is a saint! but something tells me that engigne is not gonna be good news... quick get the kids inside like now!!!
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Reviewed By: peepsake On: March 26, 2005 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEAAAAASE UPDATE!!!!! *starts yanking out large chunks of hair and bashing face aggainst computer screen until it is a bloody pulp* I neeeeeed to find out what happens next!!! Its my literary caffeine, and you're depriveing me of my needs. ...By the way, I loved the AtenXRobbie lemon
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Reviewed By: Yakari Taito (not logged in) On: March 26, 2005 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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^_^ Aww the Red Eyes White Dragon sounds so cute! I hope that noise isn't a bad thing! O_O
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Title: comments and suggestions ^_^
Reviewed By: elusive_dreamer On: March 25, 2005 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, the last 2 chapters were really worth the wait! finally, aten got to do it with robbie although i think it would've been more romantic if robbie isn't suffering from amnesia. also, it's just too bad that bakura didn't get to join the ishtars and ryou for a foursome...oh well. anyway, i was just wondering how bakura got back into to the ring to stack his cookies because as i remembered, he can't get back to it last time when yami stabbed him...just wondering... for future chapters, i hope that we would get an update(?) on yami's plot especially those regarding bakura since he'd stripped him of his shadow powers.will ryou be involved in yami's evil plot against the ishtars and itemris? because in my opinion, he's really a good target for yami's revenge since all yamis within the itemri-ishtar family are really attached to him(sorry, i can't help it...he's really my most favorite character here^_^) and especially now that aria and bakura are practically vulnerable too. anyway, i hope you'd let me know of what you think on these, okay? see you next chappie!^_^ note: (1)is this the story wherein aria and aten finally get to duel yami?(2)will diabound be in this story?(sorry about this but i'm really curious since i've read on some yugioh sites that diabound is actually bakura's "weapon of choice" back in ancient egypt. i think it's considered to be really powerful...hey, maybe he can help in dealing with yami! teehee!):p
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Reviewed By: anbuiset (too lazy to log in) On: March 24, 2005 13:15 CST
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Sorry about not reviewing for a while. Being sick sucked. So, how are doing? Hope you are well. I loved the lemons and can`t wait for Robbie to be okay again. The weddingis coming the wedding is coming. I can`t wait. *squels in delight* You need to have everyone send something for the lucky couple. They need prezzies.
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