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 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2004 18:02 CST
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Gahh!!! It's getting harder and harder to log into this thing!!! Otay, this was kinda sad. Poor Aria and Aria's baby... *sobs* So, how were your holidays?
 Title: ... holy sh*t...
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2004 15:10 CST
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you know, ryou and malik are very understanding parents and honeslty? it's a real shame not most paretns are like them. bakura is the typical attitude of a parent finding this out. and aten, oh he's such a sweetie! i giggled when robbie got hit in the head wiht the door. oops! sweet lemon and at least marik understands but... shit yami is just making this ahelluva lot worse. aria should have thought about this but... she has family who cares about her instead of kicking her to the streets. also, what's gonna happen when she tells keith and umi? i doubt mr. cheating champion is gonna stick around. also i'm almost done with the pciture for you. let me jsut draw the weapons and i can mail u the black and white copy. and aten calling miranda mom, that is very sweet. this story was sweet yet kinda sour but that's why i love it so much! so waiting for thrusdays to come ^^
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2004 12:05 CST
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Holey crap. *smacks Bakura in head with Millenium Iron Skillet* That man needs his ass kicked. Aria really need him. My mom did just about the same thing to me. *Hugs Aria.* Just, I hope it's Umi's!!
 Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2004 23:33 CST
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I've returned! Hehe. Wow, lots of things have happened since my last reading session. Aria's really pregnant now? Oh my! How are her parents going to take it? And Yami is still just as evil as ever! I hope he gets what's coming to him!! Hey, I actually had a comment this time XD. Anyway, I must disappear again. I shall return later. Oh, excellent job on Return to Hades, by the way. I just finished reading that as well ^_^.
 Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2004 00:55 CST
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Yami is a too cruel! And he can change into other people?!?! That was just so mean of him, no wonder he was so stupid as to say brown and pink. *laughs despite his evilness* I want to murder him now for trying to kill the unborn, actually I did before. lol. Aria actually defended Kieth over her brother?!?! Poor Aten. *huggles* Heh, video of child birth, poor Aten. *snickers at Robbie* lol. It was hilarious. A fascinating ch. And yep, Glenn is definitely like Otogi. lol. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2004 13:56 CST
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Hi sorry that I have not reviewed in a while... stupid computer of mine! Anyways wow I really feel bad for Aten... poor Aten *hugs him* Well can't wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 18:19 CST
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Oh my!!! These last chapters were great, took me a while to get on the comp to read them. I loved them so much, I didn't expect Aria to get pregnant! That's scary. I wonder if Yami's spell will work. I didn't know Yami could turn into anyone he wanted. That's horrible! Well, I can't wait for the update. I'm hanging in suspense!
 Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 13:30 CST
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OMGWTFBBQ?!!!!!!! Yami is going to be so cruel as to try and KILLLLL Aria's unborn child??!!! If I could I'd stab him where his heart used to be!!! And how did Aria get attracted to Bandit Keith? He's like a 25cent pimp or something. Even with all this controvarsy, great mood and chapter! I enjoy chapters that make me mad and get emotion from me! Nice job with the interesting but extremely cruel twist! Somebody's got to kill Yami. *sharpens plastic spork*
 Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2004 20:29 CST
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Welp, gotta say I saw that one coming... Man, this Not Letting Anonymous Reviewers thing is really annoying, innit. Mau, teh principal so nice!!! *hugs and gives her jewelry* Happy Chrismahanakwanzaakah to you.
 Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2004 02:38 CST
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Aria did not just go with Bandit Kieth! I know she was really mad, but him, that's just way over board. He's like old too. :P Bakura's being way too overprotecting along w/ Seto. Having public relation people tackle Umi was sort dramatic. But anyways, an interesting ch. As always. ^_^ Poor Aten, things aren't going very well for him. *huggles Aten* And poor Umi, Aria just crushed him for the moment, just to get back at Bakura. *huggles Umi also* I didn't know you didn't know I had an account, well actually I have two. ^_^; This one and the other one I used last time. Hopefully I'll be able to read the next ch. on Fri. things are getting a little too busy for me. Well, see ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2004 20:39 CST
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OMG you weren't kidding about her finding the scum of the earth! Bandit Keith!? *shakes head* Bakura is so over protective of Aria... he's gonna have a worse case of empty nest than Ryou I predict! Mind you, that's only if he can be pried away from Aria... *giggles, thinking of crowbar* I'm worried for Aten and Robbie again... those gay killers are bad business! Mind you, I'll be Yami Aten comes to the rescue again... Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2004 11:12 CST
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Oh my Ra. She did not just do that. And with him! AAAHHHHH!!! I know she's mad, but da*n. Poor Aten. I really wish that things could be better for him. The one I feel bad for though is Umi. *cuddles Umi* Just wait, things are gonna get even more intersting. I know you. This is just the beginning after all!!
 Title: aka Kura Magician Girl
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2004 02:04 CST
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An very intriguing ch you've written, but Yami ruined all the fun because of his evilness. He definitely ruined the fun part of the lemon. I can't stand his evilness to Marik and everybody else. *narrows eyes* I just realized that's the second time I'm doing that to him today. Ah well, he deserves in both stories, more than that actually. So Aku was the one who controlled Malik?!?! What?!?! That's so cruel! Poor Aten. *huggles Aten plushie* I'm glad Aten and Aria are on good terms again after the fight. This story is getting so interesting, I can't wait to read more. Didn't get to review last ch. sorry abt. that. See ya next time. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 18, 2004 15:39 CST
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Wow, that Yami needs to be put in his place for sure! Wandering around in the guise of Marik of all people... this is going to be hard for him to prove himself innocent! Everyone is gonna think he really did it! I'm so glad that Aria and Aten made up after that nasty fight... and that was a wonderful lemon with Yugi and Glenn! It would have been better if Yami hadn't been spying... please update soon!
 Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 18, 2004 11:38 CST
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You got me hooked again. I love the evil way you wrote Yami (has a weak for badguys). A part of me hopes he grows a brain and see that Yugi has REALLy moved on and the other part feel sorry for him. And aten and aria ar the best =)
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