| "Journey to Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 373 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 11:08 CST
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ruh roh. Yami Aria and Yami Aten together hunting Yami. Good chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 23:47 CST
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YAY! I can finally review now! Some fluke, huh? Well, I enjoyed your chappie, although that lemon with Aria/Umi was a bit odd. They're so young, you know? Can't stop fate, huh? I hope Aten will find the courage to tell Robbie how he feels. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 18:36 CST
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Now THAT was a good chapter!! What kind of puzzles me is, how can Aten and Robbie be intimate but not already admit love? Just a bit funky to me. ^_^ Anyways, Bakura is going to go after Umi with a shotgun if he finds out what happened between Aria and him! What fun! Erm.. sorry that my reviews are sparse! Just a busy Christmas season. Good luck with this story, and I can't wait to read more and more of it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 18:21 CST
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That was a good chapter... and a nice lemon too. Oh Bakura is going to flip out on them both! Can't wait for the next chapter! *hugs her Ryou plushie and waits for the chapter*
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:33 CST
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*blink* I think Bakura will notice quite quickly. She's gonna limp, man. Glenn's not a woman *Checks Glenn for boobs* Well.. He could be a flat woman!You never know... *Looks at Glenn's pants uneasily* Dare I tread the ground of a taken man/woman's area? I think not! I still say he's a woman, though!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 15:32 CST
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Awwww.... poor Aten....
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 11:34 CST
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Oohhhh, Bakura will KILL when he finds out! But that was such a sweet lemon... I'm so glad he was gentle with her. Although poor Aten... I can't wait until the day comes when Aten gets to pound Robbie into the floor... and if Aria can't block her emotions, then I don't think it'll be long... LOL Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset(computer problems) On: December 13, 2004 17:25 CST
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What the hell is that about at the end? If Yami hurts Marik,,,I don`t know what I would do. And what is with Yami Aten and Aku, I thought Yami Aten was okay, but now he merged with Aku and Aku is crap, unless you changed him. What is going on there? Who`s baby does Aria have first?
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: December 12, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, not Marik! *growls* I hate Yami! He better not suceed in this. The beginning of a story and already so much is happening, you are great at this. *sigh* Poor Aten, he needs a heart transplant. So now Aten has a full yami, that's interesting. Very interesting. Heh heh, guess the chibis are so much of a chibi now, are they? It's Ceres, Lily, and Ivy's turn to be chibis. lol. Wonder what Umi plans to show Aria.So Glenn knits sweaters w/ Otogi? He seems to be fitting in nicely enough. Can't wait till ur next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 20:28 CST
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*gasps* No, not Marik! I don't think that Yami's impersonation of him would be good enough... that entire house would know the difference! Right? Poor Aten... now he needs a transplant? something like that is so hard to find! I hope at least that Dr. Zira's search is worldwide... that may give a slightly better chance. Hayden's not any better? That's not good at all... I was hoping at least they'd find a way to keep him a little more mellow. *sad sigh* I'm curious to know what Aria's surprise is. I hope it's not a fish, she may not appreciate that too much... LOL Update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Drazaria On: December 12, 2004 14:14 CST
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*grabs millenium fork* Ah yes...the smell of a new story *takes a great big sniff and coughs* whoops, that too big a smell. Well i'm here to review again, and review i will. But *glares at Yami* do i have permission to poke and spear him and a couple other characters if they bug me? Please? Just one little hole?
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye (nli) On: December 12, 2004 14:00 CST
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AHHH!! Great start!! Oh, man!! I really like this already!! Glenn seems too good. Oh, well. Aten is soooooo cute! Aria and Umi sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! LOL!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:51 CST
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oh my god! o.o don't hurt Marik!!!! Nooooo...he's my favorite!!! But anyways, really great chapter! I wonder if Yami Aten will kill Yami cuz of what he does to Marik. Oooh that would be soo cool. Die Yami yay!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:47 CST
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W00t, third comment! Yami is after Marik? Nooooooooo.. And Aten has a full Yami, teehee, so much more angst to add. Glen is like Otogi?.. Is he a woman in disguise too O.o
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Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: December 12, 2004 12:45 CST
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OMG no you leave marik along you sick f*ck!!!!!! Ooh now I'm on edge after hte first chapter!! Damn... damn good fic, girl! Can't wait for hte rest too!
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